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Review of Authors Birthdays - November  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 20, 2026 at 9:16pm

Length:   1,009 Characters | 895 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search with a focus on authors. WHAT I LIKED I liked the added of twist of all the authors being born in November. November is a sneaky month. There were some classics which I liked as well such as Mark Twain. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and fun. It was very compact which made it entertaining. VARIETY The choices were recognizable and stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction defined the topic/theme of the word search. You could jazz it up a bit with a graphic or giphy, but overall, the word search is a nice break from a stressful day! A Bee Hive Review

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#4875708

Review of All About Cars  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 19, 2026 at 9:58pm

Length:   1,013 Characters | 904 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This was a word search all about cars. WHAT I LIKED I love cars so I was hooked. It was fun looking for waterpumps and rotors - especially since I didn't have to open a hood or take off a wheel! ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and entertaining. If you didn't know much about cars, this word search will leave you curious. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The graphic says it all and compliments the title. Overall, this is a nice search to break up your day and will instigate a little daydreaming about the next car you want to buy. A Bee Hive Review

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#4875704

Review of - when Autumn falls -  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 19, 2026 at 9:02pm

Length:   973 Characters | 856 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE QUIZ A quiz about the season, Autumn. WHAT I LIKED I liked it. It had some nice fun, trivia facts that I felt good about. My guesses were "strong" guesses. There was only 1 or 2 questions I had to look up. ENGAGING The quiz was very entertaining. Anyone with a general knowledge or passion about the season will do well. VARIETY The questions offered a good variety of choices with two strong contenders for the right answers. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The intro set the vibe for the quiz. Overall, it's a fun quiz to take when you're looking for a break. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875702

Review of The Graceful Knitter  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Given:   Jul 19, 2026 at 8:45pm

Length:   2,290 Characters | 2,163 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY The parish is preparing for the Christmas service, but Pastor Dan is a bit leery of Bobby's gnarled blanket. WHAT I LIKED I liked the miracle at the end with the Madonna. That captured the meaning of Christmas for me. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person limited mainly from Dan's perspective. Past tense is used in the story. DIALOGUE The dialogue accents the narration. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph helps to set the scene for the reader. You get to know Pastor Dan a little bit and the congregation. CHARACTERS Paster Dan, Maggie, and Bobby Paster Dan is the main character, who has to learn to reconcile appearances and compassion. It's something he struggles with. Maggie is a single mom, just trying to keep her balance as she parents a son who has some type of disability which is severely hindering him in his emotional growth. FLOW & PACING The opening set up the story, the middle got into the meat and potatoes of the dilemma with strong characterization, and the end offered hope, just as Christmas does. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes. PARTING THOUGHTS I really have no suggestions for improvement. As the story goes on and we learn more about Bobby and how he is perceived, an uneasy feeling settles over the reader. Maggie and Bobby are not like the others - perhaps tolerated, but as Christmas continues and the services begin, Pastor Dan sees a miracle as he experiences the prickles of Forrest singing "O Holy Night." What's brilliant is that the reader feels the same prickles Pastor Dan does. The addition of the lyrics puts the reader right there in the pew with the congregation. "The Graceful Knitter," carries emotional weight that will linger long after you've read it. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875676

Review of Resolution Day  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 19, 2026 at 3:17pm

Length:   1,298 Characters | 1,164 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM The poem is a nice spin on resolutions which we are encouraged to make at the beginning of the year. WHAT I LIKED I liked how the poet painted the picture with positivity and encouragement. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with 6 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. There's a nice rhythm to the poem when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "A thousand small steps, one per day, may prove to be the better way.," This really sums up the poem in an upbeat way. It's about the little things we do that adds up. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening invites the reader to go along for the ride and keeps them reading to see how the ride will turn out. The title is a strong fit for the poem. Overall, an optimistic look at setting goals and making resolutions for yourself. It's about your mindset and how you approach a challenge. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875591

Review of "Never Giving Up on Rick"  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 18, 2026 at 9:33pm

Length:   1,367 Characters | 1,272 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE FLASH A story about discovering an 80's pop star and the meaning of his music. WHAT I LIKED I liked Rick's music in the 80's but it never really resonated with me like Duran Duran's did. Yet, it's because Duran Duran's music resonated so, that I can understand how Rick's music resonated in this story. That said, I went back and watched a couple of his videos - "Never Gonna Give You Up," and "Together Forever," and honestly, I see the appeal to this generation. The videos themselves are snazzy - a good looking guy, a story to be told sung with conviction, but it was this phrase that stuck out to me: Loyalty matters. Hope matters. Showing up for people matters. Those are true sentiments in the 80's and today. They're timeless. What a way for your daughter and her friends to connect with them. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is a great fit for this story. I really have no suggestions for improvement. This is a sweet story that connects Gen X and Gen Z heart to heart. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875587

Review of Regions of Ancient Greece  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jul 18, 2026 at 9:12pm

Length:   968 Characters | 849 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search about the territory that ancient Greece covered. WHAT I LIKED I wasn't too aware of the regions or territories of ancient Greece so I found this interesting. ENGAGING The word search was very challenging due to the spelling of the words. VARIETY I thought the word search did a good job staying on theme and some of the places I was familiar with. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was simple while doing it's job and introducing the topic. Overall, a challenging word search for die hard word search fans. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875585

Review of The Lesson  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jul 18, 2026 at 8:12pm

Length:   1,575 Characters | 1,456 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY A husband learns just how much work his spouse does with a full time job. WHAT I LIKED I don't know if it sunk in, but his wife is a wonder woman and that came across well. DIALOGUE The dialogue drives the story. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph is simply, "Oh crap!" It does a great job hooking the reader into the story and making them curious as to what comes next. CHARACTERS In this story there's a Dad and his Mum. Mum points out to him all the work his wife does around the house. (She's been gone for 2 days). FLOW & PACING The opening delivered the problem, the middle fleshed out the issue and the ending - well, I wasn't quite sure the ending had the punch the author intended. I don't know if Dad understood and appreciated all his wife does in the house. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion here, and it's minor and a matter of style - maybe increase the font a little to make it easier on the eyes. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is a good fit for the story. The story is a nice character driven one driven by dialogue that many can connect with on an emotional level. Overall, very entertaining with a soft moral to it. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875575

Review of Wars of Ancient Greece  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 18, 2026 at 6:05pm

Length:   975 Characters | 869 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH The theme of this word search is ancient Greek battles and wars. WHAT I LIKED This was a learning experience. Some wars I recognized, some I didn't. It was interesting to think what was going on in the world at the time. ENGAGING The word search is very engaging, made more so by the unusual spelling of the wars/battles. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a good job hyping up the puzzle taker to dive right in. Overall, a word search that entertains as much as a good ancient Greek war. A Bee Hive Review

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#4875483

Review of The Wayward Breeze  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 17, 2026 at 8:33pm

Length:   1,380 Characters | 1,247 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM The poem contained a little adventure as it told the story of a man who ventured rocky cliffs and then had to find his way back. WHAT I LIKED It was a nice allegory for what happens in life - tackling the highs and lows/ups and down of life. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with 4 quatrains and an _A_A rythme scheme. The poem has a nice beat when read out loud. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "The guidebooks warned of rocky cliffs, Where shadows stretched out long and deep," This is a nice, easy description that eases the reader into the poem and hints at something deeper that makes a meaningful connection. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening intrigues the reader with the rocky cliffs and keeps them reading to find out more. The title is a nice fit for the poem and with the poem ending with the title, brings the storytelling of the poem full circle. Overall, this is a poem rich in meaning and compelling read. An Angel Army Review FORUM Angel Review Forum  (ASR) Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels. #1188311 by iKïyå§ama De-Muses

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#4875409

Review of Chick-chick-chickens!  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 16, 2026 at 8:15pm

Length:   934 Characters | 829 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about chickens. WHAT I LIKED The introduction had a lot of interesting facts about chickens. In that regard it made the word search fun and interesting. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and fun. The words popped out like an egg. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a great job setting up the expectations for puzzle. I was hyped to find all kinds of chickens. Overall, a fun break that will educate without you realizing it. A Bee Hive Review

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#4875162

Review of Mystery Word Search  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 13, 2026 at 9:53pm

Length:   964 Characters | 877 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search with a mystery theme. WHAT I LIKED Ummm... My guess? He's Columbo? I loved how sparse the clues were - it allowed for critical thinking. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging as it retained that hint of a mysterious vibe. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic with the theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The opening did a great job setting the table for the puzzle taker and what to expect. Loved the guy rubbing his chin. Perfect touch for this mysterious word search. Overall, a bunch of fun that stimulates the noodle. A Bee Hive Review

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#4875099

Review of Prophecies & Oracles  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 12, 2026 at 9:36pm

Length:   977 Characters | 889 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about ancient Greek prophecy and oracles. WHAT I LIKED I knew a little about the topic, so I thought this was interesting. Some of the words piqued my interest and I wanted to learn more. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging especially with the spelling of the words. It was challenging in a good way to find the words VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a great job setting up the theme and expectations of the puzzle. Overall, a lot of fun that will pique your interest about Greek oracles. A Bee Hive Review

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#4875025

Review of Greek Artifacts 2  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 11, 2026 at 8:58pm

Length:   968 Characters | 860 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This is a word search with a focus on the everyday ordinary things and items of ancient Greece. WHAT I LIKED I thought the puzzle hit the right pitch. It was challenging without being too frustrating! ENGAGING The word search was engaging. There were a lot of "o's" in the puzzles which made the words stick out a little bit more than usual. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on theme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a good job setting up the expectations for the puzzle. Overall, a fun puzzle that educates in a fun way. A Bee Hive Review

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Review of Gods of Ancient Greece  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: ASR ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 10, 2026 at 9:25pm

Length:   1,014 Characters | 900 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH This was a word search about the Greek gods. WHAT I LIKED I had such a blast solving this puzzle because it was so compact and it brought back lots of fun memories from my Greek Lit class. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and entertaining. Those gods were letting it all hang out. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices with all the favorites. I guess my only suggestion would be to add some more! MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did its job and set the table for the puzzle taker, giving them a taste of what to expect. Overall, a fun puzzle that doesn't disappoint. A Bee Hive Review

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#4874618

Review of Items in Clothing Store  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jul 7, 2026 at 7:11pm

Length:   956 Characters | 869 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search about clothes you wear. WHAT I LIKED I actually found this word search to be a lot of fun. Who knew that searching for clothes was just as fun as buying them. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. The difficulty level wasn't stressful and I moved along at a good clip. VARIETY There was a nice of clothes which could be expanded on. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction was simple and could be expanded on, but the member hasn't been on since 2011. Still, it was a lot of fun and if you like shopping for clothes, you'll enjoy this search! A Been Hive Review

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Review of Green  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 6, 2026 at 6:35pm

Length:   1,030 Characters | 1,030 w/o WritingML

This isn't my usual style or format, so please forgive. What attracted me to this poem? Well I went to poetry, and this was near the top. The title was simple and interesting and once I that you were the author, I had to read it as I enjoy your writing. First Impressions I loved the opening. It drew me right in with concepts you don't consciously think of assosciated with green - living, growing, breathing, and yet, that is what is green is all about in nature. I just landed in New Hampshire and everything is green (compared to where I live in California) and my soul feels alive. Growing in Idea The rest of the stanzas really flesh out the concept of green - even at an older. You can still be older and be green - living - really living which is wonderful hope for us as we grow older. Final Thoughts Very expressive and thoughtful. The ending leaves the reader on an upbeat note and I find it will resonate with me throughout the day. Overall, a very reflective and enjoyable poem. A Bee Hive Review.

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#4874434

Review of Whatcha Say??  

Review by StephBee

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Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 5, 2026 at 9:30pm

Length:   1,002 Characters | 869 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search with unique words. WHAT I LIKED These aren't common every day words, but I've used all of them throughtout my life! ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and entertaining. I even recalled a couple of times when I used these very words. VARIETY There were a lot of good oddball words that were selected. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS If anything I might suggestion expanding the introduction a little bit with an odd eye catching graphic or a maybe a silly tale using these words. Overall, this is a nice break that will bring back some memories. A Bee Hive Review FORUM Steph Bee's Honey Pit   (E) AUG 2026 - hang out with the Bees & enjoy the Flowers. NEW challenge for AUG 2026 is OUT! #1474097 by StephBee

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Review of The Abandoned Solider.  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: 13+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 3, 2026 at 10:12pm

Length:   1,724 Characters | 1,618 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE STORY A look at Sergeant Edward Harris, his military life, and his life after the military in the 1970's and 80's. WHAT I LIKED I really came to care for Ed. He had to show an inner strength and courage all throughout his life that was truly impressive. POV NARRATION/TENSE This is told in the 3rd person omniscient. Past tense is used in the story. OPENING PARAGRAPH The opening paragraph sets the tone and mood of the story. You get a sense of Ed as person, a bit grizzly, yet honest with a strength no one could really understand. CHARACTERS Sergeant Ed Harris. As the story progresses, you get to know Ed, how he ticks and why he ticks the way he does. FLOW & PACING The opening introduces the reader to Ed, the middle goes through his life in the military and out of it, and the end finds a resolution that leaves the reader wondering about Ed's life and if he made a difference. MECHANICS I did not notice and spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read. PARTING THOUGHTS The title is reflective of the story's ambience. The story lingers just on the edge of a half empty cup, yet the reader is pulling for Ed to stand up, dust himself off and give the people an example of service to others. Overall, poignant read that will touch the heartstrings. A Bee Hive Review for the Veterans Group Challenge, June 2026

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Review of The Star Lantern  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 2, 2026 at 11:34pm

Length:   962 Characters | 857 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search centered around the theme of a Star Lantern. WHAT I LIKED This was a very entertaining puzzle and it made curious about Star Lanterns. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging. I zipped right along as I found words. The puzzle was just the right size! VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction did a good job giving the puzzle taker a taste of what to expect but this could always be expanded on with a graphic or a giphy. Overall, a nice break in the middle of your year. A Bee Hive Review

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Review of Mardi Gras Deux Word Search  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jul 1, 2026 at 11:34pm

Length:   829 Characters | 725 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE WORD SEARCH A word search with a Mardi Gras theme. WHAT I LIKED I didn't know much about Mardi Gras, so this piqued my interest. ENGAGING The word search was very engaging and challenging. VARIETY There were a lot of good choices that stayed on topic. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction does a great job attracting attention and explaining expectations. Overall, a very entertaining word search that is fun and educational! A Bee Hive Review

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Review of Yum Yum  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)

Given:   Jun 30, 2026 at 5:20pm

Length:   1,358 Characters | 1,219 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE BLOG "Yum Yum," engages the reader with food topics. WHAT I LIKED I found the food topics very interesting. I especially liked the Star Trek food one. That one made me laugh. ENGAGING While there were no questions at the end of an entry, the entries were very interesting and I had no issues finding something to say or writing a reply. VARIETY There was a variety of food related posts. The posts were short, concise, and interesting. EXPRESSIVE The blog was easy to read. There was a nice, personable tone to all the entries. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm a bit more forgiving of mistakes and entries tend to be written in the moment. PARTING THOUGHTS I might suggest using a graphic or a giphy in the introduction to set a tone/mood for your blog, as well as a paragraph or two to help set the tone/mood/goals of the blog. I enjoyed visiting your blog during June. Keep on cooking! Reviewed by StephB

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Review of Paper Lantern  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  

Rated: 18+ ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 30, 2026 at 4:53pm

Length:   1,663 Characters | 1,542 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE BLOG "Paper Lantern" is a blog that engages readers with prompts that the author takes and makes them relatable with a touch of humor. WHAT I LIKED I enjoyed the self-deprecating sense of humor. I had a nice sense of the author's life which I found relatable and sincere. ENGAGING While the blog doesn't ask a question at the end of an entry, the writing is filled with such rich material, I didn't struggle writing a reply or responding. VARIETY There was a variety of posts during the month of June with a rich focus on life in the hicks. Who doesn't have a weird set of neighbors or Walmart deliveries that come up short? EXPRESSIVE The blog was easy to read. There was a nice, rich conversational tone of the blog that drew readers in. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm a bit more giving since I realize a lot of the writing is more off the cuff. Good use of WDC ML to shake up and the font and sizing to make the entries easier to read. PARTING THOUGHTS The introduction does a nice job setting the tone and intent of the blog. The blog is very versatile and I enjoyed spending a month here. Overall, this is a blog with a lot of heart which makes for return reading. Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall June Blogging Contest

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#4873877

Review of They Served Us Well  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 29, 2026 at 11:19pm

Length:   1,387 Characters | 1,290 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A poem that featured a look at a Vietnam nurse. WHAT I LIKED I love how this poem told a story and took a look at the challenges of Army nurses during Vietnam. It reminded me of the series "China Beach," which I kinda liked when it was on. STRUCTURE This is a lyric poem with 6 quatrains and an _A_A rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "but ruthless battles there she dared, on gurneys and each bench." This passage says a lot. It paints a vivid picture of medical personnel using gurneys to collect the wounded in battle. There's a hint of anxiety here, but also determination, inner courage and inner strength to face the wounded. Well done. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The title is a strong fit for the poem, and the poem eases us into the story it's about to tell. There's a nice emotional resonance here that lingers. It was great reading this poem and seeing where the inspiration took you. Overall, a nice look back at history. A Bee Hive Review for the Veteran's Group Challenge, June 2026

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#4873300

Review of IKEA Job Interview  

Review by StephBee

In affiliation with Steph Bee's Bee Hive  

Rated: E ★★★★★ | (5.0)

Given:   Jun 24, 2026 at 4:19am

Length:   726 Characters | 629 w/o WritingML

My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE IMAGE This is a clip art joke centered around IKEA the furniture maker. WHAT I LIKED I chuckled. The clip is light hearted and fun. ENGAGING The image is comical and hits right on the funny bone. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS The image reminds me of the Sunday funnies and I always enjoyed them. It brought back memories. Overall, a nice chuckle to break up your day.