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#4363654

Review of Skyward Channel

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Hi, 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

This review is Brought to you by:"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece while having a great time strolling in your portfolio,and this one enticed my attention.
The given title gives an impression to be a movement, it reminds me of anything that moves in the sky, like storm or rainbow, and when I try to ponder the created words in the body, I immediately liked the way how you formed the words within the lines, it gives a moving imagery, the first line already moving stating about a tornado which gives a bit an emotional reaction. I think its clever also just only find out after I read that its an acronyms of a Water Tornado, as well as good definition where you showed it well. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Together the spiraling mists and the waves
order young sailors like me to their graves,

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4363628

Review of Midnight Blues

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi Shivay💃

This review is Brought to you by:"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I'm here your friend, giving you review for the one that you requested me to review,
Thanks for requesting, it means that you liked my review.

Midnight Blue- the given title is metaphorical, it gave a dark impression, but beautiful and mystery.I already stumble the title as a title of a great classic music in the piano.

I find the story that was shared in this piece is full of emotion, poignant, feeling of the other shades of being in love. Its not love if we don't feel the combination of its good and bad on it, or the sweetness and despair.

They said we only measure the love that we gave when we feel the hurt on it.
Its not love if we don't feel the pain.
But we should not be think or give serious, specially when we are still young,
they said first love gave a hard burst and can never dies but true and last love is more better than the first.
We can learn through our experience and we may get a good wisdom on them.

I find this like a blog, because the emotions is intense.
Maybe, if this is put it in a poem, it will be more striking.

Cheer up my friend.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4362916

Review of Trees

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Danial Lucas

This review is brought to you by: "Spread the Love Raffle - Closed" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again, the fairy flipping in between the pages of your folders and items in your portfolio, and this piece of yours hooked my attention.
Trees always creates metaphorical meaning to us, anyone can be inspired looking at trees and their magnificent appearance, its one of the beauties of nature and as ponder the scribbled words in the body of your item, it made me to think more how trees has been beautiful.
I do liked the stanzas:
from always was
to will always be
it gives me a imagery of cycle, it reminds me the things that we need from trees and the trees need from us also.
The way how you express this piece is in natural, all words smooth fluently, it doesn't hard or forceful when reading it, specially the metaphorical meaning.
Everything is in good order as well as the way how you formed it in enjambment style. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4362909

Review of Star-Crossed Beauty

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

This review is Brought to you by"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I came across to your piece while strolling in your homefolio, being my fave author this month, I will be giving you reviews as my gift to you for celebrating anniversary month.
The given title is eye catching because the word star always gives a good imagery, it emphasized a magnificent beauty.

When I ponder the scribbled words in the body, the first line hooked me because it gives a powerful voice.
I dreamed of you- making it in few words centralized the attention of any reader to continue the reading.

Then follows the memories that states how and why the certain muse had been dreamed of. The way how the scribbled words being portrayed have a poetic distinction even if its in a paragraph form so I will think this as prose.

It flows smooth and vivid, it visualize me of a girl who have a simple wish and dreaming. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
I dreamed of you.
Very powerful lines.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4361392

Review of My Love To The Wind

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Danial Lucas

This review is brought to you by: "Spread the Love Raffle - Closed" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here again the little fairy having a great time strolling within the pages of your folders and items and this piece of yours pulled again my wings to stay closer and magnified between the words on it.

The title gives a poetic touch because of the arrangement of words you used blending it with the given thought in metaphors.
I find it in personification because love only applicable to living things, and wind is a natural element.
In metaphorical meaning, wind can symbolize of something or someone.
The effect of the title is bi-meaning or have two interpretation.

The scribbled words in the body is emotional, it reflect the mood on it. I mean I feel the emotions. Chosen the right words and its proper arrangement helps and enhanced the emotion as well as creates a good imagery and metaphorical meaning. Using words that links to nature always gives an ethereal impression, I can say punctuation are not really needed here. Its a poetic verse that just continues to bleed. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4361383

Review of Autumn Brings Changing Hearts

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour!Danial Lucas

This review is brought to you by: "Spread the Love Raffle - Closed" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Being my favorite newbie this month I have the fun time strolling with my wings in your portfolio to find something to read and review,and this one hooked me while wondering around. What makes me hooked is the word Autumn. I always love the beauty of each season specially summer, autumn, spring and the least is winter, and this one gives an impression about fading or changing, though it specified on the given title, the arrangement of the words were properly and creates a poetic touch, maybe the rhythm between the rhyme.

Then I found the given title highlighted in the first line of every stanza, which begins a good start or a greetings.

I liked the created rhythm and rhyme between the stanza, the words used or the arrangement of words were naturally used and not been forceful, so the outcome or the flow become smooth and very fine. It reminds me of mellow like the given title-autumn.

I reflect this piece as metaphorical meanings of Autumn in its own unique beauty, from a hot range of colors of the sun which is summer then slowly diminishing its color to a subtle soft orange.
I also liked the part that you've mentioned some colors to described well the beauty of it. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is using punctuation marks, I am a fan of punctuation marks it enhanced the emotions within the piece, as well as control the flow and speed. I can't find any punctuation here, I wonder if this piece is intended not to add any punctuation.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4361189

Review of An Introvert's Love Story

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi, Shivay💃

This review is Brought to you by:"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Thank you for requesting a review from me, that means that you liked the way I review.

So below are my comments to the elements of short story that I had reflected while reading this piece of yours. I hope you will find helpful and encourage you more. Thank you for allowing me to review your works.

POV(POINT of VIEW) -the point of view the you used is in the first person. This is good especially if you excel most of comfortably using this POV because it helps to enhanced the emotion, using POV first person will give an impression to let the reader feel the emotions within the character, it will give the possibility to get a sympathy from the reader, but there is a limitation using this POV, because you just only concentrate on the one who is the main character of it.

SETTING - The setting here is good, you didn't give more emphasize on it or using the formal way in showing the setting, you just made like a background, but its okay because it didn't outshine the main element.

CHARACTERS - you only have one main character here, and the story was centralized to him, using also the POV first person helps to introduce more your characters personality, you didn't mentioned or stated in the piece, but the audience will going to sense it, in the way how you showed the way the characters personality through his act and the way he move in the story.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS:

I have some few doubts for you to consider, please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I marked my doubts in red and green is my suggestion.

The format- I wonder why you used an align center format way, I would suggest the align left, to make an impression that the story is formal, using an align center its give an impression that the story is dancing.

I think using an align center can be applicable only to poetry specially for a concrete poetry.

I cannot believe it. Am I really doing it? What am I going to say to her? you might mean What will I going to say to her?- will gives an impression to be something that we like it to happen. Using the pronoun am gave an impression that the character is in doubt.

What if she doesn’t like me? What if I upset her? Oh God! Why is it so hard? We’ve known each other for years. What’s wrong in finally meeting her? Nothing, right? But then why’s my heart beating so loud? the contraction why's here, I suggest that you should not make it that way, using contraction is informal, and the s "is" not needed here already
You might mean But then why my heart beating so loud
Why couldn’t I just stay at home, be alone and enjoy my vacations.

I should go back. This was a bad idea. I Shouldn’t have come here at all. But what will she think if I don’t show up. I’d just say I had some urgent work. Yeah that’d be right. Using contraction gave an impression to be informal.
But would it be? She does know my college is off. I don't understandabout this. Is this mean that the introvert didn't like to tell her that he is not already going to school, in college.

Doesn’t makes much sense, does it. I know.
Second Paragraph. because the written before this are the thoughts of the character, you might like to italic them too, to distinguish properly.
These were the thoughts I had when I was going to meet her for the very first time. We were friends for over three years, but never once in those three years did we ever met, not even once. We recognised only recognized each other through our WhatsApp Dp’s only. Crazy! Right.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4358753

Review of The Owl and the Mermaid

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, Jellyfish-on holiday

This review is Brought to you by:"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I found you as one of the beautiful people here in WDC who will celebrating its WDC Anniversary this month, so I will give you a gift review as my gift to you,and this item of yours hooked my attention while strolling in your home-folio.

The given title gives a fairy tale impression, I always enticed to read a fairy tale because it lightens a mood and encourage to see things in its simplicity, to dream,hope and wish.

The scribbled words in the body is vivid and have colorful imagery, you took me to a wonderland like WDC below the sea where Ariel and beautiful sea creatures like jelly fish living in it.

I can say all is perfect, the words you've chose which is in showing not telling.

I do liked the poetry form that you used. I tried to see the links to know the rules and format on how to create like this, but I just only found an example. Please let me know the rules or some link on how to create a poetry like this. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
And the jellyfish sang in the balmy night

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4358457

Review of Reflection of the Night

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

Hi, ♥Hooves♥

This review is Brought to you by:"Spread the Love Raffle - Closed"

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I've seen that you are of those beautiful people here in WDC who are celebrating anniversary this month, and I'm here to give you a review as my gift to you.

Below are my comments to some element of a short story that I reflected while reading this piece of yours.

SETTING - The setting is fine, though some of it were not in detailed or express it formally but it served as the background and enhance the story.

CHARACTERS - You used the first POV and its fine because you've handle it the character properly by showing and not telling its personality through their moves and how they talks.

DIALOGUE - There are a few dialogue, but its just fine, because you excel in the narrating form and its just fine for the way how the story was created in the first POV.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4357988

Review of A SMILE DOES THE TRICK!

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Dorcas

This review is brought to you by: "Spread the Love Raffle - Closed" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found your piece while strolling around in the reviewing section of WDC, I'v egot hooked on it because the given title gives an interesting impression.
Smile always brings shine to our world if we can receive one from others. Is the best gift that we can receive everyday.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled words in the body showed everything the good thing about smile and what it give to others. Every stanza have its own thought and lesson that reflects on t.
The emotion is light and inspiring. There is a rhythm every line but its fine when it is not in rhyming, it enhanced the emotion being natural and not forceful. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have doubt why you used the numbering in every stanza, it gives an impression to e a enumerating form and distract its poetic form.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4357983

Review of Love comes softly

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!Danial Lucas

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in WDC and Happy WDC days! this month

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I just found this item of yours while strolling around in the reviewing page, it hook me because there is a unique poetical emotion within the lines.

In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The created body is more beautiful than the given title. The used of words that you've chose to describe the feeling is in showing not telling.
I liked the given title which been seen in every stanza, its like an echo.
Free Rhyming and its enticed the created emotion that I reflect. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4357933

Review of No love at first sight

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Cadie Laine

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece while strolling around in your portfolio, I got been hook becuase the given title contradict the saying "love at first sight", want to know why the title gives a caption in aa negative statement.

The scribbled words in the body is have its own uniqueness and deepness, the words used are light but it strike the heart, I mean its totally melt the heart, I rather say this is a love note because the description being used was showed not told.
The rhyme and rhythm are links in the emotions that reflect on it, it flows naturally and not been forceful. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4357310

Review of Times, They Are A-Changin'

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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Hi, Winnie Kay

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Its your anniversary month so I have the time and dropped by in your awesome portfolio to give you a review.
And I found this nice piece of yours while strolling between the pages of your folders and items.

I hope I will encourage you and find my review to be helpful. Thank you.
The title is not common for me, I mean its not a cliche, its intended with a purpose, like making the verb changing into changin gives me an impression to be in a slang and adding it with article A- really asking the reader to see in clearly.
For me I only reflect the meaning as time is really changing, maybe being an ESL there are limitations on how I understand.

The first thing that I reflected while reading the body of this nice piece of yours, is the emotions within, maybe by using exclamation and by using words that mostly they are showing and not telling like for example:

But wait—Oh my!
A score of souls in ghastly clothes.

Her jeans are torn. He has no tie.
A cell phone rings

And they are so properly crafted, even the rhyme and rhythm are in order.

I've seen that below you stated the kind of poetry form that you followed, maybe you would like to state more about that kind of poetry form.

As I've said being an ESL (English Second Language) I have a limitation and there are some meanings that I missed it specially the metaphorical meaning.

But I think this is well crafted.

FAVORITE LINES:

I don my hat and gloves and hose
to venture out and take repose
in Sunday praise

I love the enjambment style you did here.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise. Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4355341

Review of Autism Misunderstood

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this nice piece of yours while strolling around in your awesome portfolio, I've got interested on the given title, about autism, I already have read and search a few about it, because I have too a causin who are autistic, since birth he can't mumble a word, his mom(my aunt) didn't send him to school because they can't understand him, and we don't have a school of autistic here in our place, but my causin can understand well even if he can't talk, he know how to repair things like appliances that have motors or mechanic even if he do not been sent to school. Now he is 32 and always in their house far from others and no friend.
As I've read this piece of yours it made me to think of him as well as understand and learn also.

I love this part in your piece:

The complex autistic mind is God’s grand design,
Evolved beyond the human norms assembly line.
Their minds are filled with knowledge and creative flow;
People fear the different and cling to what they know.

They are special, unique and gifted person also.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4354594

Review of When Bobby Met Ken

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

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I'm Samberine Everose

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Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya!, so this piece of yours enticed me again to drive in while strolling between the pages of your story folder in your homefolio.

Below are my comments on some of the element of a short story that I reflected while reading this piece of your. Feel free to pick it if you like and just ignore of you don't like, Thank you for allowing me.

TITLE The title seems to be very interesting, for me using a name as a title gives an impression to be special and importance of the theme or subject that were used. I may consider it as intentionally to used the two names used as the main characters in the story, is there a rumor between them in WDC.

Just kidding.

CHARACTERS - You only have two characters here, but even if its few or only two characters, you did well in the way they handling the story, using also the names of two famous author here in WDC land enhanced the story and creates more interesting that any viewer/reader will be curious to know and will going to find about it.

DIALOGUE - As usual, you did well in this part, like watching the scene where the main characters having a conversation, which makes the story lively.

PLOT - The plot is very welcoming and interesting that anyone would like to read it and enjoyed at the end.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
He gaped at the fine figure of manhood propping up the bar. Patting his own spare tire, he gazed longingly at the chiseled muscles along the man's arms. Yet this hunk couldn't be any younger than sixty. At forty-eight, Bobbie had thought he was the oldest here.

Very fun and complete description.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4350339

Review of The Personal Trainer

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

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A pleasant hour!!Quick-Quill

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I'm Samberine Everose

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and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the package you've won.

CONGRATULATIONS once again

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

The word Trainer for me in the given title gave me an impression to be a Mentor, so that makes the title to be interesting. Mentor always creates good impression because its always serve them as our inspiration.

THE BODY-

Below are some elements of a story that I reflected while reading this piece of yours.

CHARACTER - You have only few character, and the story concentrated to only one person-the main character Nancy. The way how you introduced her to your audience through her routine activities, are vivid and though you didn't used the way in the formal manner or narrating manner, your audience can sense it her personality through the way she move.

POV- THE SEQUENCE OF THE STORY The sequence of the story is fine and proper, stating the routine of Nancy, I sense some romance too.

DIALOGUE - You did great in using dialogue and its good that you've included dialogue because dialogue helps and make the story lively like watching a television, where the character are moving in the way they talk.

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4345312

Review of The Day I Made My Mother Speechless

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 18+

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Here's my third review, I'm sorry if only now that I send it to you,
The given title is interesting, giving the reader an intriguing statement about stating something special on that day that made her speechless, that is why I picked this piece of yours to know what's behind that day that made her speechless.

Below are my comments in some elements of a short story that I reflected while reading the nice piece of yours:

TITLE- As I've said the given title is intriguing, its also gave a lively aura.
CHARACTER- The characters are only two, its like a conversation but its good, though the way how you showed the personality of the character are not in the formal way, but through their conversation the reader may sense each own personality.

PLOT - The plot is fine and the sequence of their conversation is proper, making your audience to be hooked on the beginning and stating a fact that gives an impact on the ending part. Very Nice and amusing.

DIALOGUE The dialogue always makes the story lively, so using dialogue here is like watching a scene moving in a television.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4342231

Review of Perception Determines Reception

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, again teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

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to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

When we perceive another human to be safe, he or she can be received into our confidence.

The given brief statement made me to hooked to read this piece of yours as well as the given title too.

Based on the article point of view that I reflected, talks about how can we accept one another, though we have different beliefs, race, unique individuality, accepting each one not for agreeing and forgot our own but by means of respecting each one own unique individual ness.
Very informative piece teacher Jay!.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4342220

Review of The Football Game of Writing!

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, again teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

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to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this full of encouragement piece again in your homefolio teacher Jay, and I do enticed to read it, reading the given title that sometimes watching or being in a sport specially you made it and linked in to writing makes me very interesting to know,which makes me think that whatever things that we do if we put it ourselves and do our best it always gives pleasure and enjoyment to us as well as it can inspire or encourage also our readers/viewers.
I don't like sport, but linking this piece of yours to writing, and showing the wisdom that you reflected and find on it, makes me to like it, specially the underlying lessons.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4341660

Review of My Heart

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

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to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece again while having fun wandering in your portfolio, I think this is your entry in my contest which took one of the Honorable Mention through judges rate and votes from WDC members. Congratulations once again, pondering this made me to think the valentine season.

The given title is always unique, though, its always been stumble and prefer to used as title but its vibrancy is still there and doesn't change because of the good imagery and impression it gives.

I always like the proper rhyming and rhythm within the poem, the way how its structured is natural and not forceful, which creates a good sounds and stimulate emotions at the end and making it to be romantic and fragrant. The blending of words also like:
My heart was smitten always create colorful that enhance that beauty of this poem. Well Done teacher!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
The love of writing Love's full vent began in just this way
For unrequited love did bend my heart to break, betray

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise. Congratulations on its winning!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4341657

Review of But Traveler I Am Not

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour! Ethan Owens

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being one of the AUTHORS SPOTLIGHT in the "Angel Review Forum" and a Registered Author here in WDC

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this another piece of yours, while wandering in your portfolio and I picked it to give my review.
What makes me hook is the given title, the word traveler gave me a good impression, traveler can be a creative person, who can't be in stagnant in one place, I link this to writers who is traveler through words, and adding the statement "I am not" gave a humbleness or doubting effect, it will make your readers have more an interesting perception on it.

The title should be given a great importance as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

This is prose, the wordings or lines were continues or like telling a story but its in poetic. I find words or lines that are appealing here, for example: May the ocean take form, and lifting its great, swirling fist, deliver me to my destiny.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4341633

Review of The Christmas Carol Ballet

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

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to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya teacher Jay, this is very educational and informative about the Christmas Carol Ballet, and its nice to know that you are one of the performers on it in your place. i wonder if this is yearly done.
I wonder also if there's a list of songs that was consider as a Christmas Carol Ballet, and what is the difference of the Christmas carol ballet to other Christmas songs.
Christmas days are 4-5 months more to go, reading this essay of yours made me to missed that joyful season.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4341459

Review of She Talks with Me

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found again this great treasure in your homefolio while roaming around with my tiny little wings in your folders, and I really enjoyed reading it.
The given title for me is common and simple, its reflects natural, not forceful but normal, and everything that is normal to our lives is already close and a part of us.
I liked how you begin the story, its quite deep and metaphor, but as I go along it, I already get to link about the story and its essence. I reflect here the time in good or in bad times that we spend to our love ones which signifies treasure that more than to any gem or gold. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Perhaps the closeness started, when I sang to her in her mother's belly.

Of course, we have been very close, since the day of her birth.

The umbilical cord prolapsed around her neck.
Fluid was in her mouth.
We experienced the mad rush down the hall to the newborn critical care unit.
The little baby girl was lying on the "hot plate."
The daddy placed his face near the baby's face, reassuringly, "Daddy is here. I love you."

For me, this is where you can find the heart of the story.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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#4341456

Review of Just My Cup of Tea

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Teacher Jay O'Toole

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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I'm Samberine Everose

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and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece in your awesome homefolio while roaming around. The given title gives me an impression to be a saying, I often stumble it when they say in other word as a favorite. Tea gives an impression that gives as warm and soothe our feeling, I wonder how they differ in a coffee, they are both best in cold times like winter or in a morning. And as I try to ponder the scribbled words in the body, it gave me an impression that tea are served not only as hot but there is also a cold tea as iced, then it may depend on the season on which tea would be much more preferred.
I also reflect here different place where you can find different kinds of teas that they serve.
Concluded that we have each own different taste and have its own favorite cup of tea.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
Well done.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

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Review of From the Mouths of Babes

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, audra_branson

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I got interested to pick this piece of yours while sneaking in your porthomefolio, it gives me an impression to be interesting, it reminds me of the movie Babe, so I thought its really interesting, I just only find out in the end that its about baby talks.

Like the title, the story is interesting, the length is short but it just fine, you properly showed it here its essence and you also made your audience smile and laugh after the read. The way how you structured or showed in your audience are also clear and vivid, adding some few dialogue who makes the story more livelier like watching a television, with the balance of narrating. Its in the first POV and its proper because this is a true story. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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