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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello the last cicada,

This is a great spooky seasonal poem. I really enjoyed it. There are a lot of fun lighthearted Halloween poems going around right now but this ain't one of them.

This poem is downright scary. I love the, bones and cartilage exposed to air, line. This single lines brings the fright factor up a couple notches in my opinion. Great poem, good job.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Robin ~ The Rhyme Maven *Smile*,

HAHA! I love this, it is quite witty and funny. It makes me wonder if the author really has a proverbial Aunt Suzy or if this is an autobiographical experience. The thighs still raw line actually made me cringe. I thought a mention of food poisoning might follow (hehe). Great poem nonetheless.


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Hello again Robin ~ The Rhyme Maven *Smile*,

I love this poem. It is just so raw and real, so human. It speaks of the confusion and sacrifice our soldiers make with every moment they spend afar. I can only imagine how hard it must be to occupy a country where half the population resents your presence when all you want is to return home. Great poem, sad message.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Robin ~ The Rhyme Maven *Smile*,

What an excellent poem. I love the sentiment and message of this piece. No matter how much we question and seek the answers of life and death, creation and afterlife or where we come from; we will never know the answers until we pass through the door from this life to the next. Even science can't figure out the answers. Nice, thought provoking poem. I enjoyed it very much.

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Review of MORE HAIKU  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again Kat,

I have to be honest I have never really been a fan of Haikus before but I seem to like yours. I enjoyed both of these very much.

My favorite is the poem about home. I think you capture the essence of home magnificently in this poem. I love the line about a place to fall at day's end but I believe the first line says it all really.

I am not a dog owner but I have seen how dogs react to their masters and I believe your poem again depicts this phenomena exactly. Well done.

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Review of Reflections  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello again Kat,

I like this poem very much. It is quite thought provoking and humorous. The last line leaves the reader wondering which one use to be blue, the sky or the ocean. It is genius really. I love word play and witty turns of the phrase. This is an extremely clever and well written verse. Well done.


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Review of "I Remember"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Kat,

Wow, what an incredibly intense and poignant poem. It is emotionally moving it is brilliant. I love this poem. The mirror structure is fascinating and the last two line stanza is so profound and touching it leaves the reader awed. Well done.


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Review of Black Rose  Open in new Window.
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Hello magdaleine,

What a beautifully dark and haunting poem. The language is lovely and eloquent. It has such a Gothic style and feel to it. I love your use of metaphors. The message is also dark and tragic. Everything about this poem just exudes melancholy. I enjoyed it very much.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Richard Vance,

This is such a beautiful tribute to your friend's passing. I know he is honored. I can feel the depth of your grief and sorrow through your eloquent use of language. I can tell what this friendship means to you. I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Richard Vance,

This is another of your poems that I just love the message and sentiment. The idea that love through truth remains long after we are gone is beautiful. I think the language and metaphors you use here are awesome. I enjoyed this piece very much.


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Review of Enlightment  Open in new Window.
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Hey again Richard Vance,

Cool poem. I like the sentiment and message of this piece very much. It is so insightful and wise. I believe it is very appropriately titled. I love the intensity of emotion that pours from this poem. It is very uplifting and inspirational.

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Review of The Duel  Open in new Window.
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Hello again Richard Vance,

What a great ballad. I really enjoyed this. I think it is because I am short story writer that I like everything even my poems to tell a story. This poem tells an interesting and entertaining story. I think the rhyme and rhythm are excellent and pacing flows very nicely. Well done.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Richard Vance,

Wow, you really have a knack for picking subjects and writing words that resonate with me. I can tell this poem was written by a fellow parent because only a parent could express so eloquently the love I feel for my daughter. Well done.

This is simply lovely. It states truly how parents will always live vicariously through our children. Indeed they will always leave footprints on our hearts. Bravo!



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Review of Forlorn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Richard Vance,

This is an incredibly intense and poignant poem. I can feel outrage and indignation. The unfairness of life screams from every line of this piece. It really is heartbreaking. I feel the frustration and yearning of the forlorn. This a powerful powerful poem. It really speaks to me. Bravo!!


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Review of Paper Airplanes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Richard Vance,

This is a great poem. I like the images of flying paper planes and the simply joy that comes along with creating these little aerodynamic wonders. I also like the metaphorical implications of the planes compared to lives crashing and burning. I really enjoyed this poem very much. Wonderful poem, excellent job.


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Review of Transparent Souls  Open in new Window.
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Hello Richard Vance,

I like this poem very much. It describes the transition between life and death in a very peaceful and serene "light" but at the same time this is still an eerie quality about it that I find unsettling. I think that represents the unknown aspect of death and what awaits us on the other side. I love how you explain a soul's mode of travel through streams of light and consciousness or thought. Excellent poem, well done.


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Review of Nature's Rest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello again Richard Vance,

I love your poems of nature and the seasons. This one is just lovely with the descriptions you use eliciting beautiful images of seasons past. I like the atmosphere of this poem. The feeling that everything is being laid to rest and calmly brought to a close. That is another aspect of your poetry I like very much is the serene feel of many of your pieces. It's the vivid pictures that spring to mind because of this poem that really get me. Bravo.

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Review of A Life Not Lived  Open in new Window.
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Hello Richard Vance,

This poem is so powerful and poignant. It expresses quite eloquently my own feelings of deception. In my family we call it "putting on the show." We all put on "airs" to blend into society and not call attention to our own uniqueness. Another great poem, I am becoming a serious fan. Well done.


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Hello Richard Vance,

Wow, I can't get over what a stark contrast between this winter poem and the tranquility of the winter graveyard poem. The images this poem generates are just brutally shocking, winter goosestepping marching over summer. These are the harsh winter times we hate to see arrive.


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Hello Richard Vance,

I love this poem. You capture the essence of falling leaves perfectly. The lines about the leaves forming patterns on the ground that look like jigsaw puzzle pieces is just genius. I never thought of it that way but that is a brilliant description of a blanket of leaves. This is just a wonderful Autumn poem. Bravo.


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Review of Winter Graves  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Richard Vance,

This is a just a beautiful serene poem. The peace of final rest combined with the tranquility of a winter's day is just lovely. Everything about this poem just exudes calm and stillness of the soul.

I love the lines:
No sleigh bells ring
To Remind the dead of living things.


The profundity of that statement just sends chills down my spine. Great poem, I really enjoyed it.


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Hello Tim Chiu,

I really like the matter of factness of this poem. It is about death and decay but you make no apologies whatsoever about it. You tell it like it is straight and to the point. I like that even though there is no sugarcoating the descriptions of the graveyard it still presents a dignified face. I love the line:
Continue to unearth receptive holes


Maybe its just me and I do tend to have a morbid side but I find this line kind of inviting and warm. I like it. Nice poem, well done.



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Hello Tim Chiu,

Although I don't agree with your political views I have to admit that this poem is rather brilliant. Your talent for rhyming verse is really undeniable. And though I oppose almost everything you say I can still appreciate the skill with which you say it. I enjoyed hearing your opinions through this cleverly written poem. Well done.



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Hello Tim Chiu,

This is great! I love this poem it is my favorite one so far. I love Halloween and witches are the coolest creeps of all.

I am amazed at the clever story you tell with this piece. Not to mention what a great job you do describing the witch that's the best. A smile like an empty ditch is priceless and a body of sags. That's good stuff.

I really like the rhythm and rhymes of this poem as well. The pacing is quick and lively. I just really like everything about this witty little ditty.

This crone is so endearing I'm actually glad she found a man in the end. I was rooting for her. I really enjoyed this fun and charming Halloween tale. Thanks for sharing.

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Hello Tim Chiu,

Honestly this is such a cute silly poem I think the last thing I would want to do is eat the turkey. You paint such a vivid picture of this goofy bird jerkily walking all over the place I find it way too entertaining. I would rather watch him dance than have him for Thanksgiving. Sweet poem, I enjoyed it very much.



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