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Review of My Psalm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ruwth, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is a picture of His love for us.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem/Psalm and the poetic nuances that went with it. Your imagery is expressive, eg you are everything I need and more than I deserve. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout. Rhythm creates a flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My Little World  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sue, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems , which I found on the. public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
your poem paints a picture of your world with poetry,

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your delightful poem. Your imagery is vivid ,eg now please, just go away. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and well written. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Shoes on Trains  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi. Kobe Mitchell, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your monologues for your anniversary review. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your monologue paints a picture of the musings in life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I found reading your monologue just delightful. I would love to follow you around and tune into your imagery, eg as they ascend to the busy concourse of the city station. Your monologue iis Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Ruins  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Annalynn a Reader, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems diring our anniversary reviews. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the ruins of love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented your ruins of love of another as he ruined your love, I did enjoy reading your poem and learning what your outlook is. Your imagery is vivid and graphic, eg to ruin and be ruined. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carter Lini, II am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the publc review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture like a Quanternarnary Syncopation.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, from a poetic perspective. Your imagery is vivid, eg swift and just, our path is young. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Well written. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A writer's curse  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Brent, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is a picture which paints a picture of a writer's curse.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the ease you have with poetry day the difficulty you nave with narrative. Your imagery is vivid, eg tortured by my scatter thoughts, I couldn't get raise my dictions. Rhyme is scarrered throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Memories  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of Grandma Darbe making her own bread.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, including poetic nuances. Your imagery was vivid, eg a cold winter day, the scent of hot bread. Haiku is Unrhymed verse, and a syllable count of 5, 5,7. Precious. Rhythm creates a good word order.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Modern living  
Review by GerMac
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Brent,, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of modern living.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyoyed reading your poem with poetry nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg, Gucci or Pracci or new tires. Your poem is Unrhymed verged. Rhythm creates a good df words with read aloud.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed. Gucci or Pracco or

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Review of Eyes  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
H Dream Catcher I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of eyes.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and the poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg we can all see lies, but we close our eyes. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Very Thankful, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a ghoulish picture of Halloween. .

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem with all of the Halloween creatures. Your imagery is vivid, eg ghouls come out at night while causing such a fright. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.


*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Trying to Explain  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please Usenet on my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture, trying to explain if there is life elsewhere in the universe.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully liked reading your poem, including the poetic nuances. Your imagery is expressive, eg is there life on other planets? We can neither confirm nor deny this. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of spring  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi ElaineElaine, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you seefit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of springtime.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and all of the springtime nuances of poetry. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg, I'm anxious, but the air smells so good. Your poem is short and sweet Rhythm creates a nice flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
H Catskill Starlight, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a a picture of a excursion of camping with your family.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I reading your poem, including the poetic nuances. Your imagery is quite lovely with vivid expresses soon, eg they all drive miles and miles just to relax and see their kids smiles. Your poem is nice with very a good right pattern that is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of For Sherryllynne  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sandals, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poems paint a picture of your sister-in-law, who was taken too soon.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, especially the poetic nuances. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, there are no words to ease the unbearable break. Your rhyme pattern is consistent and well written. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Missed Good-Byes  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi inkwell scribe, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of an important who has passed in your life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading the poems and found the poetic nuances to be enjoyable too. The imagery in your poem is Expressive, eg to those I never said goodbye to, I know you're in a better place. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Rain  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi C.R. Mullings, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of what the world's like to be rained upon.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, especially with the poetic nuances I found reading your poem. The imagery of your poems is vivid and expressive, eg I miss the water from the sky because without it all does fry. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Beyond  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Bob C, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of "Beyond", structure, silence and sound.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, amidst the first poetic nuances. Your imagery is freely given, vivid and expressive, eg I could hear thumping, thought about galloping horses. a shining st Ed with a shining knight atop. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of stolen Moments  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lisa Noe, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about stolen moments in time.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including the poetic nuanced .

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Thank you  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sincnere, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review on one, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a thank you for life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem, including your poetic nuances. Your vivid and expressive comments are, eg I don't feel happy, I don't feed proud, to look at you the same way now. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joy, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of facing the music.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem, complete with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg sometimes truth can only be sung. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Apple Cart  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture defending a hands off foreign policy.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem complete with the poetic nuances involved. The imagery of your poem is graphic and vivid, eg so pick a route that's tough and stable.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim,. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the.public revieiew pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is a picture not too close to home.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Even though I lamented over your situation at home, I enjoyed reading your poem. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg one's health often equates to wealth. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words, with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems , which I found on the.public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a Halloween treat.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, right along with the poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, graphic and expressive, eg I called to see what was up. In my front yard was a huge coffee cup. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consists tent. Rhythm creates a goof flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell

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Review of "We Can"  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of honoring Veterans' on Memorial Day 2014.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem written in honor of Veterans in 2014. The imagery of your poem is vivid and graphic, eg There is no greater sacrifice than offering to pay the price of freedom for your countryman. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Well written!


*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac
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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kare Enga, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the yellow rose of Kansas.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and the poetic nuances that go along with it. The imagery of your poem are sensitive and vivid, eg the yellow rose of Kansas blooms a verdant velveteen. Your rhyme pattern consistent is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell

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