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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello NickiD89 ,

Review of Poem: "I'm A Vegetarian Vampire" 

General Comments:

A fun filled Halloween poem. I came by your port and found this intriguing title which fits perfectly, so I decided to have a look at it. I see the difficulty in writing a poem about vampires without the mention of blood. Your poem is so vampire-ish without the need to mention blood. I love the way you have brought out the blood thirst of the vampire in the fourth stanza, by mentioning really tasty red fruits such as pomegranates, cherries and strawberries, just reading those fruits make me a want to become a vegetarian vampire *Bigsmile*.

Your writing is very creative and unique. I have learnt a lot from this poem, the rhyme scheme which is a bit confusing to me, because it was a,b,a,b in some of the stanza and in some only a,b,c,b, so is it a form or just a free form poem? Just my little doubt.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Spring Is Here  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello shaara,

Review of Poem: "Invalid Item" 

General Comments:

A beautiful poem about Spring. You have created beautiful images of spring that you see through your window. You have taken me a journey that brings back some great memories of many springs that I can never forget too. I love the cute image you have on the top of the page. Spring is the season of renewing, refreshing, green and clean world.

You have written the poem with the rhyme scheme as follows a,b,a,b and this helps well with the flow and rhythm of the entire poem. Your word choice is excellent and your lines are simple and understandable. There are no mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar. Now that winter is here, I really wish spring would come soon. Thank you this beautiful,peaceful and inspiring writing.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello shaara,

Review of Poem: "Invalid Item" 

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I came by your poem when looking through your port. The title intrigued me and I'm a lover of solitude so I read your poem. I agree with you Solitude and Alone or Lonely do not mean the same. My favorite line in your poem is "I am alone, and yet, I'm not alone.". The next lines add to the beauty of the previous line, I can totally relate to this, because I love nature and being in solitude with nature. Just being still in nature and absorbing all that wonder and goodness that it offers is a great experience.

Sometimes in this busy world its hard to find solitude but when one reads such a poem as yours, I'm sure they will be taken to the journey that offers them peace. The poem follows the a,b,a,b... and the last two lines a,a as per the sonnet form and this adds to the flow of the poem along with the beautiful meaning it already has. Great writing!


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Forgetting you  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Shanna ,

Review of "Forgetting you" 

General Comments:

A poem from the heart written with pain and filled with emotion. The title is apt and so is the description below it. You have written about how you took a step that you were afraid to take, fearing the consequences. However, you took the step, and though the result was hurtful to you, you have a free mind because peace that you said what you had in your heart.

Now the only difficulty you have is in forgetting the person. I know it is the most hard thing to do, to forget someone. To try and forget someone itself means that we still are remembering them. The ache and emptiness will be too much, but we all have to try and move on. We can fill in our thoughts with other wonderful things that life holds for us or we can keep ourselves busy or we can be grateful that we had those true feelings for a person and that is the greatest feeling in the world.

I have one suggestion, you have not set the rating of the item and this will not show to all people so please do set you rating to E. Well written poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Lost on the wind  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello spidey ,

Review of Poem: "Lost on the wind" 

General Comments:

I love reading poems that capture moments in time and bring to life that moment when reading the poem. Your poem is one such beautiful moment in time. It brings the sights, the sounds and even the smells of the scene you are describing here in this poem. It gives a serene feeling and makes me want to get this place in reality as well. Your word choice and word play is excellent, you bring out complicated meanings in those simple lines there, I have to learn writing like that. I love the ending, the most peaceful yet simple words that bring out that peaceful expression,

"I pause; I breathe; I smile."

Great inspiring poetry!

Oh, and before I forget, Congrats and Happiness to your ten years of married life, hope you have a nice time and wishing you many many more years to come!


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Crimson Teardrops  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello ~WhoMe???~ ,

Review of Poem: "Crimson Teardrops" 

General Comments:

A poem that has a strong message to stop all form of child abuse. People generally only talk about or protest again the severe forms of abuse but they tend to leave out these you have mentioned in your poem here. I like how you have specifically written what it is and yet used very less words to say it.

Your title and description are just perfect and they lead me to read through this piece. The forst eight lines talk about the physical form of abuse and the last eight lines talk about the emotional and mental form of abuse. Abuse grows from the mental version to physical version and hence it is important to stop it or pluck it out from its roots. The best lines that stood out to me are,

"Cut me not
with your eyes."

These are powerful lines that speak the truth and it is also a form of abuse that people just don't see as it is.

Overall:
An excellent poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Regrets  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Legerdemain ,

Review of Poem: "Regrets" 

General Comments:
I came by your port and saw this poem on regret so I thought I might give it a read and review and here it is.

You have written the various things we regret for and you have created an entire scene or place filling it with things of regret, things done or not done. The poem is very picturesque and make me think of the things I regret as well. In the first line of each stanza, you give the location of the regret in the scene and in the second line you explain what the regret is. The rhyme scheme you have taken is a,a and the rhythm is good for all the stanzas.

The best and my favorite stanza is the last one:

"Expressed my heart, my love I should have raved.
Now it’s another risk untaken in the grave."

I think this is the most common type of regret we all have, expressing love to people. We just don't do it when its needed and later we just regret. Your poem has inspired me to take risks and never regret because its better to have tried and lost then to never have tried.

Overall:
An excellent poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Enduring Love  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello piewhackett1,

Review of Poem: "Enduring Love" 

General Comments:

I'm here to review your wonderful poem because I love reading poems on love and romance. I've heard many people talk about true love, read stories and even seen a rare few people in such a strong relationship. I wish it was like old times, where we love one person and just marry them and live happily ever after, but I guess times have changed and so have people.

Reading this poem, gives me hope that there is pure true love in the world. You have written when your love started and how you both pledged your love for each other. From what I have read I understand that your wife, the love of your life,was always there for you no matter what and also was more than all that you would have ever dreamed of.

My Favorite lines:

Loves an eternal fire that burns without lust.

That is what pure love is all about, it has nothing, absolutely nothing to do with lust. Beautiful line.

You are my best friend and my mentor.
My angel you have grace of a white dove.
I'm cool in summer, you warm my winter.


What is a lover if not a best friend and a mentor, a friend always tells you the truth and never lets you down and a mentor guides and helps you though you stumble many times. The dove is a symbol of peace, purity and also of grace and you have used a perfect comparison to describe the qualities of your wife. The last line is very nice, I wrote a poem "You are", long time back and I have a similar line in it. Your wife complements you and hence like yin and yang you are perfect and made for each other.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello piewhackett1,

Review of Poem: ""Home With Jesus Christ"" 

General Comments:

I came by your poem while looking through your port and immediately after seeing the title, I knew I wanted to read it and send a review, so here I am doing the same.

Truly what you have written here should be the way Christmas should be celebrated, we don't make a big fuss about shopping and decorating but my parents have taught us the true meaning of Christmas, which is Christ being born in each of our hearts and also in remembrance of His life here and His second coming.

Your poem says exactly what it should be, its not about the gifts and the Santa Claus, Jesus died for each of us and He is there for us always,that should be the message we send out to others during Christmas. Nowadays, its all about the showy things outside rather than the things we can do for others from our heart so we can be representatives of Christ and His way of love.

Your poem flows beautifully and give a strong message to everyone. The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,b and the rhythm is consistent in all the lines. Great writing!

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work. Keep writing.

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Review of Along Came You  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Isabella Morgan ,

Review of Poem: "Along Came You" 

General Comments:

Beautiful poem about falling in love and what happens when we do fall. In the first stanza,you have written about the feeling of doubt that arises, we doubt whether this is true and it is the real thing. So you say the doubt is flee because you just do not want to doubt this, but just enjoy being in love.

In the second stanza, you bid farewell to fear as you embrace this feeling without any fear but full of faith. In the third stanza, you invite love, I like how you describe this love as 'ageless', that's what true love is all about.

The fourth to sixth stanza, you have written about being in love and the moments in love. The fourth explains, how when two hearts are joined in love, they lose track of time, they almost make it feel like there is no need to be doing anything else in the world and there is a tremendous leap of faith.

My favorite lines are in the fifth stanza,
"... apart,
Each tick, eternity.
Open arms await you here,
granting serenity."

Truly separation is unbearable and it is like eternity when lovers are separated and the same way when they are together,there is a complete feeling of serenity. The final stanza has a perfect ending for the poem,two become one and the story just beings. The rhyme scheme and the rhythm is good and the entire poem is very well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Sight of Death  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello 13lue ,

Review of "Sight of Death" 

General Comments:

I came by your poem and read it because of the intriguing title and description you had. Many people don't talk about death, because of the fear and the mystery of life beyond death. I like reading about death and its mysteries because it helps me to live a better and useful life, well this is just for me.

In this poem you have personified Death as a man and written about the qualities about him. A very different perspective about death,the word choice is good as it reflects the dark qualities of death.

My suggestions:

You could use more punctuation,because it would ease the flow of the poem even more and add meaning to it as a whole. Since you personified death,may be you could add his personal feelings about him taking lives, or why he has to take lives and how he feels about taking lives. These are just my friendly suggestions. *Smile*


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars. Well written.

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Review of Moving On  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello RiverCat ,

Review of "Moving On" 

General Comments:

I came across your poem in the Read a newbie page, the title caught my attention and that's why I'm here to read your work. Reading your poem I was reminded of my own parents and the day I left to lead my own life. I know it is a difficult time, after having come back home everyday and being with parents and siblings, now going alone to chase the dreams of your life.
The poem is a good free form poem. The word choice is good. There is no specific rhyme scheme but the poem flows well with good rhythm. There are no mistakes in punctuation, spelling and grammar. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of All To You  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ~WhoMe???~ ,

Review of Poem: "All To You" 

General Comments:
I love reading poems about love and I'm glad I've found this poem. A beautiful poem written about how the love of your life came in without you letting in and taking you by surprize. The first stanza explains how that person came into your life and how your life was at that point. The second stanza explains that though you wanted to keep your walls and not let go, the loved was a person you cannot resist even if you wanted to. Your loved one then realized that you were the one and decide never to let go.
I like the third stanza, well I love it when emotions fill up so much that there is a swell of feelings and expressions, it is a very rare occasion when we are so happy that we cry, I don't that happens every time, but that one time is always in our mind and will stay treasured forever.
The fourth stanza tells about what your loved one did to you, he brought back your smile that radiates from the heart though you had lost it. And though you had lost all hope and become a person without feelings/or a heart to love, he showed you that you very much had a lovable heart.
The fifth stanza expresses gratitude and love for that loved person who finally brought out feelings in you that you never knew existed. To love someone is one thing but to bring out the love that we have hidden inside or rather buried inside again is an impossible task, but this person has done it. The same way to love is one thing, but to make someone feel loved and to express love in return is a very difficult task. Reading this poem makes me realize that miracles do happen, that there is true love out there waiting for each of us and there is hope for a better tomorrow. I'm happy to have read your poem, got me thinking about various things.

Overall:
An excellent poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of poem 74  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Little T ,

Review of "poem 74" 

General Comments:
A nice and inspiring poem about living everyday to the fullest. Your word choice is very good. I agree that there are too many things to be done in each day and also there are so many things that each of us can be thankful for and treasured each day. You could have used a more capturing title and a little more detailed description,this is just my little suggestion. There are no mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Forever and a Day  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello mimzi73 ,

Review of "Forever and a Day" 

General Comments:
A deep and emotional poem about love felt for the loved one. You have expressed all that you feel in your heart and have done a really good job creating a poem filled with emotions and feelings for your true love. I like your title, it was intriguing and that is what lead me to read this piece of yours, and I'm glad I read it. When everyone says I love you forever, you says I will love you forever and a day, amazing expression. A great read. There are no mistakes in grammar and spelling, however i feel that you can use more punctuation to make the poem flow better and also to intensify the total effect of the poem.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of Silence  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello RiverCat ,

Review of "Silence" 

General Comments:
A beautiful poem capturing a moment in time. I love poems on nature and how simple moments like these make life worth while. Your title and description are very good and they fit well with the content of your poem. The word choice is very good and you have used the perfect words at perfect places to bring out the peaceful feeling felt as one watches the scene described here. Your writing is very picturesque and you share your emotion with the reader and make them wonder and thank for each day is unique and no moment is the same as the next. There are no mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Great writing, love your poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello The Poetic Bard ,

Review of "A Bullet Just Flies...." 

General Comments:
I came to read your poem after seeing the rather intriguing title and I'm glad that I read it. The poem is about a person who kills without considering who is dying or where his actions lead. The poem has excellent flow and this is because of the word choice as well as the punctuation you have used at precise places. As I was reading I was wondering how you would end this, and I see you have ended it with a revenge that this person rightly deserves. You have managed to rhyme the words and also provide a uninterrupted story. Well written.

My Favourite Lines:
I liked the captivating first and last stanza
"A bullet just flies
It has no eyes
It doesn't care
where
it's going.... "

Suggestions:
In the third stanza, you ask a question "When he took aim, did he care you had a name." I think it should end with a question mark.
In the third stanza, the last line "staring into the sky", should be starring.

These are just my friendly suggestions, ultimately you are the author and its your work. *Smile*

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Man in Armour!  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Mango ,

Review of "Man in Armour!" 

General Comments:
A beautiful love poem and dedication to the one you love. In the first paragraph, you have written the qualities that your loved one has. The second and third paragraph you have explained how he makes you feel and all the ways he is strong for you and also for giving you hope and love. The final paragraph/stanza you have explained why you do not need a man in armour because you have found yours and have expressed your love here. Altogether a lovely poem that I think should be gifted to that special one.
You have maintained a very good flow by giving punctuation at places needed. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of What is Love?  
Review by Princess Zelda
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello SoLost ,

Review of "What is Love?" 

General Comments:
A well written free form poem. I like how you start your poem, your word choice and ordering very good and you have used assonance throughout the poem. It is true how love is a feeling experienced by an individual and it is thus a song sung alone by one person. Yes,sometimes it does leave us all frustrated. Bringing the feeling to a balance is the trick and I don't think it could ever be brought to a balance, its either there or its not there. I would also say that it is the most beautiful yet most misunderstood feeling in the world.

Favourite Lines
Many a song have been written ‘bout love
I'd say its not a rhyme of raging rapture,
nor a dirge of dying dreams..

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Poem "BROKEN SAILS: A sonnet-- Winner" :

General Comments:
A thought provoking poem about what happens when we regret too late in life. I found it very different from the other poems submitted to the contest and so it has won the "1st Prize". Congrats!!

Overall:
An Excellent poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of "Poetry is a Calling" :

General Comments:
When poetry calls I do answer it and yes there no other great feeling that to be writing a poem. It becomes an extension of myself and hence it release me into various realms I have never been.My answer to all those questions would be yes, yes and yes! Poetry, I mean atleast what I write is sometimes the only thing I find myself to happy and alive about.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in poem, it flows the explained form and is perfect with the syllable counts and also the question and the answer pattern of the poem is very nice. I am new to this form and when I get time I will have to try out as many of the forms I see here in WDC.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
"A poetic heart soars high." It sure does. *Smile*

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Mom  
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Hello JACE ,

Review of "Mom" :

General Comments:
This is such a beautiful poem. The form is perfectly followed and the picture formed from it is a like a flower petal, similar to the features of a mother. A mother who is always there for you, to support you and guide, is a great treasure and should be valued forever. The poem depicts the feelings of your daughter to her mother, a strong understanding lies in depth of the relationship. Wonderful writing!

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem, it follows the double etheree form and flows flawlessly.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:

"You taught me the best
comes from within."

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of Impossible Dawn  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello DonnaB~On a Roll! ,

Review of "Impossible Dawn" :

General Comments:
This a inspirational poem that gives courage to those who are down there and just need to hold on because success is right around the corner that we tend to give up. I myself am currently in an Impossible Dawn situation myself and this poem reassures to me that I should never give up.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
I like how you made two very identical stanzas to express the same message.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of Stormy Seas  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Word Whisperer ,

Review of "Stormy Seas" 

General Comments:
This poem is about a person's struggles in the life. A great way of showing the readers that struggle by giving a visually picturesque way of telling/showing it. Once again get choice of words and good flow. The poem gives a sad tone and I would like to say no matter how hard the going might seem, there is always a better day a good end to the story and 'This too shall pass'. Keep writing.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern in the poem and this is a free form poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
Once again a perfect ending for a great poem.
"Two apathetic oars both silent, is a lost soul inside?"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Hello Scotty1615 ,

Review of "Blue Moon (haiku 5-7-5)" 

General Comments:
Beautiful haiku. Word choice and flow is excellent. You have made the haiku perfectly following the syllable count. Very well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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