Good Evening,
A Horse With No Name
Playing a dangerous game
Kiling here, Killing there
Surely someday this horse with
No Name will disappear
What makes this horse out of his mind
So unbalanced hurting everyone..
Oh.. the story behind the poetry is horrifying
I wish this horse will be gone soonest with the BB wind.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A part of unforgettable yesterday
The Time Of The Hippies
I was in my early teens during this time.
Yes..The given title fits for the chosen lines.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
A historical poem
Good Afternoon,
A short story that describes the cold snow days and the summertime along with the planned vacation with your husband.
Nice and wonderful.
A story that is well written and nicely presented.
The given title fita for the written lines.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with an interesting and Captivating title
In The Middle Of The Night Again
The poem is being addressed to
somebody, it was not mentioned what was the relations..this someone felt so cold in the middle of the night giving a blanket and feeding sugar and love.
Her child ?
I guess so.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented short story. The man and his past actions led him to live in isolation in this lighthouse or the
Old Ivory BB Tower
Here he lives with loneliness that surrounds him and the sad memories.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Reading the title
Lighthouse
I was thinking differently.
Reading between the lines it shares a crime invertigation story.
Robert Lloyd was concerned about Wilde while Wilde does not appreciate his presence..
This can be a very good beginning of a book in the making.
Interesting as well as intriguing.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
An eclipse in October.
We had just another one this month
April
April 8..three days ago and the whole world was talking about it.
Possibly this time you have seen it with your very own eyes.
It was not seen in our country, the Philippines but it was seen cleatly in your country, America as some of my friends there posted some videos.
This is nicely presented and with a good flow.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The story behind the poetry is full of sadness.
All that's left is memories of a failed relationship and the emptiness of the heart.
Like a very sad song that makes me cry.
She lost him...she lost her baby
Double jeopardy that is so heartbreaking. She needs so much courage and inner strength to face it all.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A nicely written Essay about a very powerful and a very special word
What Is Love ?
You mentioned here some kinds of love with clearness and clarity..
Yes.. love wears many be expressions and is being expressed in so many ways.
I have nothing to Correct simply becaude this writing is highly impressive.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning
Written for a prompt.
This was on the pandemic time where Corona Virus horrifies and terrifies the whole world.
I lost some friends and relatives due to the.pandemic and experienced many unpleasant situations especially when you need something and you are not allowed to go out of your house. The scarcity of food and many lost their jobs
.and a lot more.
Yes... The given title fits for the written lines.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning
A very nice and a very meaningful poem.
It expresses a grateful heart not only for the good times but at all times.
Inspiring and uplifting.
Yes.. a grateful heart will always be blessed.
I am a firm believer of that
Good Morning,
Congratulations for your Book Lsunching.
It is truly a great achievement and an author's great dream. I am happy for you
What is the title of the book and what is the genre.
It surely is very exciting.
Congratulations once again.
GOD Bless You Always.
Good Morning,
A poem about Christmas and the very cold season.
It speaks of Santa and the snow and many be aspects of Christmas.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
And Santa delivers gifts on Christmas Eve.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
I love this...
Ode To Coffee Shops
Yes..This is very truthful and I admire how you form words into lines that completed this work of art.
Reading the first stanza makes me go to the nearest coffee shop and enjoy the chocolate cake fhere bite after bite and the delicious sip after BB sip of their coffee.
Interesting as well as Entertaining poem and this is highly impressive yo5 me.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional piece.
Reading the title alone makes me sad.
She'd Taken A Life
The story behind the Poetry is heartbreaking.
How many suicides worlwide in a day.
A waste of life. A very sad reality.
The poem is well written and it speaks clearly of the subject matter.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very meaningful free verse poetry and also a Beautiful prayer.
The heart and soul speaks with all humility and sincerity.
I admire each written line that completed this work of art.
A prayer with complete Trust to The Most High.
Sacred and Precious.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Wow..
I love the story behind the poetry.
It expresses true love and devotion.
This is well written and nicely presented.
A poem that makes me smile reading between the lines.
The last line is very special.
Great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing this beautiful
Valentines Story
Best Regards.
God Bless.
Hat or hats are the main star in this free verse poetry. Some people cannot live without them. One of those people is my dearest husband. It is a very important accessory for him everyday of his life. Usually people who wears it everyday becomes bald but his hair is the thickest compared to others .
He has a big cabinet for his collection all over the world.
Back to the review.
This is very true
I agree with each written line.
Honestly, I don't like to wear it.
Hahaha I am not comfortable with it.
Thank You for sharing this well written and nicely presented
Wearing Hats.
Good Morning,
This looks like a Scroll of Wisdom to me.
A poetry that shares a philosophical message that speaks of heaven and earth in its own distinctive and wise way.
Thank You for sharing your very own perspective on this very special topic.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A great medical info which are available at our kitchen.
Onion or onions as cure for cough with detailed needed information to justify such claim.
Onions, honey and lemon..they are available anytime at the supermarket or market stalls.
Thank You Very much for this great information.
God Bless.
Good Evening
The story behind the poetry is intriguing and sad..very sad as well.
A mother's need. A child's need.
They both need each other but can never be together.
A very unusual and difficult situation indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry is deeply emotional. I can feel the father's grief looking at his dead son.
Very touching.
A poem or a Prose that is well written and nicely presented.
Very sad message.
Thank You for sharing this and
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A love poetry that lives in the passibg of time,
These Five Years
Yes how fast time flies and time shared matters.
The poem expresses your deepest feelings all the way.
It has a good flow and is well written and is nicely presented.
Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A poem that shares great comfort to your readers who also lost a loved one.
No more pain, suffering or doubt
A line that means a lot for me too thinking that there is always a good reason for everything.
Very true.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning
A nicely written free verse poetry with a great message addressed to this particular drummer boy.
Interesting and Captivating title
I Wish I Knew Your Name
Reading between the lines makes me fullu understand why such title was given.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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