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#4377376

Review of The Constant Heart

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am reviewing this piece of yours as part of my contest "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

which will be opened again this February, and I am trying to review all its entries in the preparation of its opening, so your piece chance now to get my review.

As I ponder every line, every line can stand alone and it has its own unique meaningful good thought, and when I think them all as a whole it reflects that a true love can't be fade even years may wither. True love will always renew and not to be olden by years.
If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent
This is sweet and beautiful, no wonder that it got the grand prize. Congratulations once again!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
We've shared a life of laughter, love, and tears
yet each new day renews my lover's guise.

If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4377370

Review of Sunny's Review Forum

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, sunnystarr

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again sneaking within the pages of your folders and notes and my eyes catches this wonderful forum of yours. Reviewing always built a good and friendly gesture in the community, this is where we can gain friends as well as improved our writings because everyone have their own opinion and views on it. It's always been good to hear a comment what they think about our creation, Right.
So, I can say this is a good forum to encourage everyone here to review, because creativity is already in us, we will always be motivated when we are in the creativity mode, but we need also a review booster, like this awesome forum.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4376673

Review of The Breath of Love

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Dave

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am giving my review to all the participant's entries in my heart season contest "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

and now its your entry chance to receive my review, this is in the preparation for the opening of the said contest for next year again. Thank you for entering and looking forward for your participation again.

This lovely piece of yours even if it was scribbled in few words but the chosen words stir and gave an impact. It is like a quote- it reminds me of a beautiful note that best to post in a card and bring a smile to any one who receive it. Its beautiful.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
tattoos your name

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, my only doubt is its fewness, though it gave an impact but I am expecting for more, it leaves the reader to crave for more lines on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4374285

Review of LORNDA / WC. 31

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, sunnystarr

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I got fascinated again to read this piece of yours, while strolling in your homefolio, it sounds interesting for me when I find out in the title the name of one of our famous and awesome WDC member- Lornda, so I'm sure this is a tribute for her.

Using the acronym form of poetry will always test the creativity of the author because of its limitation on it. So I can say that you did well and using the form of poetry which the scribbled words reflects dedication, and sincerity of the said person. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4374158

Review of Tell Not A Soul.

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, sunnystarr

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here again to continue my meandering in your beautiful homefolio, having a great time reading your stuff and poetry, and this one enticed me.
The given title are not easy to pick what its mean, its in a metaphorical statement, and it gives a good imagery. And as I ponder the scribbled words in the body which is more beautiful than the given title, it reflects a good but sad thought about pretending.
I like the part where you immediately add the verse that gives a metaphorical meaning about one true soul. The enjambment style creates a speed as well as control and slow down the speed of some lines which makes this poem be beautiful that enhanced too the created rhyming and rhythm. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4373846

Review of Must Enter, Must Win!

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi, THANKFUL SONALI 17 WDC YEARS!

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing this piece as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

. Thanks for entering!

Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here are just only my humble own opinion and views as a reader, don't forget that this will change by others perspective also. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I hope you will find my reviews to be helpful to you and encourage you more to write. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:The title is simple, the given impression is an aim of every entrant to enter in contest. The good on it is its very encouragement, cuz it stated there the goal.

IMAGERY:Just like the created title, it links on the body what this piece will be all about. The created imagery is good, it gives different hues or colors, beautiful pictures.

TONE/MOOD: Since the first stanza, you already hold the created mood or emotions on it. It gives a light and fun mood.

RHYME & RHYTHM:Using a formed poetry like limerick is not so easy, because there is a limitation or a rules that must follow, and for me you did well in following this form which also helps to enhanced the created emotions of the piece.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I didn't find words that distract the flow, but I have a doubt on the created emotions,
maybe just because I am still expecting more on its emotions.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!

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#4373841

Review of The Ballad of Donald Trump and the Angel

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 18+

| (4.5)

Hi, Christopher Roy Denton

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing this piece of yours as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

. Thanks for entering!

Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here are just only my humble own opinion and views as a reader, don't forget that this will change by others perspective also. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I hope you will find my reviews to be helpful to you and encourage you more to write. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:The given title for me is trendy, though I live in the PH but everyone knows about the latest President of US: Donald Trump, and using it or making your poem talks about him will really give an interesting impression, other than saying that he is the talk of everywhere, so in other words he is famous.

IMAGERY: I liked the you created this piece as some kind of a story telling within the body which audience/reader can be ponder on it. The voice that you used or the words that you chose to tell or show the story is for everybody, which mean that even an ESL (English Second Language) can grasp or comfortable reading it.

TONE/MOOD: The emotions that are intended to bring out,reflects naturally and not forcefully, it gives an amusing at the end.

RHYME & RHYTHM:The created rhyme and rhythm that formed in the poetry you used is in proper to enhance the emotions within the piece.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem, but as for my belief- Christian, its improper to use the name of the Lord especially if the fact is not true about Him, even if its only in comedy and fiction.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!

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#4373830

Review of Science Friction

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your this piece of yours as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

. Thanks for entering!

Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here are just only my humble own opinion and views as a reader, don't forget that this will change by others perspective also. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I hope you will find my reviews to be helpful to you and encourage you more to write. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE: The given title for me is creative, and clever, like playing with words, it emphasized the trends of the world's today as well as an impression to be reluctant by using the word " Friction" on what modernization or science gives us sometimes. They said Science leads us to make our life easier, but everything under Science or technology are not ideal and perfect specially if its exaggerate.

IMAGERY:With every stanza it has its own imagery or view on what Science or technology will lead us already. And you are right on what you have all stated my friend. Science is good for the betterment in our lives but if we overdo or go beyond extreme it will going to devastated us already.

TONE/MOOD: The way how you showed your idea through choosing appropriate words that state examples of what science or technology do and did to us already creates and enhanced the tone or mood which is fun and interesting to read which made me smile at the end.

RHYME & RHYTHM: You followed well the form of poetry that you used. The created rhyme and rhythm blends with the tone and mood which gives an aura of being light and fun to read.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I did't find any word or typos, but I mostly find this as an informative and interesting to read.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!

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#4373826

Review of One-Liners in Rhyme

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Jay O'Toole

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your piece as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest"

. Thanks for entering!

Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here are just only my humble own opinion and views as a reader, don't forget that this will change by others perspective also. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I hope you will find my reviews to be helpful to you and encourage you more to write. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:I should have a double look on it before I catch its meaning, it gives also a metaphorical meaning like one flash story that gives a good sense.

IMAGERY: Every stanza have its own story, the imagery is vivid and it has its own amusement and gives a good laugh, its like a palette that consist of different colors or a different menu in a large plate.

TONE/MOOD:Just like I have said every stanza have its own unique amusing and funny style. Maybe the way how you compact it and made it that way and have a story of it in every stanza. It tickle my bones and laugh.

RHYME & RHYTHM:The produced rhyming and rhythm is very fine and perfect, that enhanced the emotion to extract it well and catch by readers.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!

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#4372684

Review of Where's Christmas in the South?

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Jade Amber Jewel

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Winter is coming, and of course Christmas is coming, we don't have winter here in the Philippines so reading about winter in other country like yours always gives me an interesting to think and to know more about it.
I can say the way you scribbled this neaty poem is nice and full of exciting imagery about winter and Christmas. The way you made the stanza to be in few words gives a hook and be vivid and readable, as well as the emotion created is reflecting. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4371794

Review of Reflecting on Winter

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, River

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! this is the continuation of my review as part of the goodies from Teddy Bear Gift Basket. Just because winter is coming so while being wondering in your portfolio this one grab my attention, where in I found it interesting because the season of winter is coming and when I think about winter it always reminds me about Christmas.

The story is good and easy to comprehend, the way how you narrate and showed to your audience flow smoothly and the sequence of the story is easy to follow.

You are right, winter is only fine when it begins, but its become dull and lonely, maybe winter should be in a short span of time,so that it will not become disaster. We don't have winter here in the Philippines, but thinking about snow and snowflakes makes me wonder and amaze and the very cold season there in your place.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I only have one doubt that arise.

Last night I was lying in bed listening to large chucks of snow falling from the roof. I began to reflect on winter.

You might mean-

I began to reflect the winter.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4370241

Review of Halloween Horror?

Review by Samberine Everose

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour, River

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here again to drop you more reviews before Halloween will ends,😺 so below are my comments on some elements of a short story that I reflected while reading this piece of yours,I hope you will encourage more to write and find my review to be helpful. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

Title the title is good, I know that this is already scary because I found it already on the title,simple and specific, the question marks helps also to become an interesting because it gives the opportunity for the reader to know about it.

Plot -the plot is simple also,about spider,but the way you showed and how you tell to your reader is very interesting and intriguing,specially on the first line or the beginning, until the end. I'm not scared of spider but the way you tell your story makes me to be frightened on that creature already.

Setting- the setting didn't outshine the main element, but serve as to enhanced it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow,I just only have doubt on this line.

My heart was racing in my chest.

You might mean:

My heart beat race fast in my chest.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4369631

Review of The Submerged Items of WdC

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Nixie Martell cheerleader

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I'm here again to give you review on this piece of yours that I found in your awesome portfolio. Below are my views and comments that I reflected while reading this piece of yours. I hope you will be encourage and fine my reviews to be helpful to you.

I love poems, I love to dabble it too, but I'm no poet. So I can relate what you stated here.
I love poems because I am amazed on how those few words or few lines draw me, gave such feelings like make me cry, smile, or in love even just reading it with its created fun in rhyming and rhythm.

I link poems also to colors as well as have their own fragrance.

This scribbled piece gave a good opinion as well as something to be think about.

The short poem that end this opinion sounds that your pet dog is very dear to you.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4369322

Review of A PLACE IN MY HEART

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Hi, Monty

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I am dropping you a review as part of the recent heart contest "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

last February, where in all entries will receive review before opening again the said contest this February.

So the given title for me is lyrical, I often stumble it in song but even if its simple but the given thoughts gave an impact.

The scribbled words in the body have its own unique style in defining what valentines is, though its the scary season and ghost already around, but reading this awarded piece of yours brings me to be surrounded like the days in February.

The way how you arranged the strong words that were perfectly chosen gave a good and vivid imagery as well as the created rhyme and rhythm reflect naturally like the emotion. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
Time never stops, always moves on
And you kept a place in my heart.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS being the second winner!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4369127

Review of I'm mad

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here again to give you your review goodies as part of the Teddy Bear Gift basket from your secret pal.

The given title is simple and any one can relate on it, its a strong emotion but it gives an interesting impression.

All I can say is you showed well in the scribbled words in the body of this piece the emotion that stated on the given title. I liked how you used strong verbs and arrange and put them properly which gives a good imagery and a story. The amusing that I find here is the horrible image of your kitchen which the season winter did. Well Done! Congratulations on the awardicon!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I wonder why you didnt use any punctuation marks like exclamation or even period.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4369123

Review of Christmas Eve Is Getting Crazy

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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A pleasant hour, Jade Amber Jewel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Christmas is most wonderful time of the year, so whenever I see piece about christmas there is this charm that every one can be hooked to read on it, and you are right, Christmas eve is always getting crazy.

As I ponder the scribbled words in the body, the most and the best thing that I reflected is the enthusiasm that reflected in the piece, I found a symbol and the meanings of Christmas, its about doing things with the whole family. Christmas is family, or where we can find home, and I liked the thoughts that reflected in this piece, even if sometimes eve before Christmas is so rushing and sometimes stressing for the preparation. well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4369122

Review of The Visit

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Rated: 13+

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here to continue my read and reviews as part of your Teddy Bear Gift basket goodies, and this piece of yours sounds interesting to me while dropping in with my little wings in your homefolio.

Below are my comments and opinions of the different elements of a short story that I reflected most in your piece. I hope you will find encouragement and find helpful on my reviews.

TITLE- The given title is interesting to me, though, its simple and on few words but pondering it gives me an impression to be mystery, its good that you used the article The here, it highlights more and give special on the main subject.

PLOT - The plot is simple, and interesting, because of letting us to share about her and her likes of cats, and I reflect also a person behavior here that made me curious to search and to know more about it.

SETTING - You used a narrating style and its good that you showed well the story in order, properly and vivid. Though, the background has not been obvious in showing here but just only a background, but it enhanced the main elements of the short story that you used.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, just only want to know or expect a more impact on the scene especially at the conclusion or ending part of the story.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4368944

Review of "He lights up My Soul"

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!LegendaryMask❤️

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, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! my friend, I'm here again to pamper you review because I am having a wonderful time strolling around between the pages of your folders in your portfolio, I think my tiny wings already glued on it.

I found this piece again to have my read and I would like to give a review.

I love the first line on it, it stated already the blessings that He are giving to us. Every line have its own impact ness or in-dept of words which gives a good and thoughful views.
I agree on the given title, compact of the scribbled body is the Light that lights up our soul. Besutiful.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some doubts that arise while reading this piece of yours, I marked my doubts in red and my suggestion is in green. Thank you for allowing me to review your work.

You bring in love, tenderness and hope into my soul.
You might mean:
You bring me love, tenderness and hope.

using in love gives another meaning,
into my soul- reiterating it again,I first read it on the first lines.

This feeling brings me an electrifying warmth deep.
inside me.- out of place, using again pronoun me.

For those who have experienced it too, know that
feeling deep inside.
When He lights up one's soul.paraphrase to make it firm, this line is loosening.

Every knew The Feeling
when He lights up one's soul.

There is a great celebration that's waiting to get out. Paraphrase this by using simile

A great celebration like a freedom dove.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4368935

Review of My Darling

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!LegendaryMask❤️

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CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again, the silly fairy between the pages of your folders and items in your portfolio, while flip and flopping my wings and this piece I would like to drop a little review. Though, Halloween is already coming and even my case face is a ghost scary but while being here in your romance-folder homefolio, I think hearts day is just always every where.

The given title is sweet for me, everyone knows it and can relate about it, its an endearment to our love one.

I'm not in love on this moment, but when I try to ponder the scribbled words in the body, it reminds me of valentines day specially the special someone in our life.
The scribbled words are light and simple but the emotion that reflect gives on impact and it will or can touch the readers heart. Lovely words!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4368932

Review of You will always be in my Heart

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!LegendaryMask❤️

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I am having a great time strolling in your awesome portfolio, and looks like you are doing well and finding your way here in the WDC Community. Keep up the good work!

I found this piece of yours again for being nosy around in your homefolio, why it hooked me because of the good impression that it gives on the given title, though the scribbled word is common, and its not my first time that I stumble it, which reminds me a lyric of a song but the good imagery and thoughts it gives, its lightness and specific denotes its good quality and leveled into the poetic and lyrical style.

The first thing that touches me while pondering the scribbled words in the body, is the impact of the emotion which signifies sincerity and truth ness within the words. I also find a story within the piece, I liked how the way you showed it, though, not totally in riddle ness but not also in the obvious way.

The enjambment or free style that you used helps a lot to control the speed while reading which gives the reader a moment to ponder the good imagery of the piece. Beautiful.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. Well Done!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4367146

Review of My Most Precious Treasure

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

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A pleasant hour, River

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this piece while having a great time hanging around in your portfolio, everyone can relate on the given title, everyone have its own precious treasure, mine is my little one who already two years old, and its always good and interesting to know who's making our everyday and bring sunshine to our world.

The first thing that made a story to be special and great if this is to be a non-fiction or biographical, because the emotions reflect easily and felt, maybe the writer would chose and know immediately the best words that they can use to show, how they felt and share to their audience.

I can say this story is great, I reflected a loving parent,grandmommy who loves grandkids, and the happy times spent that I think its a treasure to keep and cherish.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

just a simple typo: Tresure- should be Treasure.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4367134

Review of The Lord is my Bubble Wrap !!!!

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!LegendaryMask❤️

Welcome to WDC!

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm having a great time strolling in your portfolio this time, and this one hooked my attention, why it hooked me because of the given title, which gives an impression to be the new trend or stylish to explain on how God loves us.
Bubble wrap gives an impression that whenever we fall or stumble, we will not get hurt, because we always count Him to protect us, to shield us in anything that might hurt us.
Thinking Him to be our bubble wrap, even if how tremendous storm of life come, we will always be refuge and protected.

The scribbled words in the body is in few words, its simple but when I try to ponder its metaphorical meaning it have an impact, it tells how God love us, and you are right, God loves His children, He is the great Father and He Bubble wrap us.

Well Done!

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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4367093

Review of Be Punctual!

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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A pleasant hour, Jade Amber Jewel

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an impression about a good quality that one must have, so any reader that passes by will definitely give a second look on it, as for me, though the given title is some kind of simple and anyone can relate on it,its always an interesting thing to know and become punctual.

The way how you scribbled the words and show how punctuality can be so good or bad to things are proper and vivid.
There is this unique style in the flow and the arrangement of words which is natural and not being forceful in the way you are showing or telling it.

Rhyming is not needed here, cause some of lines are not in rhyming, but even if some lines are not in rhyming there is this beat or rhythm within the lines.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I had some doubts for you to consider, I marked my words in red and my suggestion is in green. Thank you for letting me review your work.

for example one must get to their flight,
or people will be wondering where you are.

You might mean:

To avoid people to ask you why.- paraphrasing it makes simple and specific.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
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#4364226

Review of Poetry Man

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, ♥Hooves♥

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I am giving reviews to all the entries in the "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

before its opening again and this time is your piece chance to review.

The given title gave an impression to be special, it reminds me a man who loves poetry, and made me to think that they are romantic too.

As I ponder the scribbled words in the body, I reflected a true emotions within, which described and showed how you really loved your love.
This reminds me like a love that had not been change even times had flies.
Like its all the first time.
Both of you are sweet. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
February's dazzling romance fun!
Snow mobiling cross the fields

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, I just have doubt on line:
Snow mobiling cross the fields

No space between Snow and mobiling so that you will not give a different impression or definition.

The Awardicons deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4363666

Review of Those Who Came

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Danial Lucas

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again having a great time strolling around in your homefolio
and this piece of yours enticed me again to have a read and give my review.
The given title gave an impression of something that is welcoming maybe by using the word came, but using the word "those" emphasized persons,I find the given title to be a part of an statement where gives or left the reader being in curious.

As I ponder the scribbled words in the body, I liked how you showed the emotions within, the created imagery blends with the created emotions. I also find a story within the piece and I will pick the sad emotion portraying for it.
I do first liked the nature that you used to express those emotions.

I mostly liked the created rhyming and rhythm which flows naturally. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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