|MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION
Just found this piece of yours in your portfolio, it hooked me though the title gives an impression to be dark or somehow dull, disappointment, but it sounds interesting,and other than that I am a fan of English sonnet poem.
And as I ponder this in literal, specially in metaphorical, the given meaning is full of thoughts, and creates colorful imagery, it combines the imagery of the different seasons, mostly autumn and winter which gives or reflect a dull or sad colors, that is where I link it in the given title. The way how you weaved the words which creates beautiful imagery stimulate the emotion, and I admire how you handle the emotions you begin to portray without adding other emotion that can distract its smooth and fluency. Well Done!
MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have one doubt for you to consider,
by using the word azured- I try to find it in the dictionary but I don't a word azured, you might mean azures or azure..?
other than that, I have no doubt already,
the awardicon deserves well. Congratulation.
MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.
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