You seem to be a victim in your own home. You wanted to go to school but the parents wouldnt' let you go. It must have been a hard thingo for you to want to go something so simple as go to school. I feel for you and you made a believer out of me. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing..
Oh yes there must be more to the story. I am anxious ot find out what response he has to say to you. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a reivew. You did a good job and it was such that there were no errors on the page. Keep writing.
What a wake up call tihs is. You see the destruction of this person and it is enough to make you want to do something that will help them. They are headed in a for a rude awakening and it is something that is showing. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Yo8u did a good job. It is something that shows how well youdid for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
Oh yes there is Someone looking down upon you as He is on all of us. I subscirbe to believe that there is a God in Heaven and He is watching very intentinly on the things we do. It is a tribute to Him of what you have written and it does sound super special. Keep writing/
The thing that gets me most was when you used the term wen and not when. It makes perfect sense in what you have written. But you failed to use the h in the word when and it was a turn off to me somehow. I hope thtat you understand it was a good reading and I did enjoy reading it. so, you have something in your favor. Make the correctiion and I will review it again and change the raiting. Keep writing.
What an answer to the first one I read. I Shed A Tear is the hallmark of the two and it is and was right up there with the best I have read. so, in essence it was a good reading. The second one this one is right next to it. You did well in presenting this piece of literatujre for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for it had no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
There seems to be a meeting of the minds in this piece and yet there is distance in the way that the lady feels. There is love dripping off the page. It is a quiet love and one that isnt' shared which makes it a bad thing. NO wonder you have a tear shed for her. You did well in presenting this piece of lliterature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did in having no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
This is some storry. It was a great one. My brother loves to play chess and I never learned how. It would have been a fight ot the finish though had I lleanred how to play the game. you did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no errors on the page. Keep writing.
One could see the essence of this piece. It isnt' about a bicycle or any kind of cycle. But it is of love and the way that youlove this person is strahghtforward. You made it sound so simple at the beginning and continued on to make it even more simple in the end. you did well in presenting this piece of ligteraure for the purpose of a review. You did agood job and it shows how wel you did for there were no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
Parkour is a new thing on the block. I havent' ever heard of it before this piece. You made it sound so easily to be done.. I liked this piece for I wouldnt'be able to do a trick of anything at all. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it was done so well there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
What an awfful storyto tell! You are looked upon as a die hard and as someone who have problems. It is with that I see you faulter aong the wayside... I feel for you. I really do. You made a believer out of me. I hope this isn't true but a fictioinailized piece of work. Youdid well in prsenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors on thepage.. keep writing
This is really something to read. I was just writing a werewolf story the other day and now I read this one. It was a lot better than the one I had. yo ucould get the picture from the way you used your colors to paint this piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did with no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
What a way to use authropromorphism! You did well with it. You made me believe that you were a cow to begin. That you would soon be slaughtered and used for meat. I was feeling for you and those like you that have to go throught he same thing that you went through. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. Yo udid a good job and it shows how well you will did for there are no errors on the page. Keep writing.
I can see why you didn't like the way it was. But lies are just like the ones described. They aren't for anyone to believe but they do get through a situation if planned well. It is always a lie that the Devil will tell you and you can best believe that he will never say the truth..I hope that you wil keep on writing.
The piece is melchanoly in the nature of it It is a sad piece to be sure. The suffer in silence is not a good thing to do. I think about you there being to yourself. Fearing opening you r mouth and screaming it out of helping you. You did well in presenting t his piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did ia good job nd it shows. how well you did for unlike this review yoru work was without error.s Keep on witing.
This is a morbid type piece of work. You caught yourself falling and continually falling . That isnt' good to hear. It seems that you are going to be reaching the ultimate at any moment in time. Continually falling is something that isn't very good at all. You made a believer out of me withthis piece. You did well in presenting this piece of literature fo the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did in havnig no errors found in the piece. Keep writing.
So, this was with androids. That is something for the books. to see and read. Two of them found each other in a time that love was new and cherished. However, they couldn't stauy together for they were not made for the other. You made a believer out of mefor this story was heart wrenchgin and good. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there were no mistakes found in the page. Keep writing.
What a shame for the little butterfly. You used nature's gift of abutterfly to explore life with thei metaphorically butterfly. This is a great piece and youdid so well with it. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes fround in the page. Keep writing.
Welll you got your messag across in big letters. It is something though to no smell of the roses while they are here for us to do so. Your mind is caught up in the clouds. That is a good place for it to be if you wish it being so. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no errors found on the page. Keep writing.
As far as someone holding the keys it is the Lord Jesus Himself. It is like a river I would entertain a thought of saying so. Your words were the pictures that were colored so well. you did well ni presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found in the page. Keep writing.
This wasa funny. It was strange for you to write the letter to begin but you were worried about Miles. You did well in presenting this piece of lteratutre for the purpose of a review. You did a good job and it is shows how well you did. There were no mistakes foudn in the page. keep writing. I don't see any room for improvement in this piece It is just great the way it is.
This is a great piece of work. You have taken the mondane to neights that are reachable and right to anyone's intellect. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpoes of a review. You did a good job and it shows well that you did in not having any errors on the page. You work was well done. Keep writing.
it sounds like a lazy world to me. But the things happennig in Mundandom is far better than the other choice. Vague is too vague for me to think about going into. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes ffound in the piece. Keep writing.
Oh if you and I could do that with our hearts then it would be so much better than hurting all the time. you wan to put it up on a shelf in a hidden closet. It doesn't work that way and it is there to get hurt and hurt again. So, I am sorry for that happening to you. You made a belever our of me. You did well in presenting this piece of litearture for the purpose of a review. you did a good job and it shows how well you did for there are no mistakes found on th epage. Keep writing.
It seems the shoe is on the other foot now with the ending of the story. Your piece was a poem but I call it a story for the message is full and it is something good to have read. You did well in presenting this piece of liteature for the purposeof a review. you did a good job and it shows how wel you did for there are no mistakes found on the page. Keep writing.
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