I loved this poem for it's romance and the cool imagery. I'm still a novice so I truly appreciate the writing displayed in your poem "I Wish". It shows that you are a good poet and you had good practice with it. I have to get into it like you. Good writing & thanks.
Your poem "A Distant Memory" was excellent. It's so honest and full of sorrow but not overly gloomy. I really liked the way you kept it pretty cool and not harsh. Good writing, Sherry.
I liked your poem "Against the Wind" because it has all the optimism of good love. It sounds like you're happy now and it really comes through. Gooc writing. It's nice to see this kind of poem at this current time.
I liked your poem very much. The idea of using colors to describe nature and the town to make the imagery more vivid was a great idea and it worked. Good writing.
This one was even funnier than the other one. FYI, you should check out your questions for all the blanks. Some of them looked incomplete. I understood it but some might not. I liked it and it was fun. Thank you.
This was a very good poem. I thought it showed the displeasure of love but it also seemed like you needed it. Something like better to have bad love than no love kind of a thing. It sounded sad but I liked it.
Nanotechnology - Mind Ascension was a very interesting draft. I heard we have the nanotechnology now to make a microchip a size of a pinhead which has the memory equivalent with the supercomputers of the past. I think we already use it for mind control.
I liked reading your "Earth's Energy System" lecture. I didn't know a lot of things about Global Warming. One thing I was curious about was the hole the size of North America is in the ozone layer in Antartica region. How is that caused? And is that contributing to Global Warming? I was curious since I really don't know.
Your "Seascape" poem was a really good one. I enjoyed it very much. It shows lot could be said in a short poem. I liked the imagery and the flow of your poem a lot. It had a slight eerie feeling about it but also had some feeling of beauty that's in nature.
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