|Hey Amanda! I love this poem! I only have two suggestions - First of all, you don't necessarily need to capitalize the first letter of every line - I usually only do this if it's two separate thoughts...but if it's a continuation of the line before it, there's no need to capitalize it unless it's a proper name.
The only other suggestion I have is in the third stanza -
These little shards of broken clay,
Have much potential, he would say.
I believe that you should use quotation marks on this, since it is a specific saying, and the potter is stating it as if he was saying it out loud.
Other than that, I didn't see anything else. You did a great job on this poem! Keep up the wonderful writing!