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Review of WINTER WALK  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Maria Mize

I enjoyed reading this poem through. You set the scene so very well. You reminded me of the magic that comes along with soft snow. The imagery was great. Nice form and good presentation. I loved the poetic power this piece gave me. Good writing.

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Review of Gym Split  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Than Pence

I thought your comical poem here was great, I loved it all. Nice clear story telling in poetic form. The flow was good and the rhythm was good too. I salute you for being able to write a comical piece, I take life too seriously to even try. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
💙 Carly

I thought this was a nice poem, summing the road of life up very well. Nice presentation center of the page. Good rhymes and rhythm. The poem was well rounded off with the mentioning of time moving on. I liked the philisophical feeling of this poem. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Forbidden Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I felt the anguish and suffering of a bruised heart and soul. Nice length of a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. As "Phill Collins" said, "You can't hurry love". Your writing has good ballance and good structure. There seemed to be a lot of reality in your poems. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I related so very well to this poem from you. Funny enough, I live by the sea too and visit the water and shore when I can. The refreshing feeling and spiritual pull of the waves and scents is sublime. The ocean always makes great poetry, I think every poet has written about the ocean. I did spot something in the poem that could use some attention. The 3rd line from the end seems to have a higher syllable count to the rest of the poem. I thought this distracted the beauty from this poem. It is just my preference and you dont have to take my advice. But I would take a look at shortening the line. I hope you are not offended. Other than that, this is a lovely poem.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I decided to visit your portfolio and read some of your expressive poetry.

I liked the title. I liked how you expressed yourself here. To me there were no signs of a Bi-sexual writer. I think your words were straight from the heart and feelings. Your writing held good emotions and you have a heart worth gold. Love works best when we don't push it. I step back and let the real feelings shine through.

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Review of Memorial Day 2022  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jay O'Toole

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this poem from you. For me, there was excellent imagery here. The noble and powerful way you wrote this was great. I liked the cutting edge this poem gave me, a heroic feeling. Good writing and great work.

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Review of Welcome Autumn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed reading this through. I also related well to what you had written. Nice presentation and even stanzas made this attractive to the eye. A good theme and a nice flowing rhythm. I liked the imagery that came along with this poem. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
winklett in the woods

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you wrote this in a clever way, as though speaking for the planet itself. I found it poetic and interesting. Nice word crafting. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. A good read and I enjoyed reviewing it.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

You manged to say a lot in just a few lines. Great presentation on the page. I found the little twist in the last line summed the item up perfectly. There was a nice poetic sway to this poem and it was enjoyable to read and review. Nice work.

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Review of RAIN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I think this is a lovely little story from you. The words to the song are very special and heart warming, I felt the romance. You have a big heart and proved it here by singing your favourite song. Love always makes good tales and is healthy for the spirit. This was a lovely read, thank you for sharing it here. God Bless you!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kaya Rechelle Zerwis

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I admired your honesty in writing and posting this piece. I wouldn't worry too much, it seems like you are a very sensitive person. It is ok to care and have feelings. You are thoughtful and honest and that is something to be proud of. Just don't let anyone rule your feelings.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Stay True

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you expressed yourself very clearly. There was an emotional power over me as I read this through. I liked your honesty here, you were not affraid to empty your feelings onto the page. I guess this is why womem wear make up, so they can be spotted in a crowd. An interesting item.

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Review of Less Than a Month  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this funny little poem, you made me smile as I read this through. The imagery was great and the flow was good too. I think you used the prompt so very well. Nicely presented, colourful and bright. Good writing.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Princess Megan Rose GOT Fox

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

A lovely little item to read through. I was filled with wonder and joy as I read this through. I was proud and hummbled when I learned Serena lived in England, I live by the sea so I will take extra care to look out for her. A refreshing little read. Thank you.

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Review of Vamp for Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spring in my Sox

Hi, your story was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was an inviting little piece. I enjoyed the tale. Good grammar and good story telling. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I think you used the prompts very well. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Fool of It  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD' Looking Up

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I thought this was very funny and cute. I smiled as I read this through. Great presentation on the page. Nice rhythm and nice flowing lines. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cubby~Cheering House Florent!

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought this was a lovely, sweet and positive piece of writing. There was such a poetic sway to this poem, the rhymes were perfect. The admiration of your sister is well documented here. I smiled at the message. I smiled at the heart warming lines. A special piece to read through.

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Review of Autumn Ebbing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Words Whirling 'Round

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I love autumn and so I related well to what you had written. Lovely poetic power to this piece, describing the seasons change so very well. Well crafted and well written. Good job done here. Write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Daydream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
SeanFear

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

The title drew me into the poem firstly. I thought this poem from you summed up the meaning and beauty of poetry and writing. Your expressive tone in this piece was great. I felt your emotions were running deeply here, the whole piece sang deep quality to me. I understood how you feel. Nice work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Joseph

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought..

I thought you did a lovely job of this poem. Your description of a rainbow was fantastic. I loved the overall poetic power of this piece from you. A great read and I really enjoyed reviewing this poem. Nice work.

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Review of Untitled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LilacMist

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

Nicely written and well executed. Good flow to this work. I liked the quirky writing style. I also feel you expressed yourself so very well. I enjoyed reading this piece through. I related to your desperation. Keep writing....

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Rated: E | (5.0)
dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought..

I have related to how you feel. I see this was written some years ago now. I hope there are no scars. By me reviewing this item will probably bring all the pain back, so I apologise. I have lost two dogs in the past and it is not easy to take. The hurt is awful. Keep going...

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Review of First birthday  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy to write

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

Simple, direct and honest. A sweet little piece of writing. A new life is always good for poetry. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice work and write on!!

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Review of The Shape of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spring in my Sox

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

I loved this poem from you, you gave some great advice here. The meaning was lovely. We should all share the love for a better life and experience. The presentation was special and rewarding. You made a good job of this poem from the prompt. Good work and write on !!!

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