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#2009523 by Samberine Everose
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Review of Souvenirs of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Mona *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonderful and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is very emotional and sentimental, though it was crafted in a few words but the memories within which makes good imagery reflected most. There is also a smooth flow within the words which enhanced the emotions to become natural and not forcefull. You did well in making this piece as a free rhyme poetry. Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Dave *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a very creative kind of poetry, and you are a genius because you did well the challenge. I know creating poetry with a poem form to follow is very crucial, because it really test our creativity and wit for setting a limitation. And as I saw this, it's very clever. Three in one poetry. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Zeke *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonderful and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was enticed to read this poem of yours while dropping by in your portfolio because the given title is some kind of interesting, that creates an intrigue to know more about it.
And as I've read the crafted lines in the body of the poem. I can say this is so sweet, and it reflects sincerity. I liked how you made the last line to give an impact. It reflects there in the poem that of all those lines that were stated before, they are meaningless compared to the last line which is true and means more than them. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Zeke *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonderful and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This poem talks about nature, how they left when technologies come, and they are more destruct also by technologies nowadays.
I liked the reflected emotions on it. You did well in holding the emotion from the beginnning till the end, without and distraction through the crafted words.
There is its natural beat or rhythm that is natural amd not forcefull. The poem is neat and ot flows smoothly. Well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of My Hand To God  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Danial Francis *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION


This is a very inspiring poetry about the love of God that He gave to us, and it reflects also here your relationship to Him.n
I liked the smooth flow and proper organized of every line. I link it to a song because there are some lines that were repeated, but its fine, it enhances more the emotion that reflects. Well done!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Waiting Is...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Danial Francis*Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonderfull and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is again a good thought about the goodness of waiting, and its attitude that develops like being patience, and endurance. Every stanza has its own good thought about waiting, and you did well in crafting it by using proper and strong words which gives an impact and enhance emotions. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! The prodigal son returns 2021. *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a good story and article, it really tests a logic.
Though some of it is hard for me to understand, I have a great time reading it.
And I thought the answer provided below is the language of the villager.😁 very clever.
Well done BFF!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!The MadSquid *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a beautiful poem about how season change. Winter to Spring is one of those we always waiting, because winter have this missing ambience, that is why we always want that winter would end and spring will immediately come.
The poem reflect emotions because you used strong words that evokes emotions, it also flows smoothly and neat. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Sea of Humanity  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Pepper *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I can say that the poem is very emotional, though its only in few words the way you've crafted have its smooth flow, and neat which evokes emotion too, and creates an impact.
The imagery is good it reminds me of two heart broken that parted their ways.Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Innerlight *Smile*

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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I liked the you used the touch of music in this poem, the imagery created reminds me like an autumn in its afternoon. The lines flows smoothly, and it gives a good imagery which evokes emotion too. I also liked how you made a spacing in some of the words.It was creative. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of My Mother's Poems  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Neva *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this piece while dropping by in your portfolio, what made me enticed is the given title. Rose always creates a good imagery, and it's my favorite flowering plants.
And as I read the crafted lines, the way how you weaved it is like the given title symbolizing, elegant and passion. You did well in showing the imagery in an artistic touch through words. I felt sadness to in the last part because it denotes that the rose is not permanent, they will come a time that it wither. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Early Morning  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Lobella *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a beautiful poem of nature that was crafted in a sophisticated manner, the flow of the poem has a unique and smooth flow,though its only in few words but it evokes emotion and have the keen sense of sight to know the beauty of surroundings with thanks to The Creator of all. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Carly *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece talks about the importance as well as the essence of a tree to us,and you did well in portraying it, with good thoughts and metapors of its existence as well as one of the beauties of nature and a thankful heart to the One who created this wonderful kind. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Again  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Dreamer *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is common, but when I read and see the crafted words in the body, I can say its moving because the way how you crafted and formatted, using a combination of free style enjambent. It has a smooth flow and it evokes emotion,there is also a certain drama within the words. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Jessica *Smile*

*BurstP**ConfettiG* Happy 18th Wdc Feastivity! *BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

We are still in the summer season, but reading this piecebof yours made me to feel about Autumn and its orange brightening sun, as well as picknickers.
You did well in crafting this piece because it creates many colorful imagery where in every imagery, evokes emotion on it. There is also its natiral rhyme and rhythm that enhance the emotions of this piece. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Homecoming  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A pleasant hour! Lot *Smile*

*BurstP**ConfettiG* Happy 18th Wdc Feastivity! *BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives a good imagery because it reglects home, and home is the place we always like to live and be at rest. And as I read the story, though its in few words but there's an impact. I think this is a horror story because the ending leaves the reader shock and thinking.
There is aldo an emotion within the story.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider.

Yes ma'am - you might mean mom, because the next line states "your father" , so the one stating thisis the mother of the child named Suzie.



MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Fly My Little One  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Lovers2write*Smile*

*BurstP**ConfettiG* Happy 18th Wdc Feastivity! *BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is very beautiful poem about encouragement and inspiration. It reminds me of someone who taking


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Leaves  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
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*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION Leaves have its own beauty, and its one of the wonders of nature, because they have this ability to be change also linkimg with the season.
You did well in showing here the beauty of the leaves, amd how they transformed in every season, with the blend of a drama of emotions. I liked also the imagery that reflects. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:

Summer's hues hide autumn’s assails;
masked pigments across many scales
shown with changes cold will call,
displays vast tones as color hails.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Incurable Romantic *Smile*


I'm your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review, my apology for not returning a response immediately in your message in my email due to life demands, and I think it would be much better to give a review in this piece of yours why I've included in my recent newsletter. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fto your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHTS AND IMPRESSION

I first liked the given title, it fits in my topic in the newsletter, though we can't find the word sacrifice in the given title, but the word survive reflect on it, though the words is simple but its direct to the point.

Then first paragraph or introduction, already interest a reader, because it gives a clue what this story is all about. The different scenes flows smoothly, it was formatted properly which gives your audience to follow until it reach it ends.
I'm sorry to hear that she was gone already, it brings sad to your audience on that part of the story in which her sickness caused her to death.
But,atleast you had a long and memorable years with her, and that is a strong hold to keep you stand.
This is a great love story because its not a fiction, but its real and true.Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Summer Changes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Pesky Amanda A.K.A. LadyNazlia *Smile*

I'm your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review of the poem you've submitted as part of the Hunter Games Activities, this is also a part of the Summer Cookout Raid brought to you by Super Powers Reviewers Group. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title is true, we can always expect changes in summer or in every season.
The scribbled words in some lines in the body have few words but its fine, because the given thought, when blended to the other lines, gives compact. It gives a moment to the reader to ponder and to feel the given imagery.
The rhyme and rhythm flows naturally and promptly which enhance the mood of the piece.Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Robert Edward Baker *Smile*

I'm your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review to this awesome piece of yours that you've submitted as part of the challenge in "The Hunter Games-CLOSED ALREADY Activities. This is also a part of the Summer Cookout Raid of the Super Powers Reviewing Groups. I hope you enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is enchanting already, it defines the good intentions where everything that God made is wonderful and good.
And as I read and ponder the words in the body, every words written reflects the beauty of His creation and its love to us.
You've painted nicely and words you used were fine, and it gives a good imagery, reflecting that we should always be thankful of this gift of beauties. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Silly Boys  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Robert Edward Baker *Smile*

*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS You've acquired a poetry review from the "The Hunter Games-CLOSED ALREADY *BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as part of the said Activity.*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

When I saw the given title my first impression is interesting, it gives me an implication that this piece will be funny as the title said: silly, and when I go and found inside the body of this piece, I can't resist to say Wow! and admire, first the appealing shape of the poetry- form shape poetry is very challenging, because it has always a limitation, testing the skills of the poet in words and style.And you did it well.

When i begin to read it, being an ESL, I'm sorry if i have the limitation to understand it.
I reflect a some kind of a good advice and I link it to peace-maybe by mentioning wars, and things that boys can do it right. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, Thankful Sonali Done 30 DBC!

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
 
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry. *Smile*
Thanks for entering in the contest.


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others perspective also. Take it if you like and drop if you don't like. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Below are the elements of a short story that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you more to write. *Smile*

TITLE: The given title gives an impression about adventure maybe by using the word picnic. Picnic always links to adventure, as well as life is full of adventures.

CHARACTERS: I found many characters here, and I can say it didn't centralize to the main characters, each character has a significance in the story

SETTING: I found here the given prompt of the contest, you did well in making it as a background that enhances the story and its sequence.

DIALOGUE: There are lots of dialogue, but it just fine because it makes the story lively and moving as well as it helps to emphasize too the characters personality.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

My only doubt is the climax of the story, I'm sorry I didn't find it here, or maybe there is a climax but I didn't notice it, I would suggest that you add more highlights or detailed on this part to create an impact on it.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*







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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Prosperous Snow Giving Thanks

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
 
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry. *Smile*
Thanks for entering in the contest.


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others perspective also. Take it if you like and drop if you don't like. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Below are the elements of a short story that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you more to write. *Smile*

TITLE: The given title gave a mystery impression and any reader will be interested to find it. This captures the given prompt of the contest.

CHARACTERS: Characters are only a few, but you managed well building their characters by showing through the way they act and move in the story.

SETTING: The setting is not totally highlighted in the story, it just serves as the background wherein it didn't outshine the other elements. The sequence is fine too, precise and has a smooth flow.

CLIMAX:The climax is in the ending part, wherein you left your reader to have their own conclusion what will be its ending.

DIALOGUE: The amount of dialogue that you put is also fine and precise, it didn't confuse or distract the sequence, instead it helps to know and shows the personality of each character.

AUDIENCE:You didn't limit your audience understanding, because you used words that are coherent, understandable but strong. It is for everybody.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*







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Review of The Walkway  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, PureSciFi

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
 
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry. *Smile*
Thanks for entering in the contest.


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others perspective also. Take it if you like and drop if you don't like. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Below are the elements of a short story that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you more to write. *Smile*

TITLE:The given title fit to describe the given prompt in the contest, though its simple but it gives an impression to be intriguing because of its simpleness but double meaning.

CHARACTERS: There are a few characters in the story, though the character was not centralized in the story in their conflict and solution, it just fine because through making up the solution or in making the characters move it was comprehended there their personality and attitudes.

SETTING: This is the part where I found the prompt of the contest the background or the main subject of the story. I can say you did well on this part. By using the different senses the reader are able to comprehend well the background and the sequence.

DIALOGUE: There is dialogue, and you did well in putting the desired amount of dialogue it didn't outshine the other elements of the story instead it makes the story lively.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any suggestion, but I am looking for the climax, if there is a climax, I didn't easily notice it, I would suggest that you add more glaze and impact on it.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*







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