I'm reviewing your entry as today's judge for "The Writer's Cramp" by Sophy v.2021 . Thanks for entering!
This is well written. I was engaged, as a reader, throughout.
I found parts I can relate with, personally. I had an ill mother that I helped to care for. You bring the life Jeremy had , as well as this new life, to well, life, for your readers. Your choice of words are just right.
I saw nothing out of kilter. Nice!