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Review of chasing ranbows  
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Dear morganwilliams,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: You have the beginnings of an entertaining story.

Suggestions: *Smile* I think you need to enlist the help of a good editor it would be a great piece, perhaps one that could be lengthened into a good book. There are many people here on WDC that would be able to give you assistance with this, and they would be glad to offer their suggestions. Good luck!

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Never Loose Hope  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Parishrut Pandey,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A piece that is full of lovely imagery. Good job with your descriptive lines.

Suggestions: *Smile* Perhaps you should check the usage of "loose" in the title. I think it might be better to use "lose", but this is only a suggestion.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Tai  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mo,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: It is always saddest to have to tell a child that their precious pet is gone. Your words paint a poignant picture of the loss of Tai.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Insolvent  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Dear Clevinger,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Interesting. Do you plan on expanding it? I think it would be an intriguing beginning for a longer piece.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of As I Fought  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Seather,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A well-thought concise poem that tells a story of life. Thanks for sharing. Good flow with good rhythm.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of My Guardian Angel  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Dreamer,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Lovely imagery graces the lines of your poem. Your free-verse style has a smooth flow as well.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Phillip,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good poem about a time that is fast approaching. Thank you for sharing your views.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Keaton,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Such a tragedy that your character felt his death was the only way he could find to justify his life. Your description of "dark" was very true. Well-written. I noticed no grammatical errors.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Shipwreck  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Valerie,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your piece speaks about the sorrow of a lost relationship. I think we all have felt a little "shipwrecked" at times.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Snow Angels  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Amelia,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A sad tale about child abuse/neglect. Your heroine escapes to an imagined world of snow angels and helping others to never know the pain that she has experienced growing up in a home where her parents are too absorbed in their own selves to be concerned with the emotions of a child. Thank you for sharing.

Suggestions: *Smile* I saw a few typos in the piece....in lines 13, 15 and again in 19. *Blush*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Barry,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: You did a good job in capturing the electricity surrounding this sporting icon. Good job.

Suggestions: *Smile* None

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Tomorrow  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear James,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely, emotion filled piece of free-verse. Your imagery is wonderful. It is a sad missive about things to come.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Nightmares  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear to make you think,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Very suspenseful! You capture a lot of emotion in this short piece.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Amire,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your piece of free-verse couplets raise some very good questions about human nature and how at times, the ugly head of jealousy is raised when we attempt to pull ourselves out of a poorer situation and strive to improve.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of The Brave  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Kings,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A very true statement about our military. I think that at times we don't thank them enough for all that they do.

Suggestions: *Smile* In the first verse and again in the third stanza, I think the use of the apostrophe in the words "friend's" and "patriot's" (respectively) is not necessary. I think it should be plural, not possessive. *Blush*

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Deanjeno,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lot of truth lies below the surface of your poetry! Death is a fate that we shall all meet one day.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Tori Rose,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good imagery in your free-verse piece.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Rescue me Daturas  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear xavier,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: The flow of this piece is smooth, and the abab end rhyme is good.

Suggestions: *Smile* None

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Image for House and Garden

Created by our dear talented Gothic Angel
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Review of Faerie Magic  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sister,

For Members Of SIMPLY POSITIVE.
Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Explanations abound in your short piece! Much faery wisdom!

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Ancient Enemies  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Dear Harry,

For Members Of SIMPLY POSITIVE.
Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: So that's why they don't get along! Good explanation of the age old battle. Good end rhymes!

Suggestions: *Smile* None

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of "Free"  
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Dear Johnathan,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Freedom while "free" is not without consequence as your character discovered. I think that you could develop this into a longer piece (did you intend this??). It has elements within that could be expanded.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Cowgirl Cat,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Cute piece about how much a cowgirl enjoys being with her horse and the reactions of others around her as she spends her time doing what she loves.

Suggestions: *Smile* In verse 4 and again in verse 7, I think you should use "they're" instead of "their". It is something that I struggle with, also. Those pesky synonyms are difficult at times.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of how you say it  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Cassandra Gracie,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good observations in this piece. The flow is good making it very smooth to read.

Suggestions: *Smile* I think that you should use an apostrophe in the word "can't". You omitted it, but used the contraction in other places.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear David,

For Members Of SIMPLY POSITIVE.
Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good story line and character development. Your imagery was so vivid that you could almost be in the street with Corbin. Already a tortured soul, he must have endured a living nightmare during the seige to find the finally find the peace he had sought during his lifetime.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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Review of Forgiveness  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Jezri,

For Members Of SIMPLY POSITIVE.
Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A very powerful message about forgiveness! God's power is awesome. Through Him we can do all things, even that which we find to be almost impossible on our own.

Suggestions: *Smile* None.

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani
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