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Review of Perception

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello Oriana ,

Review of "Perception"

General Comments:

A Diatelle poem about Dreams and perception. The poem speaks about seeing a person/ a loved one when in reality the loved one is no more. I know it is always hard to maintain rhyme, form and bring a message in the poem,but this one pulls it of very easily. Well written.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern of the Diatelle form and the rhyme scheme is mentioned in the poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of The sea never the same

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: ASR

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Hello mars ,

Review of Poem: "The sea never the same"

General Comments:

A poem about the sea and changes in her. The sea is calm and quite as she floats to and fro from the shore but when the storms come she is changed into a harsh woman. The word choice and flow are very good. The poem ends by saying how the sea is never the same because of the storm. Well written.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem, and the poem does not look like it belongs to any particular form so I consider it as a free form one.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Till The End Of Time

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Rated: E

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It is your account birthday this month, so I just thought I'll drop in for a review or two.

Hello Lorna Dune ,

Review of Poem: "Till The End Of Time"

General Comments:

A emotional and painful poem about the passing of a loved one.the first stanza spoke to me personally in so many ways that I could repeat those same words sharing those same feelings as well. Well written.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem,but the poem flows beautifully. A few lines rhyme while others don't hence this is a free verse poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
The entire fourth stanza is very romantic, filled with love and devotion. The assurance that everyone who lost their loved one has is that the memories and thoughts of them can never be erased.
"The memories remain.
oh so clear and fine.
My thoughts of you
will remain forever mine. "

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

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Review of My First Love

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Rated: E

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Hello DarkStarr ,

Review of Poem: "My First Love"

General Comments:

The poem speaks about the first love of the poet. I kept expecting a boyfriend, lover or husband but this came to me as a pleasant surprise indeed. All the lines you've written are true from the heart and I'm sure that it can be taken as a fact as well. Your poem shows your love and devotion towards your Grandfather and also the way your respect, adore and cherish every moment you've spent with him. Personally I've not spent much of my childhood with my grand parents to know much about them, I consider it a blessing to have known your grandfather so much. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and keep writing!

Form:
There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme. The poem does not conform to any particular form and hence it is a free form poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
To know that your Grandfather is a strong reason for you to keep your head up and not give up shows how much he proved himself to be a role model for you.

"One half of my reason to press on through trials and confusion.
One half of my drive to continue through this hellish place."

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

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Review of Winter's Breath

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Rated: E

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Hello Shannon ,

Review of "Winter's Breath" :

General Comments:

A lovely romantic poem. The lines in one sense speak of the cold winter and the snow flakes but in actual sense they speak of the kiss. Your word choice is excellent and they bring feelings and emotions of warmth and love when reading this poem. Beautiful writing!

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting. The title and the last line of the poem mean a lot to me.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
The love the entire poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Souvenirs of Love

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Rated: E

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It is your account birthday this month, so I just thought I'll drop in for a review or two.

Hello eyestar~* ,

Review of "Souvenirs of Love" :

General Comments:

The poem is very beautiful and it brings about the sweetness and fragrances that each flower here provides. Your word usage is simple and yet they bring a great impact and create lovely imagery. The poem is a slow one which adds more to the romance of the words mentioned here. To me, reading it brought out the scents, the scenes and warmth such gifts would create. Splendid writing!

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem but the poem flows very well with just the magic of words.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. The first letters of every stanza could be in upper case but it depends on the poet, because there may be a reason as to why they are all in lower case letters.

My Favourite Lines:
The prefect ending or shall I say trail you gave at the end of this poem.
"Love always leaves a trail"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801635

Review of Meeting Him

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Rated: E

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Hello Sum1 ,

Review of "Meeting Him" :

General Comments:
A lovely narrative poem about the day you met Santa. You have described and narrated the story so well in a poem with excellent flow and rhythm. The poem has a calm feeling to it and assures the reader of a good ending.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern in the poem of the form a,a,b,b and this suits very well with the poem when being read out load.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. Everything is in the right place.

My Favourite Lines:
"I stood next to him, looking at the holiday rush
I felt his hand on my shoulder, in a hug I was crushed"
Strong emotions expressed here.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801631

Review of In The Heart

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Hello sunnystarr,

Review of "In The Heart" :

General Comments:

Beautiful, simple and true words written about the heart. It is true how the heart knows the truth about everything and even some things that we deny are true. When our mind gets all confused our heart will guide is clearly. It is where the treasure and deepest secrets of our lives dwell. Our strength and truth about ourselves lie in our heart too. Great writing!

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem but it flows well with rhythm.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
"For In the heart love can grow,
In the heart tells who we are. "

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801628

Review of Southern Sentiments c-Note Shops

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello warriormom,

Review of "Southern Sentiments c-Note Shops" :

General Comments:
The c-notes collection is wonderful and vast. you have everything needed for the season and also for day to day messages. All the images are unique, clear and match the words written on them. Great work!

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Overall:
A very good one so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801626

Review of Describing Women

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello billwilcox,

Review of "Describing Women" :

General Comments:

Wow! This is so creative and beautiful. The words used are apt and very well arranged. I can't imagine how you managed to write this without mentioning words "she, her, woman, female, girl" but you did so a great job.

Form:
There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. The poem flows well with rhythm.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. Your vocabulary is vast and reading this made me learn some new words.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801594

Review of Times, They Are A-Changin'

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Rated: E

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Hello Winnie Kay ,

Review of "Times, They Are A-Changin'" :

General Comments:

A fun and light poem about the changing times and the changes that it has brought to the Church. I remember having to carry a hardbound copy of the Bible compulsory to the church when I was a kid, but today a smartphone with the BibleApp is all you need. I like the way you describe the youth of the generation and they way they fail to be formal at the church.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern of the form Interlocking Rubaiyat Quatrain -- Iambic Tetrameter and it fits so very well and flows exceptionally with the message of the poem.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:

"“Whazzup,” sings boist’rous disrespect.
‘You’re in a church!’ my eyes decry."

I can recollect many such incidents that happen at my church too.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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#3801587

Review of Pause the World

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello ShellySunshine ,

Review of "Pause the World" :

General Comments:

A lovely poem depicting how if the world could be paused, the poet could stay as a little girl forever with no worries about the future, the pain or the suffering that comes by being an adult. The poem talks about the warmth, comfort and fun it is to be a little girl surrounded by a loved one always. Beautifully written.

Form:
There is rhyming pattern in some lines while the other lines do not rhyme. However, the poem flows very well.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines:
"Pause the world and rest your eyes
because we can live like this forever"
These lines are applicable to anyone having a splendid time at some point in their life and wanting to pause that moment and live in it forever.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Messages of Motivation

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello GabriellaR45 ,

Review of "Messages of Motivation" :

General Comments:
These c-notes are unique, simple and motivational. They are beautiful because something in each picture is brought to the focus, such as the flower or the tree and the single wording written also goes very well with the entire picture. The amount of GPs one has to spend to send one of these is also very cost effective. Great collection!

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting.

Overall:
A very good one so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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Review of Acrostic poem 'Mental Health'

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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Hello Oriana ,

Review of "Acrostic poem 'Mental Health'"

General Comments:

This is a beautiful acrostic poem. There is no much meaning and depth in the poem. You talk about how man is flawed and also he is made up of mistakes and that's how the way of life is. It is true how though life is hard, we hope for a better future and keep pushing forward. I like the first three lines of the second stanza, the usage of words like dawn and dusk is very interesting and gives a great more depth to simple lines.

Form:
There no is rhyming pattern in the poem but the poem flows so well.

Title:
The title fits the content very well and the description below isgood, you could add a brief description of the poem as well.

Any Mistakes:
No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favorite Lines:
"Hard is the journey, yet each turn brings delights
Each twist a reminder of the dawn breaking"

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of Reminiscence

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello Nej ,

Review of "Reminiscence"

General Comments:

A simple and short poem about children and the carefree life they have. The poem here pictures a scene and the it brings the scene alive by using the emotions smiles, laughs, love and joy. I sometimes wish the same you wish here, to be like a child again. Well written poem.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of Dream

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello born-san ,

Review of "Dream"

General Comments:

A beautiful poem narrating a dream and a wake up into reality. The dream is almost like reality sometimes and even when we wake up, we feel that we are in the dream and it felt so real and true, this poem is such a poem. I like how you ended the poem, the last stanza shows how when you wake up in reality, the love is there and that make a prefect ending to the poem. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of My love and apple pie

Review by Princess Zelda

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Hello cuckoo ,

Review of "My love and apple pie"

General Comments:

A poem about true love. The poem narrates a scene of what happens as the wife/lover prepares a dish for her husband/lover. She prepares herself to completely satisfy her lover and she makes an apple pie, however even the mistakes she makes at preparing a perfect dish ends up as a show of what true love is all about. Nice narration and poem, well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of Shattered

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Review of "Shattered"

General Comments:

A simple poem about how even when you gave your heart to someone, they don't love you and choose someone else over you. The title fits the content of the poem and the content has no mistakes in spelling, grammar or punctuation. Well written.

Overall:
A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of For You

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Sebring Nicole Raihne ,

Review of "For You"

General Comments:

Thank you for your entry to the Expressions of Emotions Poetry Contest.

This poem is very beautiful in expressing the emotions mentioned here. I can almost relate to the story that this poem says. I like it how you write a sentence in one line and the emotions in the next line, it intensifies and deepens the emotion experienced by just that sentence alone. The entire poem tells a story of how you love someone but the person you love is full of lies,anger and is blind to your love or may be even ignoring your love, towards the end the poet is set free as the person who is loved is let go and finally there is a peaceful sense of feeling. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of The Cycle Continues

Review by Princess Zelda

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Welcome to WDC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

Hello MF ,

Review of "The Cycle Continues"

General Comments:

A true poem about how mechanical we people really are. I think we most of the time fake for many reasons, we try to make things better by faking it, to show others that we are alright, because the reality might be too painful or shameful to show. I like how you have ended the poem, with a question that answers itself, we can only be freed if we accept and admit our problems to people who will not judge or criticize us but accept us as we are and help us out. Your poem made me think about a lot of things, a lot of people I've met and mainly about myself, how fake am I really?

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of Changing of Seasons in You Face

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: E

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Hello Becky Davenport ,

Review of "Changing of Seasons in You Face"

General Comments:

A beautiful poem on love describing the one you love. I like how you've used so many colors to bring out the qualities of your loved one. And you have used the seasons to describe as well, very nicely brought together a lovely love poem. There is small spelling mistake I noticed, "a small flciker remains" which should be "flicker". A wonderful poem with lovely expressions of love. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of Pink L.L. Bean Jacket

Review by Princess Zelda

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Hello Morgan Cleary ,

Review of "Pink L.L. Bean Jacket"

General Comments:

The title is apt and intriguing. It fits well with the content of the poem. The poem flows well with the story to tell, sometimes we take people for granted and only separation brings out the real truth to us. Here in this poem, you explain how your sister and you grew up together and how she was always there and though you always didn't want her being there always, she wanted it. Now after you hear someone speak about his loss you want to be with your sister. Love the way you brought the story, a lesson for many of us to learn. Truly written from the heart, this poem. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of The Bible

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: ASR

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Hello Football Fan ,

Review of "The Bible"

General Comments:

A short and simple poem about Bible and what it is to you. The Bible surely teaches us a lot, it has the answers to all questions we have, but seldom do we search it to find the answers. Personally I should read and mediate more because its the truth and the truth always sets us free. The poem flows well and gives a simple yet strong message. There are no mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation, you have done a great job.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda

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Review of MIA GRACE

Review by Princess Zelda

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Rated: 13+

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It is your account birthday this month, so I just thought I'll drop in for a review or two.

Hello Meg ,

Review of Poem: "MIA GRACE"

General Comments:

This a beautiful and true poem. Each of our needs and desires for each day are different from another person and I like how you say that with the example of the sky and our day. My father is in agriculture and he is happy when he sees and hears the news of rain but to me, a raining day is the worst day with the queues everywhere, the traffic and the get wet though you try your best not to. As you have written here, God answers all prayers but His answers are Yes, No and Wait.

Personally, I've always had a Yes for most of the prayers but then when Wait and No came it was the hardest thing ever, I still am with a Wait signal from Him. In the second poem which continues in a different color, you have explained why you wrote the first and I see the comfort you are trying to give to the parents who have lost their baby girl. I believe its easy to say "God gives and He Takes" but when He really takes, we question Him, Why? Why us? Why now? a lot of whys? I have asked these same questions, but now I realize that it was for my own good and also to bring out the qualities in me that I had thrown away, to get more closer to God.

You have managed to write this in free form but with the rhyme scheme of a,a,b,b, which works well with the flow of the poem. Best thing I like about your poem,is that you have brought out the depth of emotions in it, without plainly writing the pain and also without using strong words like death, a beautiful and sad poem written about Mia Grace~ Born Sleeping.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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