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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review of That's impossible  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. I agree with most of this, but seeing what harm comes to people and entire communities without environmental regulations, I can't stand behind a libertarian mindset fully. I wish I didn't have to file paperwork to homeschool my son when he turns 6, but I'm also aware that some people who shouldn't be homeschooling would choose to do so if it was easier to file the paperwork for it. I'm actually not trying to do full homeschooling. I want an independent study plan that will allow my son access to the playgrounds that are within walking distance of our home but always locked up. Filing the paperwork for full homeschooling is a last resort for me.

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Review of The Broken Vase  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was very satisfying to read, and the ending was pure gold!

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I've seen a lot of these from a girl's perspective, but I can't recall ever seeing one from a boy's perspective. I think that would be an angle worth exploring.

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Review of Coping  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a lovely story. I love how the matron stood up for her in the end.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. The older I get, the more I crave peace and quiet like this.

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Review of still  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This reminds me how I should get out in nature more often to relax. Well, at least I have trees on my curtains.

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Review of Fragile  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

It sounds like your parents are not doing a good job helping you to handle your emotions. I recommend looking into self-parenting. You're already off to a good start writing down your feelings!

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Review of A real nightmare  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was interesting information presented in an engaging manner.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of RADIO ASTRONOMY  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of What Am I?  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Unless a grain of wheat shall fall upon the ground and die . . . that's one of my favorite songs from church. Thank you for reminding me of these things.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This makes me nostalgic for my dating days. I think the most important thing about dating is having shared goals. There's a vague reference to standards, but what are they, specifically? Standards often refer to physical appearance, income, and other superficial metrics. Goals go deeper than standards, and many people don't wind up discussing goals until it's too late. The beauty of online dating is the ability to put one's goals at the forefront.

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Review of Dark Side of Love  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Love indeed has a dark side. I blame our evolutionary heritage, yet I also look to it for answers. When we understand more about how we got to the place we are at now, we can talk more openly and celebrate the processes that led us here in consensual ways.

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Review of U-224  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very intriguing scenario. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

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Review of Training Camp  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This makes me nostalgic for my high school years. After winter awareness training with Scouts, all I wanted most was get into a sleeping bag with someone who wanted to keep me warm.

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Review of Intro  
Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Agents are sand in the gears. I say keep writing from your heart. Go where your heart leads, and that passion will continue to shine through your work.

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've created an intriguing scenario with vibrant characters. Keep it up!

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Review by K5Rakitan
Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is fascinating. I wish my childhood cat was still alive so I could test a wet toothbrush on him.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing this rich piece of geologic history. It makes me nostalgic for my geology courses.

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