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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Second of Nine!

Overall Impression: A very interesting world!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - giving me the Harbringer of Doom? - you may want to eliminate the extra "r" in "Harbinger".

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Love the brat - I think I've known a few of those!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Review of Deep In The Woods  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi J.A. Cunningham!

Overall Impression: Sounds like it could be somebody's nightmare!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a few spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - all Avery knew was right now is - you may want to eliminate "was".
2. In this section - strait for the woods - you may want to fix the spelling of "strait".
3. In this section - Slowly keeping through as not to make - I'm confused. *Confused*
4. In this section - powerful voice scalded Darian - I think you meant "scolded" instead of "scalded".

Readability: An easy read with an interesting storyline! I am curious as to why she calls the tree "father", there are way too many possibilities.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Review of Recalculating  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi hank!

Overall Impression: I am thinking this should be in the horror/scary category!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: An interesting little read that should be labeled "scary pyschotic comedy". *Laugh*

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Rhayven!

Overall Impression: A very interesting take on life!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting read! I found it interesting that you referenced "Father" in one section and "Gaia" in another, effectively intertwining the two! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Review of Mind Control  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Rhayven!

Overall Impression: Sweet Jesus! I knew somebody else was in control, but They told me I was crazy! *BigSmile*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting read! You touched on the crux of insanity! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi BeginnerWriter!

Overall Impression: A wonderful bit of Sci-fi!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

However: You may want to recheck your quotations, they seem to have wandered out of place in many areas! Dang things, they must be watched constantly! *BigSmile*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I enjoyed your main character and the story premise, your futuristic world sounds like a really good place for many the story to unfold! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Review of Paralysis  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi InsanityInduced!

Overall Impression: An extrememly creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - the eight-legged bugs crawl across my - you may want to add "ing" at the end of "crawl".

Readability: An entertaining little read! I am totally with you on the spider thing, I will probably have nightmares now! *Worry*

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BScholl!

Overall Impression: Such a sweet little tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and lovely read! A young person that loves the grandparent is always sweet!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Methusilah!

Overall Impression: Somebody really doesn't like the Beatles!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a few spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - where are my manors. - you may want to change "manors" to "manners" and add a "?".
2. In this section - Oh don’t worry about. - you may want to add "it" after "about".
3. In this section - never get the get the - you may want to delete the extra "get the".

Readability: An easy and interesting read! Intriguing way to meet that "someone special".

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Vicki Lynne!

Overall Impression: Such a sweet, sweet letter for Thanksgiving!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and inspiring little read! I do have a soft spot for Angels! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Cubby!

Overall Impression: Quite the cat feast!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I am sure the cat's will attest that it was quite the Thanksgiving feast!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Review of The Sass Epidemic  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi khaaaaaan!

Overall Impression: A very humorous little tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - getting mant people coming in - you may want to change "mant" to "many".

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! A sense a bit of hostility there...

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Pumpkin*

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Memory Sweet 16!

Overall Impression: What? Where's the happy ending?!!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and sad read! Your character was nicely done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Harry!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little nightmare!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun read! PBJ and pickles? Yeah, that would do it! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Kotaro!

Overall Impression: A very interesting premise for a mystery!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - never get pass the residents - I think you meant "past" instead of "pass".

2. In this section - bend down, and wrapping a large - I think you meant "bent" instead of "bend".

Readability: An entertaining read with two of my favorite heroes! I enjoyed your version of the hidden underground city!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Wager.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dan!

Overall Impression: A lovely little tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and sweet read! Great premise! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Granson Place  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

Overall Impression: A very, very creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

However: In this section - "Sorry, bud, but I don't believe in any of that crap?" - you may want to eliminate the question mark.

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Awesomely scary!! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Dave!

Overall Impression: Your ghost writes beautifully!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! A very interesting perspective on this small bit of histoy! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Little T!

Overall Impression: A very interesting take on the passage of time!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and thought provoking poem! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Joy!

Overall Impression: A creepy little poem!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A very interesting read! Very gruesome and perfect for Halloween!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of Abnormalities  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

Overall Impression: An interesting take on death!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I loved the last line, it brought everything together! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Big Bad Wolf!

Overall Impression: A very different kind of Christmas Story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! I always enjoy your out-of-the-ordinary characters! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Review of The Deadly Affair  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sheila DeLong!

Overall Impression: A sad and strange little tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!

However:
In this section - <font;_italic>Why didn’t I see the signs?</font> - you may want to fix your fonts.

Readability: A well-written and compelling read! Bill is a very bad boy! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi KaiserDeath!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little tale of what happens when you make assumptions!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! The characters were well thought out and stayed true to themselves! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Keaton Foster!

Overall Impression: A wonderful look at the world of flight!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and insightful read! I did have to look up the meaning of "sheeple", I love learning new words! Well done!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Witchhat*

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