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Review of "Fire Frogs" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

Okay, so I found an egg and that's why I'm here to review this item too.
I enjoyed reading this fun and fantasy poem about the fire frogs. I can see from the bold words that you were given a prompt to use all the words and have absolutely done it without any feel of it being forced into place. Nice story in the poem too. Well written.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "A Bad Day in Rotterdam" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

Hey, I found another egg hiding in your item and I'm reviewing it.

The poem is about a imagination about what happens if everything going wrong on the day you visit Rotterdam. A free verse poem written well. I like how you finally do let us know that everything going completely wrong is a statistically impossible thing.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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~Princess Zelda


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Review of "Peach Pit Meditation" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

Hey, I found an egg hiding in your item and am here to review it.

The poem is about getting some spiritual thoughts while eating a peach. I never have thought how God would have felt at the moment of creation, something to think about. A well written poem.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "OOOPS!" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A fantasy poem about what happens when your ex-husband finds out that you have really moved on and found a loved one to marry. I mean reading this made me think whats with some people cause they want us to be happy only with them and if we ever as smile when we are with someone else , they go all crazy. The poem is well structured and well written.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "Mother's Prayer" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

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I am so grateful to God and thankful to you for writing this. It has really impacted me. I have been a tugging and begging kid to God and have got into much trouble because of that. It is true that everything done in God's time is perfect for us and we just have to wait. I have been waiting for a change and praying for it for almost two years now and I can feel that God has already tested my patience plenty times in this time and because of my past experiences in hurrying and deciding, this time I let it take time. I'm very sorry for your situation Ida, please know that through everything He is there with you. Since you wrote this some years back, I hope you're much better now. I'm glad to have read this and if there's anything you want me pray for I'd be happy to.
Once again, I'm glad that you wrote this and God has spoken to me through this.


Overall

I am giving it 5 stars.

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~Princess Zelda


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Review of "A New Adventure" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A simple and short poem about the start of a day. I love how your brought rhymes into those two very short lines. I like your description under the title which brought me to read this work of yours. I should say that I'm a little bit disappointed because I hoped for a longer poem describing the beauty of the morning. This however was sweet and short, I like the second stanza, very nice imagery and picturesque. Well written.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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~Princess Zelda


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Review of "87 Sadnesses" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

I love this poem because of the depth of meaning and truth you bring about what happens when we are surrounded by 87 sadness or more as you have written here in this poem. I like the fact that you brought out what happens after the sadness engulfs us. Acceptance is an important part of the cycle and without which we are bound to repeat and fall into the same routine of sadness and problems. Acceptance and forgiveness go hand in hand and these are very important for the process of healing and a peaceful life with one self. Great inspiring and thought provoking poem.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in poem. This is a free verse poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and that is why I picked out this particular poem to read.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. These are just my friendly suggestions.

My Favourite Lines

"where I can accept the worst and know that the hurt will not destroy me
where acceptance cleanses and again I will smile, for myself.
here. now. where it is possible."

This is absolutely true and no matter what our situations might be it is important that we smile with all our heart.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "Lies" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A poem about the loved one lying to you. At first, it is quite difficult to see the lies and understand the deception behind the words and deeds of a person. However, we soon see the truth and then no matter what they try to make u we can see the mask people try to wear. Surely we just want them to be open to us and to be their true selves with us but there is always a deeper problem that people face, that lead them to act in such ways. I have been with such people and have learnt that their past experiences make them that way. Thank you for a very nice and thought provoking poem.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. These are just my friendly suggestions.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "Destination" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem is about reaching one's destination and the various paths taken to do so. The first stanza explains how when the sun is up and everything is happy, reaching a place seems easy and fun. The second one explains how when the days are dark, there is no way that we can see the way ahead and safely reach our place. The third stanza explains a travel alone and how the poet is amazed at the wonders of the world. Finally you reach the destination but then on another day you drove away from your destination.
The poem is very thought provoking, it makes me think about perseverance and fighting for what we love to do or achieve in life. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in a,a,b,b,and so on. This is a free verse poem with a rhyming scheme.The flow is excellent and there is good choice if words.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and that's what drew me to read this poem.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines

"Saw faces in a cloud,
Thoughts rose loud.
Began to wonder
Whose spell I was under"

Moments like these make life worth living!

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of "Hanakotoba" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A wonderful poem bringing a story into it just the use of flower names. The flowers were sewn into the poem without any difficulty and reading it brought out all those hidden meaning that made the poem very powerful because of the message it portrays. Amazing writing indeed!

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. This is a free verse poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and that is what drew me to read your poem and I'm glad that I did.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda


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Review of "The Wrong Day" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A poem about forgetting your mom's birthday by one day. This has happened to me as well. We had planned a big surprise for the next day and after we brought things and were beaming with joy, we realized that it was her birthday, that very same day! Your poem is simple and fun to read. Makes the reader think of various incidents that were similar to this in their lives. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem because it conforms to the Nonet form of poetry. The syllable count in each line is perfect and flows well.

Overall

A very good poem and I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!




~Princess Zelda

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Hello A. Powell

Review of "Deciphering Love" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A well written poem about the stages at which we encounter the word love and what it means at each age. In the first stanza, as a child what would we know about love, nothing totally. As you have written here, we are handed with a set of jigsaw puzzles and we are left to figure out what love is. In the second stanza, you tell how the first time of falling in love can be staring with the crush to the heartbreak. In the third stanza, you talk about the many experiences we have in falling in and out of love. In the fourth stanza,you tell how that through all those experiences we tend to feel that there is no way we could ever fall in love. In the final stanza, you tell how against all feeling there came that one man who brought love and he loved everything you loved too.
I like the way you have italicized certain words to add the depth and fun to the poem. I also like you how you have separated each stage. Interesting and unique poem.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in poem. This a free verse poem with a very good word choice and good flow to it.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and apt to the content.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!




~Princess Zelda

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Hello Adrian George Nicolae

Review of "Love" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A simple poem talking about the meaning of love. You have brought out what is love in the first stanza. You have written that only if there is a perfect balance of sorrow and happiness. I like how you wrote in the third stanza that when it comes to love it overlooks everything else. The wonderful opposites you've written in the last stanza is very true. Well written. Thank you for your entry to the contest. Wishing you all the best.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in the poem. The form is free form poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!




~Princess Zelda

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Review of "My Own Piece of Heaven" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A wonderful poem about the place of peace you have as you are taking a vacation with your family. I can see that you have used visuals and imagery for bringing out the scenes. The word choice and flow is very good. Thank you for entering your poem for the contest. Wishing you all the best.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. I like how every stanza ends in the word heaven. I'm trying to find if it belongs to any form but I can't see it does.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


My Favourite Lines

"The delighted smiles, our alliance forged, the family bond made firm
The world is elevated here in my own piece of heaven."

The perfect scene of peace when a home is filled with love.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!




~Princess Zelda

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Hello Rose

Review of "Beyond The Grave" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A sweet romantic poem about how love lives even after death. The word choice is good and the flow is also good. Each line signifies and brings out the sweet exchanges that happen between two dead souls. I like how you compared life like forms with love in them. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. This is a free verse poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well, I personally feel its an apt title and the description below is interesting and that's what lead me to read your poem today.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines

"Forever undead is where they rest"

This gives hope for such a love in each of lives.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of "Vision of Provenance" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A good fantasy type poem about how you're with God and sees the joining of two souls. The word choice is good. The flow is also very good. There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting. I like how the word "Still" No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

~Princess Zelda

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Review of "To Savannah the love I know." 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

Beautiful poem written from the heart. The word choice is good. There is good flow.
There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme. So this is a free verse poem. The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting. No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

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Review of "Fairytale" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

I came by your port to read something and found this lovely poem. I love fairy tales, well, which girl wouldn't, right? Your poem is original and expresses the story of a maiden or girl who awaits her prince charming.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern of the form a,b,c,b and this is followed very well in the poem and this also helps with the flow of the poem. Apart from this, the poem is a free verse one.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well.

Suggestions and mistakes

A small typo: "solice" in the last stanza should be "solace"

In the place of the description you have put down the keywords, there is a separate column for keyword and in the space for the description you could put a small lines describing the poem.

I would suggest you to use punctuation at appropriate places to bring out the better depth in line and also for the better understanding and impact of the poem.These are just my friendly suggestions.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of "Fear." 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem is about fear and the different types of fear we all encounter. The poem is dark and scary talking about death and all. The word choice is good and the flow is also good. The end makes one definitely scary and think about the things that each of us fear. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. This is a free form poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. I would suggest that you change the rating of the item to something higher with words death and live burial it would be better if the rating was higher. These are just my friendly suggestions.

Overall

A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

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Hello Michael

Review of "Heartbeats" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A painful and true poem about getting cheated in a relationship and hence it is lost. Sometimes we fall for all the lies and though we know they are lies we just ignore them because of the love and connection we think there is between the two people. At one point we feel like they can have our very life, very breath and as you have said here, our every single heartbeat. Well written. True from the heart.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. These are just my friendly suggestions.



My Favourite Lines

"For I am lost in the promise of what might be,
what never was."

Sometimes there is nothing in the promises made, they are not kept and will not be kept. They are just a bunch of lies meant to make you fall for.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

Hello Sum1

Review of "The Jester" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem opens in a quiet, dark stage and everything that is written in the poem is what happens when the jester finishes his performance. The poem to me was like a few important scenes from a movie in slow motion with depth into the main character's thoughts. The imagery is great, I can almost stand there with the Jester and feel what he feels. The role of the Jester is to bring smiles to people and children, to make them forget everything else for those minutes spent with him. Bringing smiles to them is a great reward for him and he feels good because he helps them forget their pain and sickness.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern of the form a,a,b,b. Some lines have internal rhymes which add more punch to the poem. The rhythm is good with 12 and 13 syllables randomly placed. The flow is very good.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines

"Slowly and thundering, like a rolling tidal wave,
The clapping begins for the performance he gave"

Reading these lines made me think of how the Jester would have felt when he received this applause. Also it made me imagine how it would be if I were there instead of the Jester and to receive that recognition for making people happy. This poem surely does bring a lot of insight into my life as well. I'm going to read all the poems in the Jester series cause its very unique, the poem, the story and I guess reading it would be like a Poetry Novel (if there is such a thing), well you created it.

Overall

An excellent poem that deserves all that stars. I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

Hello Sum1

Review of "The Jester Created" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

A poem about the friendship of two young boys and where each of their lives lead. The purpose of each boy is different but somehow interconnected. Josh becomes the reason behind the greatness of Cam, he was the sacrifice for the success and fame of Cam. The poem starts well with the introduction of the characters and the relationship they have. The poem ends well too, by showing the purpose of that friendship and also the final decision taken by Cam to become the Jester.
The poem flows beautifully from the beginning to the end. It didn't seem like I was reading a poem or looking for rhyme and rhythm as this was a poem hidden inside the story. The narration is very good because it kept me occupied and interested till the end.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in the poem of the form a,a,b,b. I am at awe seeing how beautifully you brought the rhymes without disruption of the story or the flow. Not one rhyme seem like they have been forced into the place. There is a mix of syllable counts like 10,11,12 which are close enough to give a good consistent rhythm throughout the poem.

Title and description

The title fit the content because it explains what can be found in the poem and what the poem is about. The description explains the important transformation that happens in this part of the story.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.


My Favourite Lines

"Til then; live, love, and make people smile,
Together we’ll walk, that final mile."

These lines are encouraging and inspiring. The final words spoken by Josh have so much truth, love and care for Cam. There is wonderful imagery in the last line, like two best friends walking towards the sunset, just as their life together come to a stop as well.

Overall

An excellent poem that deserves all the stars. I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

Hello irregular_onion

Review of "Apathy - A Poem" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem expresses the feelings opposite to apathy and the poet explains that the world does not care about others and this is the main theme of the poem. The word choice and the flow is good. And don't worry I'm not going to sue you. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem as this is a free form one.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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Review of "Looking Through Windows" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem expresses sadness and regret as a friend moves away from you due to decisions taken in her life and due to her circumstances. The poem brings out the feelings of concerned friend who used to be close to her and now is moving far away because of this. The times they were together and the separation that they experience now is explored and described here in this poem. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. This is free form poem with a good choice in words and a good flow.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and summarizes the content of the poem.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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Hello PandorasBox

Review of "Surrender" 

General Comments and Emotional Impact

I came by your poem on the New Random Review page and I'm glad I did. I love reading poems on love and romance and so you should know I love reading your as well. Love is as terrifying as it can be and yet as sweet as it can be.
In the first paragraph you say how love is a mixture of two feelings the sweetness and also the unknown fear of letting your guard down to someone. In the second paragraph you have written how though you've been alone and like it always, now there is pair of mischievous eyes are drowning you. In the third stanza, you write how that single simple makes the darkness vanish and though you're fighting to give in, the single kiss is nothing less than bliss.
In the fourth stanza you write how time means nothing when its love. In the fifth stanza,you explain how you feel so completely lost and defeated which you have never felt before. In the sixth stanza, you finally give up, surrender with no other choice after having fought rebelliously all this while. In the seventh stanza, you write about the confusion you're having whether to give up and risk the fear of hurt or to not give in but kill the feeling that you have. the last stanza, shows your final and total surrender to love and to the person you love.
The poem is so full of dense emotions, pain, anger, doubt, bliss and love. Amazing writing! Keep up the good work!

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern in the poem of the form, a,a,b,b, and this works well with the entire poem and the flow of the poem, The word choice is also good.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and is apt and the description below is interesting and it goes well with the content as well,giving a intriguing feeling to the reader, reeling them to come and read the entire poem.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. A small typo in stanza 5,line one, where "i" should be in upper case letter.

My Favourite Lines

"Do I flee from you and destroy my heart?
Risk staying and have you rip it apart?
All I know is your touch is a brand on my soul,
That against all odds love has swallowed me whole."

Love the complex emotions expressed here in the above lines, intense, deep and true emotions.

Overall

A very good poem that deserves a lot, so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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