Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and lovely read! It makes you feel the loneliness of the elderly man as he waits to join his family and friends once more. Well done!
Overall Impression: A very horrific portrayal of the future of the human race!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Could be a very interesting novel if you could only figure out what the darkness really was! Well done!
Overall Impression: Horror with a sense of humor, awesome!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Of course it had to be the beautiful neighbor that ran to him for help, it is never the housewife in her gardening attire without a stitch of makeup, but then again, it did add to the humor!
Overall Impression: A wonderfully fantastical little tale!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! It made me think of how dreams can get really wierd sometimes, yet you seemed to capture the essence of it!
Overall Impression: Wonderfully done moral statement!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:
1. In this section - don’t need reminded of what happens in juvenile justice - you may want to insert "to be" prior to "reminded" and "the" prior to "juvenile".
Readability: A well-written and easy read! All points were well stated with clear examples! If only everyone saw the world so clearly!
Overall Impression: Sweet! I could use a "gift" like that!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors to report:
1. In this section - looked at to her garden - I think you meant "looked out at her garden".
2. In this section - sudden there had golf balls - You may want to change "there" to "they".
3. In this section - reached up to her ear to it down - You may want to insert "turn" prior to "it".
Readability: A fun and entertaining read! Well-written and the plot was carefully thought out!
Overall Impression: Very interesting and intriguing concept!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors to report:
1. In this section - reach the heaven? - you may want to either eliminate the "the" or add an "s" on the end of heaven.
2. In this section - Returned to the monotonous job - you may want to change "returned" to "returning".
Readability: A well-thought out and interesting read! Some of the sentences were difficult and had to be reread, like the one that starts with "The cannons wrought havoc...", but the story has merit and a good premise. It would be entertaining to learn all the different things Stoian trys in order to reach the heavens!
Overall Impression: A very sweet and touching little poem!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A lovely little read! Too bad the object of the poem turned out to be such a loser, it definitely loses some of its sweetness knowing that!
I hope you soon meet that special one and know great joy!
Overall Impression: A wonderfully entertaining little sci-fi story!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and fun read. Is this a book you are working on? It has a great plot and you have done an awesome job of character creation! Let me know,
Overall Impression: A very intriguing little story of imagination.
Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:
1. In this section - let their be snakes - I think you meant "there" instead of "their".
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read. Great visuals and I enjoyed the snake analogy!
Overall Impression: A wonderfully sweet tale and, my personal opinion, I think fate may have had a hand in it!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:
1. In this section - silence while the watched the birds - you may want to put a "y" on the end of "the".
Readability: An easy and entertaining read! This is one story that I am sure has a happy ending!
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