Good Afternoon,
A highly admirable well-written free verse poetry.
It expresses a very caring soul and is always being blessed.
A nicely written poetry that shares great words of wisdom
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Each written line fits for the given title.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...This is your opinion. Honest to goodness, brilliant , sincere opinion.
I am so happy for you to have such wonderful opinion that serves as a guide as you continue your journey.
Stay blessed.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Thank You for sharing.
This is very nice and educational. Surely the children love this. Awesome as butterflies are awesome, colorful and beautiful.
Children's Book so great.
I believe everyone loves this : children and adults.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...how nice !
Great story behind the poetry.
Yes...Good match...
Keep the coolness..so both can gain happiness.
A poetry that sounds like a joyful song to me.
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme.Hahaha
This is a fun read.
A man and a woman
Write On..
Good Morning,
Thank You for bringing me to these wonderful places in America through a nicely written free verse poetry.
I love the breakfast being served.
The rhythm and rhyme is wonderful.
A lovely and lively poetry.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A question..A poetry.
Loneliness is one of the facts of life. No one can deny it but it can be avoided.
The poem has a good flow and is well- written and nicely presented.
To answer the question:
Keep busy doing something you love and Prayer too.
You can be alone but not lonely.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Praise GOD...
Thank You Lord.
A free verse poetry full of suspense, as in every moment, every minute counts.
When someone close to our hearts is facing this kind of a situation we need to pray harder and keeping our faith to its strongest believing that miracles do happen and that a Miracle is repeated everyday.
God is truly Great.
Thank You for sharing.
God Bless Always.
Good Morning,
A very nice fantasy story. It has a goid flow and nicely written.Dyla, nice name for the main character. I am very curious how this flower looks like.
I am glad that the story has a happy ending as it fulfilled her wish.
Great story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning ,
A Winning Piece.
Congratulations...
A nicely written poetry based on research or scientific facts.
In this world truly
Possibilities are endless.
Thank You for the wonderful read of this : Quest For Immortality
Thank You for sharing too.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A love poetry yet so deeply emotional and with a positive twist.
A sad experience as just being used by someone . The title gives Hope for a better or for the best tomorrow...change for the very best and it will surely happen.The last two lines are my favorite lines.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A lovely poetry that proves God's Greatest Work .Very true to the given title.
The poem has a good flow and it expresses deepest faith to The Most High.And GOD continues on blessing moment to moment.
Biblical, truthful and wonderful in every way.
Write On.
Good Evening,
I love that song too. It has a lovely tune.
I highly admire how you reflect this song through a very nicely written inspiring Essay.
Great mind. Caring heart and a loving as well as respectful individuality.A highly impressive writing.
I am so glad to have read this.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Nostalgic...Memories lingers and the reunion.
A story well-written and it is a story that a lot can relate. Bringing back the old time during school days where hearts were happy and full of joyful moments.
The camaraderie.and the love remains in the heart.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon ,
A nice short story that is well written and nicely presented about Deja and her love for train rides. Thank You for bringing your readers and showing how interesting train rides are. A ride I never Experience in my whole life. A story with a good flow and the twist and turn at the end. A story with a very sad ending.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
A very unique gift with no signature of the sender. I guess Betsy understood as a loving heart always understands the one she loves.
I enjoy reading this. Sincere, honest and truthful and that matters most.
Truly a great Valentines Story.
Good Afternoon,
A HAIKU about cats.
Yes...I agree with this concise, nice and wise poetry about cats. They are brilliant creatures and very noisy sometimes but so lovevable in their own special way.
The doctor told me not to have cats in the house anymore because of my asthma that makes me miss their presence.
I love cats.
I used to have nine cats and called them one by one and they recognized their names. Sad to note that I cannot raise them again.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Morning,
I love the given title: "Today"
The poem is about a very observant poet on what is going on right now, meaning today.
Yes ! Today is very important as it offers many possibilities.
A million tomorrow's shall all pass away
I won't forget all the joy that I have today...and the song goes on.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
The title : " The Wish" as I believe that all of us in this world makes a wish, and wishing that all our wishes come true.
The story is very touching as telling someone I wish to wish, the wish you wish. Sounds like a tongue twister but if we seek the deepest meaning of the words, they are the words of the most caring heart and soul. This is how I understand this very interesting story.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A poem, a short story or a prose. This is well-written and with a philosophical message.
Yes..This word "Always" is being used always...in good terms as well as in bad terms yet it remains always.
Reading between the lines I believe this story has something to do with a relationship. In the beginning " I LOVE YOU Always" then as time passes by the love and the always turn into just a broken word. A broken promise. A very sad reality. I may conclude it as a consolation that: there is always a good reason for everything and that tomorrow the sun will shine again.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A nicely written free verse poetry expressing the facts of life through philosophical message.
The ups and downs of every existence truly is comparable to the waves of the sea. Sonetimes it gives a cascading sound, sometimes a terrible and horrible sound.The last three lines are words of Hope.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
It is fun reading this.
It speaks of the true happenings in this modern world as far as technology is concerned. Yes.. Email is quick and easy by just a touch of a finger." Send this on , if not you'll die"
Hahaha
Anything goes on in this Email world.
Thank You for the joyful read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A nicely written romance poetry.
It espresses the true power of love. A poem so full of life. It is well-written and so full of love.
Its chosen lines fit for the given title.
Yes... Love really is a many splendored thing.
A poem with much happiness.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A dream. A poetry.
It explains clearly about the dream and all about it.
"And I woke up from my sleep"
The line that stops the dreaming state.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written and presented. Thank You for sharing " Winter of Life".
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
Interesting title.
Interesting Experience.
Interesting Life.
Reading between the lines I may say that you are greatly blessed. Reading the last part of the story proves that Change is a part of our existence and such change will be considered as the coming chapters of your life that tomorrow you will gladly write.
Thank You for the very interesting read.
Write On.
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