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Review of Demented  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
tragedy about a child,
who never had a chance
Ted Emend is his child.

Was always quite mild
trying to keep it now,
until that day he died
with these words here.

I grew to shed my tears
the baggage of the past,
it didn't seem to last
I found myself trapped.

By our poet RocketMan
reviewed by embe here,
with your sad words
being demented.

Simply Positive Review.
 Demented  (13+)
A tragedy about a child who never had a chance.
#2059423 by RocketMan


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the moment in time
parable of roommates,
about being the older
and then younger one.

Senior laid in a bed
and sleeping all day,
the youth concerned
for this gentleman.

Remembering music
I love listening,
to my Elvis music
do you have more?

By our DW Olsen
reviewed by embe,
in your wording
to create Elvis.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Parable of the Roommates  (E)
A parable about an older and younger roommate.
#2059363 by DW Olsen


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Review of Spider TV  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
entainment of Spider TV,
have moved to a new place
now sitting down on a deck.

Eating dinner a show begins
the black spider with red,
now sitting on her belly
with magnificent weave.

Were put into a trance
not knowing why now,
we were sucked in
being woven.

By TJ Marie~
reviewed by embe,
lovely the scenery
in your spider words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Spider TV  (E)
Entainment of Spider TV
#2031090 by TJ Marie


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Review of My love song  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (1.0)
In this moment in time
to see only one star,
because of confusing
Chahe tu saath naa.

My suggestion here
embe for our poet,
being neelam singh
wording in English.

Post to my address
in writing. com,
to read it soon
and review new.

Simply Positive Review.


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Review of carnival swings  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
when carnival swings,
in the cacophony
of excitement.

Around we go
two feet away,
our finger’s touch,
just past but too far.

When this swing stops
I rise a ride again,
flashing lights
to smile.

By our fine poet Rhyssa
reviewed by embe here,
in your lovely words
for carnival swings.

Simply Positive Review.
 carnival swings  (13+)
I shut my eyes
#2009319 by Rhyssa





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Review of Mauve Mavis  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this short poem
along the lanes,
with charcoal
slated roofs.

Gulls flee
to the inland,
from this storm
on dotting fields.

Of fresh cut corn
by black timbers,
voice of a song
thrush calls.

With purple
lining clouds,
the lonely walker
along my horizon's.

Our fine poet enga
reviewed by embe,
in your wording
wonderful.

Simply Positive Review.
 Mauve Mavis  (ASR)
Along the lanes: charcoal slated roofs, / black timbers, puce pocked stone,
#1252037 by Kåre Enga in Udon Thani






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Review of Sleepless  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
With this moment in time
you always said something,
that happens for my reason
your eyes that were closed.

Looked peaceful as you lay
there with you in his arms,
your head slightly tilted
turned seeing so beautiful.

As why there were no evil
there in a scene was calm,
like an oasis of serenity
that pooled around them.

By our dear poet Sinderen
reviewed by embe lovely,
using your fine words
in your short story.

Simply Positive Review.
 Sleepless  (ASR)
"You always said everything happens for a reason."
#2059197 by Sinderen


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time
side effect of blood moon,
never be the same again
wrapped in this dust.

My night curtain fell
for main acts to begin,
sways as west winds blow
by the wise night wizards.

This bowl full of silver
beaming is an artist,
making the witches
stuck in poetry.

By our As***ar
reviewed by embe,
using your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Side effect of blood moon  (E)
contest entry
#2059091 by Ashita








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Review of The Island  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
for the many words I,
I am an island
tiny ones.

Mind you
I stay awhile,
I don't demand it
I am not independent.

I have these memories
for anchoring down,
into the shadow
I lie in wait.

By Jaskaran
our dear member,
reviewed by embe
with your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Island  (E)
An Island Personified
#2051628 by Jaskaran




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this embarrassment moment
for some tasty Mexican cuisine,
taco joint called Tabasco Jack's
with hot tamales and refried beans.

Astronomical gastronomical moment
erupted disastrous consequence,
I made multiple resolutions
to never ever patronize.

By our poet the chef
Dave with his fine words,
being used by embe laughing
in my simple positive review.

STATIC
The Great Tabasco Fiasco  (E)
some shocking developments at Tabasco Jack's
#2027287 by Dave




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Review of Birthday Love  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a colorful moment blue
for the lovely birthday,
so many things there
that I want to say.

Making new memories
and starting new life,
shall we set that date
with starry eyes my wife.

Today this your birthday
I thank God everyday,
sending you here
my blessings.

By embe here
in your wording,
lovely this scenery
simply positive review.

 
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Birthday Love  (E)
Contest entry for Newbies Only Poetry Contest~Poem for my fiance!~
#2058929 by Jen~


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time
a lifetime of loneliness,
do you know Betty Brown
once lived a shy girl.

A flower she remained
this watcher of a life,
the activities of others
so secretly longed to join.

But there that she is dead
a wasted life is mourned,
for dearest Betty Brown
new life they adorned.

By dearest poet Harry
reviewed by embe there,
in your descriptive words
for Simply Positive Review.

 A Lifetime of Loneliness  (ASR)
Do you know any Betty Brown's?
#1019072 by Harry





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Review of The Mare laughs  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
the mare living laughing,
she trots into that dream
my solitary mind to recall.

Sitting watching the stars
when they shine over head,
stark contrast night sky
with mysterious songs.

Blackness now defined
dreams suspend reality,
by nature as night grows
echoing louder in my mind.

By a fine poet rjsimonson
reviewed by embe today,
in your descriptive
lovely words.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Mare laughs  (E)
living in a dream
#2058569 by rjsimonson




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In this moment in time
my depths of betrayal,
flooded with tears
is forever there.

And so I retire
thoughts confused,
in my darkness night
the trail of weakness.

Rapidity of breathing
slows to calm down,
in the seclusion
I dream of her.

By our Amanda
reviewed by embe,
in your fine words
married loss of you.

Simply Positive Review.
 Married to the Loss of You  (13+)
The depths of betrayal issued by one you love, is forever flooded with tears
#2058281 by Amanda E. Sweden


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Review of Gift of magic  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
In this moment in time
for our fine two gifts,
the first one by Peter
I am giving you a kiss.

If it should ever leave
I will always be around,
remind you of childhood
in staying in your heart.

The second gift by Tink
you are all I will need,
a kiss with faith & trust
so close your eyes for me.

By our dearest spidergirl
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your wondrous words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Gift of magic  (ASR)
in a world of wonder
#1506236 by spidey


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Review of Lindsey Bell  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for our softball star,
and honor student
for U of L.

So awesome
in the beginnings,
paying tolls this day
a fired-up youth wanted.

The home game for U of L
running bases to score,
in three more hits
for Lindsey Bell.

By our Tim Chiu
in a review by embe,
using your coach words
a simply positive review.

 Lindsey Bell  (E)
A fictional poem about an intercollegiate softball star and honor student.
#1592990 by Tim Chiu







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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello to our member bron 21
for this kind review by embe,
to highlight your few errors
corrected for you in kindness.

Freind - use Friend
I the pocket - use In the pocket
Than the boy - use Then the boy

Please feel free to contact me
to review your new items,
it will be a pleasure
at writing.com.

Simply Positive Review.
 My special freind   (E)
A tale of a boy and his little friend.
#1866004 by brom21


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Review of My Firpensmaggle  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time for her healing
my poem is dedicated to our own Phoebe,
my firpensmaggle has come unassembled
but I will put it back together today.

Everything would attach to it for play
I found the directions with the images,
I took the thingamajig and hooked it up
that made the doohickey turn and whirl.

I needed a moment to refuel my energy
with my confidence know I could do it,
and we would never be the same again
by Carly that has granted Writing.Com.

Reviewed by embe in my daily prayers
God in his mercy her full recovery,
in this my simply positive review.

 My Firpensmaggle  (13+)
A devise that creates hope, energy and confidence to anyone who touches it.
#2057406 by 💙 Carly



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Review of Goodbye  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
for the ocean goodbye,
calling out her name
as the tide went out.

She felt like the same
the wave at her ankles,
they pooled around her
whispering of wonders.

Or footprints in sand
she found that ocean,
a note to say goodbye
then never came back.

By our poet nightseer
reviewed lovely here,
by embe in your words
being for - Goodbye.

 Goodbye  (E)
She told me that the ocean, had been calling out her name.
#2056748 by Kat Von~ Fall is here!!!!


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment with time
there is more to life,
than just a routine
day in day out.

Shadows danced
with morning light,
in reflected buildings
rushing to the old jobs.

Day by day these hordes
wondering why perhaps,
meditating solitude
in my lonely life.

By our fine poet
being dear manicmike,
reviewed by embe here
your captivating words.

Simply Positive Review.
 The Shadows Danced  (E)
A poem about if there is more to life than just the same routine day in and day out.
#2053356 by Proton



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
In my moment in time
what's in the name,
passionate desire
unnamed creature.

For this drink
in amber warmth,
my fire breathing
in sun glaring rays.

Who dares come near
don't know my name,
in the liquid air
a brief flush.

By our Brian
a poet of note,
reviewed by embe
in your fine words.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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I Don't Know Your Name (2023)  (ASR)
Beauty and sloven, blue collar beast she holds dominion over, drawn to her indifference.
#2055123 by He’s Brian K Compton




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Review of New Day  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
on that new day today,
she ran into a forest
shattered the night.

The trees all slowly
even the ancient oaks,
my slowly shifting hue
have desire for changes.

They knew their leaves
could never compete,
their auburn lives
beneath her feet.

While a wind grew
so crisp and chill,
in depths of winter
with lungs protesting.

By our dear waterlilly
reviewed by embe lovely,
in your wondrous words.

Simply Positive Review.
 New Day  (E)
She ran into the forest, as the dawn shattered the night...
#2056431 by waterlilly




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in that day of old
sat our king and his crown today,
of jewels grander in stories told
hammers struck and embers blazed.

Songs were sung and pints raised
under the mountain’s heart alone,
his prideful heart beating bright
watchful gaze to pierce the night.

In olden halls under mountain grey
the ancient dark, no dwarf remains,
there lies our king, my Titan-Born
until that darkness away will seep.

By our fine poet of note Eldbaran
reviewed by embe in days of old,
using your creative wording
my simply positive review.

 Ogrimbal's passing  (E)
A poem about the life and death of Ogrimbal, first of the Dwarf-kings.
#2056625 by Eldbaran




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Review of Images Of Autumn  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
With this moment in time
various aspects of Autumn,
brown leaves are scurrying
on the roadside as we walk.

Witches at midnight do fly
these flames dance about,
around that black cat
by the window-sill.

Broomsticks fly
a firelight's glow,
there in the distance
across that Autumn sky.

By our poet brenmaple
reviewed by embe for you,
using your wondrous words
for a simply positive review.

 
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Images Of Autumn  (13+)
A Poem about various aspects of Autumn.
#541442 by Brenpoet


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time
about life love and death,
I saw you on the playground
you handed me that red rose.

It's been a few years there
having forgotten about you,
I am writing to this day
with my wooden pencil.

I see you in that veil
dressed in your suit,
you are so loving
am I your wife?

Please oh please
coming back today,
in your old clothes
in bed now all alone.

By our poet Livy
in a review by embe,
using your loving words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Roses on the Playground  (E)
This is just talking about life, love, and death. I really would appreciate feedback!
#2056574 by Livy203






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