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In this essay, the author shares his thoughts about spring and how important nature is to the human soul.
WHAT I LIKED
My favorite line: "An awareness of the beauty, symmetry, and a carefully executed ballet began to creep into my thoughts. Peace began to settle upon me once more..."
When I take my walks up at the nearby rec center, I often have similiar thoughts. Well said.
This is an essay with a beginning, middle, and end.
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.
I have no suggestions for improvement. Very visual and descriptive; evokes positive emotion. Well done. Write on! This was written for the Bard's Hall Contest. Good luck!