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Love, love this! Nearing the end, I had guessed where the narrator was. Still, it was a fun trip getting there!
The descriptive telling of this story is what grabs your readers and keeps us captive until the end. I was almost having a panic attack myself!
One thing, since your readers don't know that your narrator knows her tormentor, after he removes her glasses, you mention the detail of his white eyebrows. To keep the suspense, you might want to omit that. We aren't supposed to know who he is untill all is revealed at the end.
I really enjoyed this story! Best of luck!