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Overall Impression: Good depth of feeling in this piece about your homeland. Lovely imagery used.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Good luck to Davena on finding that "perfect" someone! I think that you did a great job of expressing thoughts and feelings in this letter.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: I am sorry to read of your health problem. I think you did a great job with the acrostic and with getting your point across.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: A lovely and emotionally charged piece. Your imagery is good, as is the flow of your poem. Good job!
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Nice free-verse piece filled with vivid imagery.
Suggestions: In the third stanza, last line, I wasn't sure if this was a typo or not, but the correct word should be "chilly" not "chilli".
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Overall Impression: Vivid imagery! Your end-rhyme and flow is very good. It tells of your struggles with life. I am so sorry to read of your difficulties. I know that it must be tough on you as well as your family to live with pain. We don't always know the "why" of any situation. All we can do is trust Him and know that our rewards are not in this life. I pray that you will find peace and relief of the pain that troubles you.
Suggestions: None
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Vivid imagery in this piece. Your word choice paints quite a vision.
Suggestions: None
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Overall Impression: Interesting and fun! Looks like all participants had a good time with this.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Very entertaining! I can relate....I have days like that, too! Your word choice makes the reader feel as if he/she is a part of the telling of your tale.
Suggestions: None
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Overall Impression: Such wisdom is found within your rhyming couplets! Thank you for sharing your insight.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: How true your piece resonates with me! I enjoyed your poem that tells of many of the phases of life in one of the most powerful mediums available....the written word. Thank you for sharing.
Suggestions: None.
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: Wonderful imagery throughout this lovely piece. He is always with us no matter what we do or where we go. We just have to realize that He always walks beside us. Thank you for sharing.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Such a poignant piece! Your imagery is outstanding. I can see that beautiful willow as she dances that final dance. Thank you for sharing.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Lovely tribute to your sons. Good rhyme scheme and smooth flow.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Very good story explaining the death of a pet. Sometimes little ones (and us older ones, too) don't always understand when we lose something that we love. Oftentimes, we blame ourselves, even when we know that we are not responsible. I think you did a great job of making your point.
Suggestions: None
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Overall Impression: Good flow in your free-verse piece. While the story told seemed a bit dark, it was well-written and filled with great imagery.
Suggestions: Just a minor one.....In the fourth stanza, fifth line, I think you possibly meant "you're" instead of "your".....I sometimes have problems with those pesky contractions myself.
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Overall Impression: Sometimes we can only appreciate our current situation after we have been through adversity. I think that your piece flowed well. You expressed good emotions about feelings and "hanging" in there to see an issue through to its end.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Cute concept. With a little effort, it could be turned into a children's story.
' Suggestions: I think that you have the basics of a good tale. It just needs a little polish. Unfortunately, I am not a qualified editor who can assist you with the rudiments, but there are others here at WDC who can assist you with a line-by-line review. Good luck!
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Overall Impression: Concise free-verse piece. The flow was smooth, and the imagery was good.
Suggestions: None.
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Overall Impression: Your story line is good. It gives the story of the character's demise from her point of view in retrospect.
Suggestions: I think that you would benefit from a line by line review. While I am not qualified to provide this service for you, there are others here on WDC who can do this. I noticed several grammatical errors/typos that are minor. I think that you have a great beginning, it just needs a little polish. Good luck with this!
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Overall Impression: So many times, our actions lead us to pathways of destruction. Your poem speaks of a life that ended much too soon, and the character realizes that she has unfinished issues that will never be resolved. Well written. I enjoyed the unusual style.....good job!
Suggestions: None
I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: It is a terrible feeling to lose your way.....Your concise verse conveys this feeling. Thank you for sharing!
Suggestions: Only a minor one.....In line 4, "dispare" should be "despair". Also, a question.....did you choose not to capitilize "i" for emphasis?
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: It is good to read how much you appreciate your mom and dad's parenting skills. Many children are so resentful of this. Thank you! Apparently, your parents taught you a great deal about life.
Suggestions: Unforunately, I am not a qualified reviewer. I am only a member here, as you are. I think you have a good piece, that would benefit by a line by line review. There are others on WDC who can provide this service for you. I wish you good luck with this.
I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.
Overall Impression: I love "star gazing". They always fascinate me! Good job on your piece. Your end rhyme was very good.
Suggestions: None.
I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
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