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Review of My Poetic Mind  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Poetic,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I think that all of "us" have experienced these thoughts. Good job! You have certainly captured how many of us get through another day.

Suggestions:None that would improve the poem. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Climb  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kings,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely tribute to your brother.

Suggestions: None*Smile*

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Feel  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lell,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A lovely free-verse piece. Great flow (very smooth)! It is as you described it--sweet and gentle!

Suggestions:None. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Love No More  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Onyx Wolf,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good rhyme scheme repeated through all verses. It was entertaining! It told a sad tale, however of a love lost, and a confidence breached that might never be restored again.

Suggestions: None*Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Moon  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear herheadintheclaud,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good imagery paints the lines of this piece. The free-verse form is good and the flow is smooth .

Suggestions: None. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Abiku  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Erere,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Eerie story! I thought it very entertaining. You did a good job of setting the scene.

Suggestions: None.*Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of Goodbye  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Juliette,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Short, sweet, and to the point! Sad that the two of them couldn't work it out!

Suggestions: *Smile*In the first line, I think that it would sound better to use "...as the words she was about to say..."

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Review of The Crimson Angel  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: I think that you have some good stuff crammed into this short chapter. It sounds like it would be an interesting beginning for a book, but I am sure that is what you intended.

Suggestions:Since you chose to not use the divisions that paragraphs would give, it seems as though this is one long train of thought. I think that your piece would benefit from a line-by-line review. I am not qualified to give this to you, but there are those here on WDC who could assist you with this. As I mentioned, you have some good thoughts, and a strong character to build on. It just needs a little polish that would be gained by an in depth review.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!

Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!

Regards,
Nani

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Elizabeth,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: A good piece that tells the recipient exactly how deeply your feelings are for him. You used good imagery.

Errors: In line 10, you used "looses", I think it may be a typo. I think that the correct word should be "loses".
*Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Review of PURPLE HEART  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Chris,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Your uncle sounds like a man to be proud of! Your piece was filled with interesting facts about this man.

Suggestions: I think that you would benefit from a line by line review. Unfortunately, I am not a qualified reviewer, but there are some available here at WDC if you would like to seek their assistance. I noticed some errors in spelling and in grammar, but nothing that detracts from the story. *Smile*

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Review of Dreamland  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear K. J.,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: It is a wonderful and sometimes scary world between wakefulness and sleep. You captured it well at the age of 12. Thank you for sharing this.

Errors: None.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Review of The Wolf  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Paula,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good imagery and good rhyme scheme. Your poem flows smoothly.

Errors: None.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Desperate situations deserve desperate measures!!! I thought that your "letter of eviction" was humorous and showed the irritation you felt at having the Raccoon Family and their inconsiderate habits in your shed. Oh, if getting rid of pests were that easy!!!! (LOL)

Errors:None

Suggestions:None.

I would like to welcome you to this site. It is truly a remarkable one! I hope that you find the camaraderie enjoyable, as I have. The other writers here have helped me to grow and learn in the short time that I have been a member. Reviews are excellent tools to assist us to improve our craft. The contests and activities provide opportunity to write in response to “prompts” or just to write and have others read our work. If you haven’t gotten involved please consider “jumping in”. It is a great community filled with great people who share a common bond—writing!
Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and enjoy all that WDC has to offer!
Regards,
Nani
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Review of Just a Fairytale  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Ren,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good flow and word choice. I think it would be a great C & W song!

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Review of Divergence  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear SoCalScribe,

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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good story telling! It is short, but packs a "punch". The main characters found that their chosing the path less taken saved their lives, even though they had been in danger themselves.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve the piece.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Forum. Remember that the opinions that I express are mine, as a reader on this site. I am certainly not an expert, but I do enjoy reading! I hope that you will find this review helpful.

Overall Impression: Good story-telling. Your piece is concise, but tells a good tale from beginning to end. It flows good, and has believeable circumstances. Your character development is good, also.

Errors: None noticed.

Suggestions: None that would improve your storoem.

WDC is a wonderful community for those of us who share the bond of writing. Please allow me to encourage you to continue to write and to continue to share.
Regards,
Nani
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Review of Sweet Nightmares  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Mac,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Nightmares always haunt our waking hours! Though there is often no reason for them, they still torture us with images!

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of My Little Boy  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Symfani,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Children are wonderful! This was a charming piece about the love you feel/felt looking at your son.

Suggestions: In line 11, I think you should use the possessive pronoun "your" instead of the contraction "you're" (you are).

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of The Shore  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Callie,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Surreal tale of discovery. You may have a great beginning to a longer piece. It certainly catches one's attention.

Suggestions: In line one first paragraph, I think there is a "typo"....you wrote "I see the red of my eyelids against he sunlight. I think it should be the.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Kaydee,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Your poem is sort of like life....we go through each day, hoping for the best, hoping that the "ills" in our lives will all of a sudden "cure" themselves....hoping for the scenery to change. When everything remains the same, we optimistically do it all over again the next day.

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Dark Seasons  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dear Eyz,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job. Wasn't sure what a "gothku" was, but now I see it is a gothic haiku. Flow is smooth, and the subject is certainly timely with all of the emphasis on vampires that the Twilight series has generated.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of The White Coffin  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear InksDepth,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Dream or premonition? Those brief moments between sleep and consciousness can be most confusing and unnerving. Good short tale.

Suggestions: None

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of Beauty of Life  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear sonal,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Good imagery in this free-verse piece.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Aditya Josha,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Thoughts of soldiers in war must be very confusing and sometimes desperate. I feel that you did a good job of conveying this.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Fon Zamcho,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece as a part of the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that this review is only my opinion, and you can use or. discard any portion of it that you see fit.

Overall Impression: Interesting style with good flow. I felt that your word choice told a good story in rhyme.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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