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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi VikramAdith!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little sonnet!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and enlightening read! Your "argument" is expressed with clarity! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Beastly Banquet  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Jyo!

Overall Impression: A fun Monster banquet, what a nice change of pace! LOL

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I'm pretty sure I recognized Ramen Noodles, but the others escape me! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Mitchopolis!

Overall Impression: A truly awesome pirate tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Great premise and a wonderful pirate! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Josh Curtiss!

Overall Impression: A wonderful post-apocalyptic tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - wield these arcane rules - I think you meant "runes" instead of "rules".
2. In this section - That particular area is where. - you may want to combine this with the next sentence - Bartholomew and Malachi were currently heading.

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Good premise combined with demons and magic, can't wait for the next installment!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of His Mother's Eyes  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

Overall Impression: A very sad and creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Apparently he inherited more than just his Mother's eyes!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Wellline  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Ahkerousia!

Overall Impression: A very strange and gruesome tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - switch her Mellon Collie and the Infinite Sadness tape side for the 3rd time - I think you want to flip the tape over but I am not sure.
2. In this section - her mind repeated as looked on - you may want to insert "she" after "as".
3. In this section - Her thoughts wondered to the life - I think you meant "wandered" instead of "wondered".

Readability: An entertaining little read! I am a bit confused as to the purpose of her feelings of being "home" when in his lair. Was it the blood that got on her? Or was she meant to be there, hence the old secretary as part of the lair?

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of My Grandmother  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Big Bad Wolf!

Overall Impression: Awwwww, Big Bad Wolf has a heart! *BigSmile*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and sweet little poem! You obviously loved your Grandmother very much! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of A Good Deed  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi SoCalScribe!

Overall Impression: That's the best zombie story I've read in a long time!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I love unlikely heroes! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Why Am I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Liam!

Overall Impression: Some very good questions!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and compelling read! You raised some good questions to ponder! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi TBird!

Overall Impression: I am definitely going to have trouble sleeping tonight!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and creepy read! You did an awesome job on character development! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Wax Dolls  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Michael K!

Overall Impression: So much hate well spent!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - hoping to one day to take her away - you may want to eliminate one of the "to's".

Readability: A well-written and sad read! This reminds me a lot of the tale of Lizzie Borden, was it supposed to? I'm not sure the mother got what she deserved, but the stepfather sure did!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Possession  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

Overall Impression: A totally creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and eerie read! Quite an interesting perspective on demon possession! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Ball  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi elizjohn!

Overall Impression: Sounds like quite the bash!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - along the crowed back wall - you may want to insert a "d" in "crowed".
2. In this section - they did the do and partied - sorry, not sure what you wanted here.

Readability: A well-written and fun read! I enjoyed all of the strange personalities you gave your monsters! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Fun House  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Tom Buck!

Overall Impression: A very sad and creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I never did like the fun house...

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Megaloblatta  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Coffeebean!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and eerie read! I loved your excerpts that ventured into his mind, it brought out the insanity quite nicely! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Shed  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi John_Quinn!

Overall Impression: Quite the horrifyingly creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and unnerving tale! A monster with an enabler, how interesting! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Jatog the Green!

Overall Impression: Absolutely hilarious!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun read! You managed to capture the personalities of both "Captain's" and even managed to through in some of thier famous one-liners! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Key  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi NickiD89!

Overall Impression: A truly wonderful little story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting read! Your characters were well developed and the story was laid out perfectly! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Witches Brew  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SamLBlnj!

Overall Impression: Awesome brew!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun read just in time for Halloween! Sounds like a wonderful potion, but I especially liked the part about "stir not shake" it sounded a bit Bondish!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Special Child.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Foxette!

Overall Impression: A sweet and endearing little story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and compelling read! I enjoyed the power you gave to Alice, it was so very tangible! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Just Kelly!

Overall Impression: That's one of the funniest "jokes" I've heard in a long time!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A very Well-written and humorous read! I was wondering how those old jokes keep coming back around! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Blind Loyalty  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Nelchael!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully disturbing little story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1!

Overall Impression: That was too funny!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and humorous read! Though, I am still waiting to hear the story of the headless man and his pet crow! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Candy Store Ghost  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Kotaro!

Overall Impression: A creepy little story with a twist!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and compelling read! The ending was so unexpected! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Abiding Room  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pony Tale!

Overall Impression: A very intriguing look at conversing with the dying!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting read! I loved how the room changed with the mood! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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