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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The sun is a busy force of nature.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the verse regarding night and repeat, bringing the cycle of the sun full circle.

*Star* STRUCTURE

There are 2 stanza with 4 lines and and a AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem implies the busyness of the sun, providing warmth and food to the birds, invigorating all.

Reviewed by StephB
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Review of Autumn.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem evokes a visual of the autumn climate.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the complexity of the last line, autumn is for all but don't expect it to be pleasant, at least, that's my take.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a 3 line poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem evokes a visual of the wetness/dampness of the season.

Reviewed by StephB
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Review of Winter.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the beauty of winter.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the word play of the poem, using the word "beautiful" in the first lines makes the words "frost" and "stars" (implying cold) glitter in beauty.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a contest entry which requires the poem to be 24 syllables and use the word tarnish.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read and is cold, evoking a shiver, with a focus on the sensation of touch.

Reviewed by StephB
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Review of The Flower I Was.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the life of a flower.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the last stanza. For me, it summed up the emotional simplicity of just being a flower.

*Star* STRUCTURE

Each stanza rythmes and there are two lines in each stanza, (couplet) except the last stanza which does not rythme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling, punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to make the font bigger and easier to read.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read, understand, and quietly poignant.

Reviewed by StephB
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Review of On The Write Path  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

On The Write Path is a travel blog and engages readers through the various travels of the author. The author went to Portugal for a visit!

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I loved the pictures and just every day notes about the places visited.

*Star* ENGAGING

The blog invites the reader to engage. I posted several times on topics.

*Star*VARIETY

There was a variety of posts in that it was a different city, different day, different people, and different set of circumstances. Every hostel is different.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of graphics, pictures, and WDC ML. I enjoyed visiting your blog and sharing your adventures. *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall Blogging Contest.
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

Writing Under the Influence engages the reader using poetry and videos.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poetry tapped into emotions.

*Star* ENGAGING

I posted a couple of times on topics.

*Star*VARIETY

The posts were most poetry/lyrics. The variety was in the topic the poetry tackled. Most had an emotional slant.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read. Nice word play to make the reader reflect.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

Good use of graphics and videos to set the mood/tone for the Blog. I enjoyed visiting your blog. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Blogging Contest. *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB
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for entry "Pivotal" 
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE BLOG

Spiral Bound Journal engages the reader by telling a fictional story of characters who are a couple of degrees related to each other.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the characters were interwoven into each other's lives. Well done.

*Star* ENGAGING

The blog invites the reader to keep reading - onto the next post to find out what's going on next. It may not be what you think, which keeps the reader on their toes.

*Star*VARIETY

There was a variety of posts, in that characters, setting, situations changed. Nice focus on life situations.

*Star*EXPRESSIVE

The blog was easy to read. I liked the color switches with the font, if anything, my only suggestion would be to increase the font size a little.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes, but then when it comes to reviewing blogs, I'm not so picky.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

I might suggest using a graphic maybe in the manner of a cover in the introduction to set a tone/mood for your blog. I enjoyed visiting your blog. Thanks for blogging for the Bard's Hall 2022 contest! *Smile*

Reviewed by StephB
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Kid thinks a chocolate covered strawberry is icky poo-poo.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

Great ending. Nailed it! I got a nice chuckle out of the ending.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person by the toddler. Good job with narration. Good job with past tense.

*Star* DIALOGUE

It's all dialogue. Good job catching the voice of a toddler.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Toddler

There's enough here to understand his motivations. He's not eating anything that will kill him, especially icky poo-poo. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Plums, Strawberries or Oranges? What's a boy to pick?

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved how Mom tricked Thomas into going to the zoo.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the first person by Thomas. Good job with narration. Past tense is used, which, for me, makes the story flow better.

*Star* DIALOGUE

It's all dialogue. Good job capturing Thomas's voice.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Thomas

There's enough here to understand his motivations. He wants to go to the zoo. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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Review of Birth of a memory  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Mom took said 12 chocolate covered strawberries was enough for little Reggie.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

Great opening. It really set the scene for what was to come.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person omniscient. Good job with narration. I might suggest an edit for past tense.

*Star* DIALOGUE

There's a good blend of dialogue and narration.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

There's enough to set the scene.


*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting

This is something that is clarified for the reader.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Reggie

There's enough here to understand his motivations. Reggie likes strawberries. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Suggestion as mentioned above. The opening engages the reader. Good luck in the Bard's Hall contest.

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

Looking at spring from a tropical point of view.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem tapped into the senses.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a sonnet.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem was easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Dandelion dances with each rhythmic cue."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked the simmering emotion of hope and good vibes that was painted by the word pictures. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem paints a rich word picture of a spring storm.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked how the poem tugged at my memories, growing up in New England and watching spring storm march in and then away.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which has 19 lines. Good use of Poet's note.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Inhale the petrichor perfume of dawn."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I felt like I was watching the storm come in. Great use of the five senses. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Remembrance  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

While spring is known for rebirth, it's just another cycle in the cycle of life.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the strong imagery.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which is a 19 line poem, however there are only 18 lines in this poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the clear clang of a bay's red bouy bright."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I poem evokes emotion well. Well written. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Meditation  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem hints of past visions, forgotten sorrows and joys from the spring.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the word play.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a villanelle which is a 19 line poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "gossamer rainbows shimmer in the light"

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I poem evokes emotion well painting bittersweet word pictures. Well written. I have no suggestions for improvement.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall

Glowing Steph
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Review of Manna  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem that talks about spring bloom.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked visuals and how the author weaved in grey clouds, flowers/daffodil, and hummingbirds. I could see spring unfolding with every verse I read.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This sapphic verse.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice visuals. The poem evokes emotion well.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall
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Review of Epistle to Cupid  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


Thank you for entering the Bard's Hall Cupid Slam Contest for FEB 2022. Since this is a unique contest, here is what I'm looking for:

*PointRight* Must slam that beastly little arrow-flinger, CUPID!
*PointRight* Must be Poetry Only, any form or free verse -- doesn't matter so long as it's just plain AWFUL!
*PointRight* Line Count up to 60 or fewer. Place line count at the bottom of the poem.
*PointRight*This poetry entry MUST be written for this contest, February 2022! If it's a leftover slam from another time and place it will be disqualified.
*PointRight* Remember that "bad poetry" doesn't mean just misspellings. We are looking for the really creative kind of "bad" that makes us cringe and groan over its terribleness!

*PointRight* A ONE-STAR RATING is the ultimate goal, here. We will award the "best" one-starred poems as the winners.

And now... onto the review....

*Reading* THE POEM

The author really wants Cupid to cease and desist.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED/AKA CUPID SLAM aka GOOD, BAD, or UGLY:

SLAM: BAD. Cupid missed and it the narrator's gut. It did him no favors.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no rhythm scheme.
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*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

An intentionally bad slam. Cupid needs to lay off the belches and farts.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall FEB 2022 Contest. Line count was listed in accordance with the contest rules.
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

A husband says the wrong thing which motivates his wife to the extreme.

*Smile*WHAT I LIKED

We've all been there. Our spouse says something and we just are motived to do the oppose. In that regard the story is very relatable.

*Star* POV NARRATION

This is told in the first person by the wife.

*Star*DIALOGUE

There's only one line, but it sets the tone for the tone.

*Star*1ST 3 PARAGRAPHS

The author uses a conversational style of writing which hooks the reader immediately.


*Star*CHARACTERS

The wife and husband
When a women gets motivated, watch out. Nothing can stop her.

*Star*SETTING

A home, just like yours and mine.


*Star*MECHANICS & SOUND

There were no uneven or choppy sentences. I did not notice and spelling/puncutation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A great flash fiction which taps into emotion well.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall Contest, JAN 2022.
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Review of The Full House  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about a Full House of stuff that needs to go.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

This poem really connected with me because I have a house full stuff of like that, too. It's hard to throw out most of it due to sentimental reasons.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with the 2nd and 4th line of the stanza rythming.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no other suggestions for improvement. Good expression! The poem flows very smoothly and speaks to the reader in a very conversational tone. Good luck in the Bard's Hall Contest.

Reviewed by StephB in the Sandbox

Glowing Steph }
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Review of Red Nuts Roasting  
In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* A couple has a bad Christmas due to working out at the gym. A parody sung to "The Christmas song."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

The title lured me in!

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging, though I felt bad for the couple.

*Star*VARIETY

Definitely a different take on the song!

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a decent job holding the musical tune of the song. Well Done!

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.
Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* A family tries to move on, sung to the tune of "Baby, it's Cold outside."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the back-and-forth between the dad and child.

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging. I wanted to keep singing to find out what happens.

*Star*VARIETY

Good variety in song topic.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good job with WDC ML.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a decent job holding the musical tune of the song. Well Done!

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.
Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* A Baseball team has to manage it's money during a winter break, sung to the tune of "Winter Wonderland."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

Very creative! Appealing to any baseball fan.

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging. I wanted to keep singing to find out what happens. Will they keep the overpaid pitcher.

*Star*VARIETY

Good variety in song topic.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a decent job holding the musical tune of the song. Well Done!

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.
Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* Shopping is a Christmas must, sung to the tune of "It's Beginning to Look a Lot like Christmas."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I definitely connected. When's January getting here. Gotta return the junk to the store!

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging. I wanted to keep singing to find out what happens.

*Star*VARIETY

I enjoyed how it tackled Christmas shopping and spending.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a decent job holding the musical tune of the song. Well Done!

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.
Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* Who doesn't get a headache at one point during the Christmas season? A parody sung to the tune of "It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the originally and creativity of the parody!

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging. I wanted to keep singing to find out what happens. Aspirin anyone? None to be found.

*Star*VARIETY

I loved the variety in the topic tackled.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a decent job holding the musical tune of the song.

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.
Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE PARODY

*Reading* Driving isn't easy when it's winter, sung to the tune of "Winter Wonderland."

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I could see it unfolding as I sung it.

*Star* ENGAGING

The parody is very engaging. I wanted to keep singing to find out what happens. Thank goodness for Tow trucks!

*Star*VARIETY

I loved how it took a look at the challenges of winter.

*Star*MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star*PARTING THOUGHTS

A good take on the prompt! I thought it did a good job holding the musical tune of the song. Well Done!

Reviewed by StephB for the Bard's Hall DEC 2021 Contest.

Glowing Steph }
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In affiliation with Bard's Hall Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE STORY

Mr. Varma wants to build an apartment building on haunted land.

*Smile* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the ending. Mr. Varma grew a lot from the start to the end.

*Star* POV NARRATION/TENSE

This is told in the third person limited. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately.

*Star* DIALOGUE

Good use of dialogue to drive the story.



*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

The descriptions were enough to set the scenes in my mind. I might suggest a few stragetic sentences that tap into smell and taste to heighten the fright.

*Star* SETTING

TIME: modern day
PLACE: urban setting near a rural setting?

This is something that is clarified for the story.

*Star* CHARACTERS

Mr. Varna
There's enough here to understand his motivations. He's the character most affected by the ghosts and he's the one who goes through the most change. *Thumbsup*

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling mistakes. I might suggest a period after the first sentence: "When the wind wailed."

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Great ending! The story built the mystery well. Word count was listed in accordance with the rules. Good luck in the contest.

Glowing Steph
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