I love your poems of nature and the seasons. This one is just lovely with the descriptions you use eliciting beautiful images of seasons past. I like the atmosphere of this poem. The feeling that everything is being laid to rest and calmly brought to a close. That is another aspect of your poetry I like very much is the serene feel of many of your pieces. It's the vivid pictures that spring to mind because of this poem that really get me. Bravo.
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This poem is so powerful and poignant. It expresses quite eloquently my own feelings of deception. In my family we call it "putting on the show." We all put on "airs" to blend into society and not call attention to our own uniqueness. Another great poem, I am becoming a serious fan. Well done.
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Wow, I can't get over what a stark contrast between this winter poem and the tranquility of the winter graveyard poem. The images this poem generates are just brutally shocking, winter goosestepping marching over summer. These are the harsh winter times we hate to see arrive.
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I love this poem. You capture the essence of falling leaves perfectly. The lines about the leaves forming patterns on the ground that look like jigsaw puzzle pieces is just genius. I never thought of it that way but that is a brilliant description of a blanket of leaves. This is just a wonderful Autumn poem. Bravo.
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This is a just a beautiful serene poem. The peace of final rest combined with the tranquility of a winter's day is just lovely. Everything about this poem just exudes calm and stillness of the soul.
I love the lines:
No sleigh bells ring
To Remind the dead of living things.
The profundity of that statement just sends chills down my spine. Great poem, I really enjoyed it.
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I really like the matter of factness of this poem. It is about death and decay but you make no apologies whatsoever about it. You tell it like it is straight and to the point. I like that even though there is no sugarcoating the descriptions of the graveyard it still presents a dignified face. I love the line:
Continue to unearth receptive holes
Maybe its just me and I do tend to have a morbid side but I find this line kind of inviting and warm. I like it. Nice poem, well done.
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Although I don't agree with your political views I have to admit that this poem is rather brilliant. Your talent for rhyming verse is really undeniable. And though I oppose almost everything you say I can still appreciate the skill with which you say it. I enjoyed hearing your opinions through this cleverly written poem. Well done.
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This is great! I love this poem it is my favorite one so far. I love Halloween and witches are the coolest creeps of all.
I am amazed at the clever story you tell with this piece. Not to mention what a great job you do describing the witch that's the best. A smile like an empty ditch is priceless and a body of sags. That's good stuff.
I really like the rhythm and rhymes of this poem as well. The pacing is quick and lively. I just really like everything about this witty little ditty.
This crone is so endearing I'm actually glad she found a man in the end. I was rooting for her. I really enjoyed this fun and charming Halloween tale. Thanks for sharing.
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Honestly this is such a cute silly poem I think the last thing I would want to do is eat the turkey. You paint such a vivid picture of this goofy bird jerkily walking all over the place I find it way too entertaining. I would rather watch him dance than have him for Thanksgiving. Sweet poem, I enjoyed it very much.
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I really like the theme of this poem. Warrior women are very cool. I was a little confused by the title because there is a distinction between a tomboy woman who lives in the Amazon and the Amazon women of ancient Greece. I take it this is the former.
This is a great poem and I enjoyed the colorful descriptions of this woman kicking the men's rears in everything.
The last stanza however doesn't seem to fit the rest of the poem. All the other stanza's are dedicated to this amazing woman but the last one switches its focus to the dangers of the jungle. This maybe just me but I find it kind of distracting. It divides the reader's focus.
Anyway, I liked the poem very much. I love the concept and the beautiful language. I could easily picture this wild child living free by her own rules. She is an inspiration. Bravo.
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This is a fiendishly clever poem. When I saw it was about a Martian who attacks Earth I naturally thought of that most famous Martian Marvin. This Martian is much more sinister however.
I was actually surprised at the severity of his wickedness. It paints the Martian race out to be rather ruthless. I saw no motivation for his actions. I was very relieved when he saw the light and decided to value life before it was too late. It kind of reminded me of the Grinch.
Overall, this was just a fun poem that with a great happy ending. I enjoyed it very much. I'm still smiling as I write this review so you definitely did something right. Well done.
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I think this is an incredibly well written piece of horror. Your descriptions of this man's rapturous appetite for dark beauty is so convincing honestly it is scary. That's what true horror is all about, so well done.
I am even more impressed by the fact that you convey this man's villainy all without a bit of dialog. That is very difficult in my opinion. I generally always fall back on dialog when I feel I can't get the emotions across without it. Kudos.
The kill scene was so real and psychotic I was seriously scared you might have personal experience with it. That was very poignant stuff. You set the scene beautifully and the atmosphere in this piece is just spectacular. It really is beautiful horror. You followed the prompt precisely.
Overall, I really liked this story. It is dark and compelling. Once I started reading it was hypnotic. Your descriptive language is lovely and haunting. I loved everything about this piece. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. BRAVO!
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This is a great poem. I am a cat person by nature but I can appreciate the loving relationship between a human and their dog. You do such an excellent job of depicting your delightful puppy I feel like I have met her. This is such a bright and happy poem it brought a smile to my face. It was a great way to start the morning. It is a lovely tribute to your sweet little friend. :)
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What a beautiful poem. It symbolize the appreciation of the smallest of lives. The tiniest lives shining the brightest. The serene images this poem summons are sweet and soothing. The entire poem exudes joy and light. Bravo.
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I just love this poem. The language is lovely and the metaphors heavenly. The whole poem exudes peace and serenity. Reading this piece soothes me and lends the tranquility of a peaceful mind. It truly has a calming effect on me. Thank you for this beautiful piece of solace.
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Wow, I like this very much. It really goes beyond creepy straight into terrifying. I love how you manage to give a H.P. Lovecraft feel to this piece. The depth and richness not to mention the completeness of the story you tell in only twenty-five words is amazing. You play upon one of man's most primal fears, that of being eaten alive. You really just did an amazing job within this limited format. I am so impressed. Well done and Bravo!
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I really want to get this but I guess maybe I'm just not that smart because I really don't hehe. The word improbable throws me off I think. I can't make the connection between a fictional character denying the nature of his existence and killing me either.
Sorry, I don't mean to be harsh or insulting in anyway. I just don't get this. I'm sure it's just me.
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I like this very much. It is raw and honest and very poignant. The emotion exudes from this poem in waves. The sentiment and message are clear. Many of the statements are as profound as they are beautiful. The concept of the inability to see color is extremely potent.
I think this poem is a little rough around the edges and some of the verses are a bit redundant in places. However, I believe if you just spend just a small amount of time polishing this poem it will easily be a perfect 5 star piece. It is very close now. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Wow, considering the severe restrictions you were working with this is a pretty amazing poem. I am shocked at the meaningful picture you paint within the limitations that were set. I think you did an excellent job creating a legitimate and interesting poem with tiles. Well done.
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Well I found your port because of your Ghostlight poem featured in the Drama NL and I am so glad I did. I have to say now I am a fan.
This poem is just lovely. The serenity you conjure through your use of descriptive language is amazing. The images are breathtaking and the silence truly can be "heard." I am enchanted by the tranquility of this poem. It casts a spell. I love it very much. Bravo.
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This is absolutely hilarious. I love it. This poem actually made me laugh out loud. The comedic elements and rhymes are impeccable. The timing and flow are on point. I like everything about this poem. It is lighthearted and funny while still telling a very poignant story. This is a great poem. I applaud you. Well done!
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I really like this poem. The idea of each of these parts meeting to form a whole is brilliant. My absolute favorite line is the last: Then lip to lip, when all combine to form the kiss. This is the most thought provoking love poem I have ever read. It is moving and lovely. I am awed. Bravo.
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I like the concept of the one way glass house. It is a very intriguing premise of a love poem. You do an excellent job of conveying the frustration of yearning after an unrequited love. The sentiment of, if only you would see me, is powerful and profound. Well done.
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What a beautifully haunting poem. I love the atmosphere you create within this piece. The tranquility that comes within the silent confines of a closed theater is charming. I love the idea that the ghost of other's thoughts and dreams still linger on the stage. This is a very powerful but quite poem. I enjoyed it very much. Bravo.
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This is another great story poem that I am completely in love with. Seductive women with moon names hold a special place in my heart (hehe). I love the pictorial representation you have for this poem as well.
Again, your talent for telling a compelling story is impeccable. The way you describe the dance of this siren is so clear and concise it leaves the reader as spellbound as her victim. It really is an enchanting poem. Well done.
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