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#4218664

Review of Before the Spring

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Lily on the Moon,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fourth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: This poem rhymed. That’s why I liked the most about it. If I ever do write a poem it will be a rhyming one. I can read, and review, any form of Poetry. But I prefer the ones that rhyme.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing really wrong with the way that you write this. But personally I wouldn’t start a paragraph, or in case of a poem – section, with the same word one paragraph after another. There has to be at least two paragraphs, or sentences, before I use a word again.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218662

Review of We Are But Weeds

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Goodmenjohnny,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fourth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There are a couple of things I like most about this poem. One thing is that there is a story involved in it. And I like that a lot. I know that when it comes to writing Poetry you don’t need a storyline. But I think it’s easier to read if you do. The second reason is that this poem rhymes. And I like that a lot too. In fact, if I ever do write a poem it will be a rhyming one.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing really wrong with the way that you write this. But personally I wouldn’t start a paragraph, or in case of a poem – section, with the same word one paragraph after another. The same is true when it comes to sentences, or lines, too. There has to be at least two paragraphs, or sentences, before I use a word again.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218660

Review of Willow's Song

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Michelangelo,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your eighth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There are a couple of things I liked most about this poem. One of them is that this poem is centered. And I like that a lot. I think it makes it easier to read if it’s centered. Another thing I liked about this is that the first three lines of each section rhymed. If I ever do write a poem it would be a rhyming one. Is there a reason why it’s only the first three lines? I can read, and enjoy, other forms of Poetry. But I like rhyming ones most of all.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s not really a storyline with this poem. I know it’s about a willow. So it is a story – sort of. But it’s not one either. What I mean is that it’s still pretty much words put together. They are just put together to form a theme. In this case – willows. I also know that you don’t need a story when writing a poem. But I think it reads easier if there is one.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218657

Review of Rainbow

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Dilly,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your seventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: The best part about this poem is that there was a story within in. That’s what I like the most about it. It’s a story what makes up a rainbow. Not really its creation, but the colors within that rainbow. I know that when it comes to Poetry there doesn’t have to be a story within it. But I think it’s better if there is a story involved.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: It’s not really a dislike, but I did notice that this poem rhymed. Which I do like a lot. If I ever do write a poem it’s going to be a rhyming one. But only part of this poem rhymed. Is that normal now or is it just the way you like to write your poems?

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218652

Review of Mother Nature

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Mikha'el,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your sixth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: That’s a good question. I’m not exactly sure what I liked most about this poem. Probably because I liked it all. But if I had to choose something I guess it would be your style of writing. I like how you wrote this poem the most.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: What was this poem about. I’m not exactly sure about that. I know it has something to do with children. But not exactly what it has to do with them. It read to me like it was the dark side of reality. I also didn’t read the genre of Nature in this poem either. I’m sure there was one. But I couldn’t see it – even after re-reading it a couple of more times.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218648

Review of Purer than a Dove

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello EverAnon ~ typing like mad!,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your sixth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: The best part about this poem, what I like the most, was that it was centered. I like that a lot. It makes it easier to read, I think, if it’s centered. I’ve seen, read, a lot of poems that have been centered the last couple of days. Is that the new way of writing Poetry or is it just the way some of the Poetry Writers like to write it now? I also liked the way that it rhymed. If I ever do write a poem that’s the way I want to write mine too.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: What was this poem about. I’m not exactly sure about that. I know it’s about the changing of the Seasons from Winter to Spring. But what else was it about – or was that all it was?

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218645

Review of First light of morning

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello ...Lin... ,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your ninth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There wasn’t much of a storyline with this poem. But there was one. That’s why I liked this poem as much as I did. It wasn’t just a bunch of words put together like a lot of Poetry Writers like to do. I also liked that you centered it. It makes it easier to read, I think, if it’s centered.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s a couple of things I didn’t like too much about it though. One is the colorization. I like to use Bold with my writing, even though I can do that when I create an Item, but I don’t colorize any of it – unless it’s for a Contest. Which I have done several times. The other thing is that it was a little confusing to me. It’s not that I couldn’t understand it. But the way it was written was. At least it was to me.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218335

Review of The Ballad of Nature

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello WritingJewel feels better,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your ninth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There isn’t much of a storyline within this poem. But there is some. The same is true about rhyming this poem. Not every section rhymes. But some of it does. And I like that a lot. If I ever do write a poem it will be Poetry like this one. The same is true when it comes to writing a storyline too.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s not wrong with the way you wrote this poem. But personally I wouldn’t have started a line, sentence, with the same word one after another – or with only one different word between them. With me there has to be at least two paragraphs, or sentences, before I use a word again. That’s just the way that I like to write.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218334

Review of You Are Nature...I love you

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello david o whalen,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your seventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There are a couple of thing I liked the most about this poem. One of the reasons why is because it was centered. I like that a lot. Not only is it a little different than most of the other poems but it’s easier to read. At least I think it is. The other thing I liked the most is that there is a storyline within it – sort of. It’s not much of a storyline. But there is one.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: Not really. I couldn’t find anything to dislike about this Poetry. You did a very good job with this one.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218331

Review of A Winters Night

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Rated: E

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Snow White,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your eighth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There wasn’t much of a storyline with this poem. But there was one. That’s why I liked this poem as much as I did. It wasn’t just a bunch of words put together like a lot of Poetry Writers like to do. At first I thought it was just a bunch of words. Then I re-read it – a couple of times. And I was wrong about that.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with the way you wrote this story. I have seen it done this way before. But I am a little curious as to why there is so much space – especially between sentences. Is that normal for this type of Poetry?

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have several other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218329

Review of Daffodils

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello ridinghhood--p. boutilier,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your eleventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: This is a very, very short poem. And that’s just one of the reasons I liked it so much. What I liked the most though was that there was a story with this poem. It wasn’t much of a story. But it also wasn’t just a bunch of words put together like a lot of Poetry Writers like to do.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: The only thing that concerned me, and I wouldn’t even call it concern, is that this poem doesn’t have anything to do with nature – unless it’s referring to Human Nature. Is that what this poem is about.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218328

Review of An Old Man’s Nighttime Frustration

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Harry,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fourteenth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a very much. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There are a couple of things I liked the most about this poem. One of them is that your poem rhymed. If I ever do write Poetry that is the kind of poem I would write. I also liked that there was a story with this poem. It wasn’t just a bunch of words put together like a lot of Poetry Writers like to do.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: The only thing that concerned me, and I wouldn’t even call it concern, is that this poem doesn’t have anything to do with nature – unless it’s referring to Human Nature. Is that what this poem is about.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have a lot of other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem very much. Keep on writing.

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#4218325

Review of Gaia

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello Astrid,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your tenth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: There is a story within this poem. That’s what I liked most about this poem. A lot, if not most, Poetry Writers seem to just spread a bunch of words together that make very little, if any, sense at all. They often don’t even correspond with the Genre or Genres. This one isn’t like that. And that’s why I like it so much.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with how you wrote this poem. But if I had written it I would have broken up this one section into several sections with two to four lines, sentences, each. I know you had that quote at the beginning of this poem. It was only a quote though. And it wasn’t part of the poem itself.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you have other poems. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review some of them too. The reason why I ask is because when I first started reviewing I reviewed someone a lot. Probably too much. And that member didn’t like it too much. So now I ask before I review someone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218206

Review of Unknown Road

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Hello Clark Belmont,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fifth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Very Good job with this one.

What I Liked the Most: That’s a very good question. I’m not sure exactly what I like most about this poem. I liked all of it. But if I had to choice something to like most of all it would have to be that there is a story within it. It’s not much of a story. There is one though. It did kind of break up into three parts though. The path began it – and ended it. But in between the path it went another direction.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: With all the long lines this looked more like a Short Story than a poem. And in a lot of way it read that way too. But it wasn’t. That isn’t what concerns me the most though. And I wouldn’t call it a dislike exactly. It’s more of an observation. I’m talking about, or trying to talk about, all the spacing. It looks like each line is its own sentence, paragraph or section – whatever you want to call it – with a lot of extra space in between several sentences etc. run together.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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Review of Through the eyes of the nature

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Hello sirius,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your eighth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: I’m not sure what I liked the most about this poem. But if I had to choice, especially if I had only one choice, it would have to be that you separated it into sections. I like that. It makes it easier to read, I think, if it’s split up into sections.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: When I first saw the title of this poem I thought it was a POV from the POV of nature. What it sees us doing and how we are destroying it little by little. Maybe even what it’s going to do to stop us from doing it aka hurricanes, tornadoes, tidal waves etc. But if I read this poem right I was wrong about that. It’s a lot more sophisticated than that.

Any Last Thoughts: I am not a big fan of Poetry. That’s probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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Review of The Choc'late Hills In Bohol

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Hello F. Garcia,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fifth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: This poem was pretty short. But there’s nothing wrong with that. In fact, that’s one of the reasons why it liked it so much. I also liked that you separated it into paragraphs, that’s what I call them – I know they aren’t really paragraphs, too. It makes them easier to read, I think, if they are broken up. I’m not sure if you needed to separate the sentences in each section, is that better than paragraph, or so much space between sections. But I don’t think there’s anything wrong if you do it though.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There was sort of a story with this poem. But not much of one. I can understand you can’t go into too much detail when it comes to Poetry – especially if this poem was for a Contest that there was a Line Count limitation. Personally, I would have made it read more like a story. But that’s just the way I like to write.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218190

Review of Haiku

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Hello Ravyne Hawke,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fifth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: I’m not exactly sure what I liked most when it comes to this poem. Don’t get me wrong, I did like this poem. But I didn’t really understand it either. It looked like just a bunch of words thrown together. They did have something in common. But they didn’t really connect to each other.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with this style of writing. I’m just not very familiar with it. In fact, this is the first kind of poem I have read like this one. Are numbers typical with this kind of Poetry?

Any Last Thoughts: I am not a big fan of Poetry. That’s probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218183

Review of The field

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Hello acookk,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your sixth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it very much. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job with this one.

What I Liked the Most: This poem had a story behind it. And I like that. It’s not just a bunch of words thrown together like a lot of poems are. The words told a story. It began with the snow of winter. And it ended with the fall right around Halloween.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with the way you wrote this. But I did notice you started a sentence off with the same word or words several times. Personally, I don’t do that with my writing. There has to be at least two sentences, or paragraphs, before I use a word again. But that’s just the way I like to write.

Personally, I would have separated this one paragraph, at least that’s what it looks like to me, into several with two to four lines each. I just think it’s easier to read if you do that. But, once again, that’s just the way that I like to write.

Any Last Thoughts: The only thing that I read that might be wrong is the last line of your poem. Shouldn’t it be ‘Is that why it’s called Trick or Treat?’ You might want to check into that.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem very much. Keep on writing.

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Review of Behold The Rapture

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Hello Rx-Queen,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your seventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Very good job.

What I Liked the Most: This poem had a story behind it. It wasn’t just a bunch of words thrown together like most poems seem to be. Sometimes it’s hard for me to understand what a poem is about. But not with this one. It tells me what our future, hopefully distant future, will be like. True, it could have been more detailed about how it happened, why, when etc. but I understand why it’s not. It’s hard to go into too much detail when it comes to poems – especially if it’s for a Contest and there is a Line Count Limitation.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with the way you wrote this. But personally I would have broken up this into two to four lines with a space between them. I like to do that with my Short Stories because I think a story is easier to read if it’s broken up by a space between paragraphs. But that’s just the way that I like to write.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218177

Review of Arachnid Clauses

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Hello Spirit Duchess,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your sixth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. At least it did what I could understand of it. It did keep me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: I’m not exactly sure what I liked most about this poem. I liked it all. It’s hard to say what I liked the most. If I had to choose one thing above all it would have to be your style. I don’t really understand it. But it did keep me reading.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with the way this is written. It’s just not my way of writing poetry. I’m old-fashion. If I had to write a poem it would be the rhyming kind.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that you had at least one other poem. If it’s okay with you, and I have the time to do it, I would like to review it too. The reason why I asked this is because when I started reviewing I reviewed one member a lot. Probably too much. And they didn’t like it much. So now I ask before I review anyone more than once.

I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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Review of Vernal Equinox is Nigh

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#1300305 by Maryann

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Hello iluvhorses ~ God Bless Phoebe!,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your fifth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: This was a very, very short poem. But that’s one of the reasons why I liked it so much. I’ve been writing a lot of Short Stories lately. In fact, that’s all I’ve been writing since I Upgraded. So I know about Word Count Limitations. I also know it’s Line Count instead of Word Count when it comes to Poetry. But the concept is the same. It’s not easy writing anything that’s short. You did a great job in doing it though.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s nothing wrong with what you wrote. But I didn’t really understand it. Don’t get me wrong I did like it. I’m just not the one who is the best, or the lest, to judge when it comes to Poetry – especially this kind of Poetry. It’s just too sophisticated for me.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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#4218167

Review of Harukaze

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Hello D.K.Moon,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your sixth year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Poetry. And I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. Good job.

What I Liked the Most: This was a very, very short poem. But that’s one of the reasons why I liked it so much. I’ve been writing a lot of Short Stories lately. In fact, that’s all I’ve been writing since I Upgraded. So I know about Word Count Limitations. I know it’s Line Count when it comes to Poetry. But the concept is the same. It’s not easy writing anything that’s short. You did a great job in doing it though.

Did I Dislike Anything About This: There’s not really anything that I disliked about this Poetry. Like I’ve already said you did a really good job with this poem.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m not a big fan of Poetry. Probably because I couldn’t write a poem if my life depended on it. I have thought about trying it though. With all the Poetry out there I thought I would give it a try at reviewing. And I’m glad I did with this poem. I think you did a good job with this one. A very good job.

I liked your poem a lot. Keep on writing.

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Review of Taking it to far

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Hello Breezy-E ~ In College,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your eleventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Short Story. And I liked it a whole lot – especially how it ended. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it.

The Story: This is a story about a female, at least I think they are female, who joined a religious group aka a cult. Only this one was a very weird one. She wanted out of it. And she found a way to do it. That’s where the Comedy comes in.

Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where the first location is at in this story. Except that it’s wherever the religious group is at. The real location for this story is the restaurant that she ended up in. It would have been nice to know a little bit more about the first one. But I understand why you didn’t. After all, it is a cult.

Your Main Character: Whoever is telling this story is the main character in it. Personally, I would have given all of them a name. I try to do that with all of my characters in my stories – especially the main ones. It makes them feel more real, I think, if they have a name. But that’s just the way I like to write my stories.

How They Spoke to Me: There is a lot of dialogue in this story. In fact, about half of it is dialogue – maybe a little more. I try to do that with all of my stories. Most of the time I do half and half. But if I don’t its usually mostly dialogue. At least it is now. Some of my older stories it’s just the opposite. If there is any dialogue at all. As for the dialogue itself, it looked good. At least it did to me.

Any Last Thoughts: I think you did a good job with this story. Do you have any others like it? If you do, and I have the time to review them, I would like to review them too.

I liked your story a whole lot. Keep on writing.

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Review of plain fish

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Hello freedsoul,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your seventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Short Story. And I did like it. What I could understand of it. It was a little confusing for me. For one thing, where is the Comedy in it. I didn’t read anything. Did I miss something?

The Story: This is a story about a fish, an ugly fish, who is eaten by a shark instead of a dolphin. Only something happened after they got eaten. It seemed that they changed that shark into something else. Oh, it was still a shark. But now it acted more like an ugly fish. At least I think that’s what this story was about.

Where Your Location Is: The water is where this story takes place. Where exactly this water is at is unknown. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all of my stories. It depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.

Your Main Character: Whoever is telling this story is the main character in it – I think. I’m not sure since they got eaten about halfway through it. Personally, I would have given that fish a name. I try to do that with all of my characters – especially the main ones. It makes them feel more real, I think, if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I write my stories.

How They Spoke to Me: There was no dialogue in this story. So I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who might. And at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of show. Personally, I disagree with that. I think you can show a story without dialogue. It’s just in the way you write it.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I would have separated this one paragraph into two, maybe even three or four, paragraphs. I don’t think that it’s a grammar rule that says that you should do that. In fact, I’m almost certain there isn’t. but I do think it’s usually easier to read a story if it is though.

I liked your story. Keep on writing.

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#4210841

Review of Regret

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Hello A Shattered Heart,

I saw your name on the Anniversary Review List. And I wanted to give you an Anniversary Review. This is your seventh year with us. Happy Anniversary

Now for the good stuff: The Review.

Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Short Story. And I like it a lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. But where was the Comedy in it. I didn’t read any – or did I. Did I miss something?

The Story: This is a story about a male who had a bad day at work. I’m not exactly sure what that work was. but from the last bit of dialogue, and the first sentence, I would say that he’s a Stormtrooper. Am I right about that?

Where Your Location Is: I’m not exact sure where this story takes place. It doesn’t really say in it. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all of my stories. It depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.

Your Main Character: Whoever is telling this story is the main character in it. But who he is I don’t know. Personally, I would have given him a name. I try to do that with all of my characters – especially the main ones. It makes them feel more real, I think, if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I write my stories.

How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t a lot of dialogue in this story. But there was a little. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I would have broken this one paragraph into two, maybe even three or four, paragraphs. I don’t think there are any grammar rules that say that you should do that. In fact, I’m almost sure there isn’t. But I think it makes a story easier to read if it is.

I liked your story a lot. Keep on writing.

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