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Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our April Review Raid. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture for a freedom train trip to Tomorrowland.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I'm ready for the whoo-oo-whoo of the train trip to Tomorrowland inspired by Nathanial Hawthorne's "Celestial Railroad". I fully enjoyed your poem, as it brought back memories of a great writer of the Western Frontier.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg With a screech of steam escaping that rattles teeth still clenched in fear I feel the train begin my journey to someplace far away from here. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent with a flair of western spirit. Rhythm creates a good cadence and a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing. Write on!
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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Walknbird, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our April Power Review. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes how fair Faramir is.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about Faramir's unfair fate.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg The retreat to the White City brings Stewart of Gondor's rebuke. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Kubo  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Logan, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem for our April Raid. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of inspiration by the movie Kubo.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:.
I enjoyed reading your poem, as there are many cultural influences I enjoyed.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg Guitars weep gently on two strings, If you must blink, do it now. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi No More Rawr, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our April Review Raid. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
You poem paints a picture of Harry Potter's theme song written to the tune of Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and singing (I couldn't resist.) your Harry Potter theme song.

The imagery for your theme song is vivid and imaginative, eg Ronald the Red Haired Weasley had a very broken wand, and if he ever used it, all his spells would come out wrong. Rhyme ipattern in your poem is fairly consistent. Rhythm in this theme song has a good rhythm and musical quality.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Peter, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our April Power Review. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture inspired by a man like Javert in Les Miserables.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem inspired by Les Miserables. You make a strong statement which needs to be resolved by the reader.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg the innocent of the world must be protected. Protection requires death to the criminally suspected. Rhyme pattern is fairly consistent in your poem. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words and a strong cadence.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our April Review Raid. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for painting a picture of an all-time favorite Star Trek episode.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Thank you for the fond memories of this most popular adventures of Star Trek. I fully enjoyed reading your poem.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg think of a singing ball of bright fur, one having a bad hair day. The rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Little Gardener  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Mary Ann, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a gardener planting a garden.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem "Little Gardener", but I found your reference to singular gardener and then plural their throughout your poem was distracting.

Your imagery is expressive, eg little gardener in boots and Wellies. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Adrift  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dave, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of your muse's ideas.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Adrift", as your ideas are plucked and saved in a literary masterpiece.

Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg with thoughts of adventure and fantasy on the subconscious sea of my dreams. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of prayer for our Savior to give mankind protection and freedom on this Earth.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your spiritual blessing, asking our Lord to heal mankind and protect him from evil and the fires on Earth.

The imagery in your poem is expressive and vivid, eg Oh Lord of all creation, protect our sins of fear. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.
Suggestion/Correction:
Last line: are NOT is

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Can You See It?  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Metallica 1862, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a picture of your strong faith.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and felt hopeful and refreshed with your strong outlook on your spiritual beliefs.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg that warm white gold glow, It watches over all those who toil here below. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a nice flow of words in your poem.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Come and Gone  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Daniel, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the desire to have love come and go.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about the love which was there for the moment.

The imagery of your poem is expressive, eg the will to be, the right to pray, the right to carry on. Rhyme in your poem is sprinkled throughout. The rhythm in your poem creates a nice flow of words when read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi T.L Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture and snaps a photo in a delightful way.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and found "Lake Reflections" especially delightful.

The imagery in your poem is vivid, eg, the picture of a hardwood stand is mirrored in a wedge. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Ebb and Flow  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Daniel, am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .          

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the ebb and flow of the tides.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem, especially the message at the end of poem, which says it all!

Your Imagery is vivid and expressive, ebb and flow on crisp white shores. Rhyme in "Ebb and Flow" is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words in your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Hope  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Smores2Four, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes autumn and the hope it brings.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your thoughts of manifest destiny.

The metaphor in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg like a blanket, wrapping me in the security of self. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi I'mSorry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your letters, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your letter describes what you think about quitting.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your clever letter entitled "Give Up on Quitting" about quitting, and I agree wholeheartedly with you.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Paragraph 2: reasons NOT reason.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Spider  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Fhionnuisce, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes life with a vile little spider.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although a bit "grossed out", I enjoyed reading about your spider episodes.

Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg you're not like other craw lies. Your horrid and your vile. Your rhyme pattern is fairly consistent. The rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Mary Ann, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes St. Patrick's Day in your town, a tribute to the tradition.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem. You have captured Irish green vests, shamrocks, dancers and beer in a fun way.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg Irish dancers dressed. In green , shamrocks on every vest seen. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Line 1: St. Patrick's Day NOT St. Patricks day
Line 6: right to the Irish NOT right t the Irish

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Joto-Kai, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a respite from the reality of day.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about the comfort of the illusions of night.

The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg waves of starlight and illusion. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Masks  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi theunknowngirl, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the masks we wear.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about hiding our true feelings in society today.

The imagery used in your poem is expressive, eg you will never know what one is hiding in his wretched heart, a secret he is keeping. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Ensnared  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Starling Writer, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes birds who are ensnared and have no freedom.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem "Ensnared" about birds who have been caged too long and their song has soured. Freedom is needed.

The imagery in your poem is vivid, eg bars cage them in, they've sung too long. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a nice flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a meeting with a special stranger.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the chance meeting with a silver haired lady who could have been your mother and what transpired.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg We hugged and I walked away with a soothing sense of calm. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. The rhythm of your poem creates a smooth flow of words. Perfect message and an experience everyone would love having.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Underestimated  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Percy Goodfellow, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a girl who is underestimated.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about a girl underestimated on her skateboard.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg Underestimated she flipped the board around and twisted through the sky. The rhyme pattern of your poem is fairly consistent. The rhythm in your poem creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Poem: Fangirl  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Sterling Writer, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the struggles of being a fan girl.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the struggles of being a fan girl.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg
Storyline fills your mind
Characters fill your heart
This truly is a work of art
To all else I am blind.

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm of your poem creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Quiet Awakening  
Review by GerMac
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Pamela Sue, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of "Quiet Awakening" on your way to work in the morning.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about scenes from nature on your ride to work in the morning when all is quiet.

The imagery in your poem is expressive and vivid, eg swirling steam dances just above the water. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a nice flow of words in your poem.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of walking a line  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Rhyssa, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes your desire to find balance.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about finding balance in your life.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg the line is slack, the wind is strong andvI must step wrong. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. The rhythm in your poem creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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