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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!Cherylgirl *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece in the newbies review section, I picked to give a read and review because the given title hooked me. Sea- bodies of water-nature, always gives a good impression and imagery, its all about nature, and sometimes they are metaphorical.

*Star* The title should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

And as I ponder the scribbled words in the body, I can say you have a fine way in creating the beat or the rhythm of a poetry, there are just some lines that does not rhyme but by replacing and changing it to the more strong and fine verb, the result maybe fine.

I also liked the words you've chosen, you sketched colorful imagery that links to nature and the given title. Lovely.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is the first two lines,

The sea was bright by moon's full light
Waves crashed our feet until retreat. *Thumbsupr*

The other stanza are already in rhyme,
This piece can be more fine if you replace or use another much strong verb that rhyme on the first line.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!NightSun *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in the Newbies review corner of WDC. I picked it to give my welcome review for you. The thing that hooked me on the given title is using the word question, its an interrogative statement that makes any reader got interested .

*Star* The title of a piece should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I glance and ponder the scribbled words in the body of this piece of yours, it gives me an impression to be like a philosophical statement, I also have some times to think and ask question to myself, specially if I can't or I am not satisfy with the answer that I find from others, and we can only find it, or concluded it after. But you are right, before we begin something, we always started in a question.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Wonders of a Pond  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Ryan Titan *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in the newbies section, I got hooked on it to have a glance, it gives me an impression to be interesting, because I know, its about nature, and nature is one of the beauties God's creation.

*Star* The title as well as the body should be given a great importance,because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

When I glance the scribbled words in the body, I just find out that its only in few words but you did well in choosing strong words that captured the beauty of nature through the pond. Lovely poem.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of YOUR BEAUTY  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!Gregmash *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in the WDC reviewing area, I picked it to know what's behind in this item because the given title hooked me, it gives me an impression to be like a tribute.

In choosing a title, it should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

Though, there are some lines in the body that is already a cliche or it is usual to find already but it still gives a good imagery and thoughts, and vivid about the one whom you are describing it. I think you intended using to be in free formed poetry, and it just fine.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is the way how you break some lines and words, breaking of lines, punctuation can help to stir and stimulate the emotion.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created formed of words in the given title because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hooked chose and pick this piece.
The title gives a metaphorical meaning, using the article The to begin the word, it gives an impression to be life after-death because its infinite never ending, or maybe a passion or love which is constant.

As I read the scribbled words in the body which I reflect already a more vivid on the picture you've want to sketch from the given title. I linked this to environment because of the imagery you used, most of it are about nature- its beauty and how we humans protect and discarded it. I think this is not intended to be in rhyming poetry, but it still fine. The message is good and gives an impact. Well Done!

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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Literacy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION


I found again this piece while sneaking in your portfolio, I chose to give my other review as part of the Teddy Bear Gift Basket goodies from your secret pal.
What makes me to picked it because of the given title.
Title always serve as the reader's door before entering to the body of the piece, first impression and expectation was created on this part.
Though the given title is simple but the thing that makes everyone be interested on it is by the imagery created, it links to reading,the ability to read or education.
It can lead us know everything if we are literate, all things may work possible.

And the scribbled words in the body gave a more vivid statement on what you mean about the title-Literacy. The first thing that I got noticed while reading the body of the piece is the proper and neat formation of the words in every line, naturally reflect and not been in force full manner. I really liked how you used those words that sometimes I usually find in some awkward but you made it here to be useful and important, that is where I concluded that there's no word that can be permanent in its own meaning. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Bubblegum Jones *Smile*

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I'm your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being a Super Star here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I'm glad you are enjoying sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was enticed to pick this piece of yours while sneaking in your portfolio for something to read and review, and this one hooked me, Silent Poetry- because I also have one folder whom I titled it as Silent Poetry in my poetry, which more consist of image and drawings.

And when I enter and read the scribbled words in the body, I think this is a story with an opinion or views concluded at the end. The one that I liked and it reflects much is the proper and neat in the way you create the rhyme and rhythm, it flows naturally and not forceful or trying hard withing the words. Its in orderly manner.
The given thought is good, the story within this poem is good and your views and opinion in the ending lines are good. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Jay O'Toole *Smile*


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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION


The title gives me the mood of hope and mourning, the Morning here gives me the impression of hope, and the verb "see you" gives me the impression of loneliness. It also creates a tune, and poetic.

The rhyme and rhythm that were created in the body enhanced the overall mood of the poem, though there is sadness but making it to be rhyming, it gives an impression to be a little bit lively as well as attaching a music too. Well Done teacher Jay!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Tulips  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour teacher Jay O'Toole *Smile*


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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is again another lovely piece of yours, and I liked the theme within, its about nature I think, stating in the title of one of the beautiful flowers which reminds me of spring and summer. I liked the way how you formed those words, the rhythm and specially the rhyming in the end stimulate the emotion by giving a lively mood. Using words the sketched the imagery it links on the given title and the theme that you chose to show. I already smell and see the beauty of the Tulips. Lovely poem teacher Jay!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Striving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour Teacher Jay O'Toole *Smile*

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I'm Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find the given title to have full in meanings, but its the right word that links to hardship or in other word exerting effort. We always feel true success, when we exert efforts in every thing that we do.

The scribbled words in the body are in few words but it gives an impact. I really liked how you formed it, beginning the three lines in an interrogative form, making your reader to ask those questions also, and stating a conclusion on the following ending lines. Good job!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Let It go  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
A pleasant hour!!My Side of Story *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this piece again in your portfolio and picked this to give my review.
Below are the things I comment and I highlighted that I reflected after reading this piece of yours.

TITLE: The title is good and it links on the body- story. The given title gives a dramatic impression, I stumble it in the lyrical poetry.

CHARACTER: There are only two main character but, its just fine and they handle the story. They are just lacking in few description so know well their personality.

SETTINGS: Though the setting does not emphasis more details, but by adding it as a background helps to enhanced the story.

THOUGHT/LESSON: The view or lesson that I reflect is good and inspiring, it talks about life and letting go of something, to move on, like the morning it comes.

DIALOGUE; Adding some few dialogue, enhance also the story, its like watching a scene in a television.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and have some few doubts that arise, Please pick it if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you for letting me review your work. I marked my doubts in red and green is my suggestion.

Just like any other day I and Zahra met at school before class but today it was all different. Something was in the air, something I could feel *Left* Paraphrase this- I could feel something strange. So I asked Zahra,

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of One day it is.  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!My Side of Story *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece in your portfolio, and chose it to read and give my review. What attracted me most to pick it because of the given title-one day- gave a good impression about a day, and having a day will spring some hope.

*Star* The title is important as well as the words in the body because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled words in the body are good, and inspiring, a tribute to one of the most important person in our lives- our mother, and you are right, it stated all and described here all the sacrifice that she did and will do to us. I liked that you stated some of thee things that she is doing, it gives an impression that the poem is homey. Very inspiring poem


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I have some few doubts arise for you to consider. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you for letting me review your poem. I marked my doubts in red and green is my suggestion.

The one who loves (comma here) the one who never takes

Staying up late to celebrate your eighth"- eighth here is wrong spelling, must be eight.

I am gonna be there, with a sweet sad tone."

I will always be here- gives more firm.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!Analapine *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose ,and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece again in your portfolio, it sounds interesting so I picked it, though, I am not interested about vehicle, but stating and making the title to be informative and stating a solution anyone will be hooked on it, specially the one who likes vehicles.

*Star* A title should be given an important because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The words scribbled in the body is informative, specially it stated there some of its solution to a problem that may encounter of the one having a vehicle, and I think these are all based through experience, and experience are the best teacher sometimes.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is the order of the stated information, I would suggest that you put a number to every information, so that there is a sequence on it, it will be easily readable.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Analapine *Smile*

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Meet your friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've seen this piece of yours in your portfolio, I picked it to read and give my review.
Everyone are familiar on the given title,it talks about a disease that mostly especially woman will have in their olden days. I can say the given title is simple.

*Star* The title is one of the important part of a piece,because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The created body is informative, you first begin stating what is Osteoporosis and that makes the reader become interested on it, then stating the cause, and treatment and medication. The format is neat and readable.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!Ailure Trouvaille *Smile*

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Meet your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found again this piece of yours in your portfolio, while looking for something to review. I picked it because it sounds interesting, the theme is about philosophy of love and you've stated different meanings on it.
Between love and loving, love can be a noun and loving comes from love, loving is verb, the way how we love a person, you showed and described here all what you felt andwhat you mean and experiencing about love and they are all true.

I found some lyrical and beat, between the lines where in it helps to stir the emotion.
The flow is good and emotional, though I found some cliche but its not obvious.
Good job!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Trust Me  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!!Ailure Trouvaille *Smile*

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Meet your friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is very emotional piece that contained some truth and there is firm within the words that you used. The given title is simple but interesting, its a word that promising something that is true, I often stumble this word in time when a main character in a story is facing a trouble and the only thing that will gives him an assurance and hope is the trust of the other one.

Crafting it using an enjambment form helps to stimulate the emotions of the piece.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, and no doubt arise.


MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!!Michelle *Smile*

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Meet your friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble again this piece of yours in your portfolio and it gives me an interesting impression while glancing the given title, I reminds me of an old saying that we should not count the eggs if its not yet laying.

*Star* In choosing a title of a piece, this is one should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

I can say the given title is interesting.

The story is short and the plot is good, its simple but it gives a good thought in the end. but it left me wandering, maybe I am expecting more happening in the story.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, maybe some more interesting part that you will add in the ending part of the story.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!!Michelle *Smile*

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Meet your friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours while sneaking around in your portfolio, I picked it because the title gives an interesting view.

*Star* The title as well as the body is one of the important part of an item, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The given thought of the story is good, the plot is simple, but at the end it made me smile.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
There are some few doubts of me that arise while reading your piece for you to consider, I marked my doubts in red color and my suggestion is green. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you for allowing me to review your piece.

She Ignored him deep(Comma here) in her thought.

They will have had a week to accomplish this task and she knew that she will definitely find a there had to be a solution, all problems had solutions if you looked hard enough



She would try to be a mage (comma here) even if half of her teachers and all her classmates hated her and thought her a fraud.


A week passed (comma here) everyone else had managed to get some green while Sera’s t

As her teacher walked up to her (comma here) she finished the spell

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, J. Robert Kane *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review.

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in the reviewing section of WDC, I got stuck on the given title because it gives me a good impression so I picked it and here I am giving you a review.

Below are my comments of the element of a short story that I found that was highlighted in your piece.

SETTING The setting is good, though you didn't used the formal way in stating the setting but by making it as a background, I mean added in the scene or incident of the story, it helps to enhanced the other element that I think you intended to emphasis it more.

CHARACTERS You only used a few characters, and you did well in emphasizing or introducing each own personality in the way that is naturally sensing by the reader.

PLOT The plot is simple, and I liked how you handle and smoothly narrate the flow of the scene or incidence of the story, i can say you begin it by hooking me your reader, and then as I go along continuing reading it, the story become more interesting specially on the climax on it.

AUDIENCE being an ESL (English second Language) some words are not quite familiar to me, but by combining it with common words it balance the range of understandable of the audience.

CLIMAX or IMPACT - very interesting climax, its like I am watching a horror, on what happened to the young lovers.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I don't find words that distract the flow of the story and no doubt arise. Well Done!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour, Bubblegum Jones *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as a return for giving me your time in reviewing my works too. *Smile*


*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

My tiny wings brought me into your portfolio, and found this piece of yours, just like any other item here, the given title hook me to pick this, it gives an impression to be interesting and its like a game or a quiz. It reminds me when I am still studying while pondering the given title just like a direction in a paper test.And when I enter in the body, I found out that this is really like a quiz or game, and its fun and good while reading the simple direction and finding some entries already.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
Some doubts for me arise while reading this fun quiz of yours or game of yours. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you for letting me review your work.
First- I can say that this is a contest, so to be able to receive more entries as well as kind WDC sponsors or donors I suggest that this should be transfer or make this as a forum, you are capable because you have an upgrade membership. How to create a forum *Right* "Message Forum
Then add a title first to begin,greetings, the rules of the game, the dates-accepting entries and deadlines and prizes.
Or you can ask me more if you need some help, just click the white envelope beside my user name.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Rhoswen - Relentless Victory *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this piece again while roaming in your portfolio, it gives me an interesting impression about the word miracle used in the title because I also believe about miracle and that miracles of God always happens everyday to us, its one of the ways that Gods communicate us Who is really Him and the way He loves us.

And as I ponder this inspiring experience of yours, I can say that it is vivid, the inspiration is in there, on how God manifest in our lives, its just only short but its full of good thoughts and gives an impact. God always give second chances and always gives the best for us. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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A pleasant hour, Rhoswen - Relentless Victory *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I got attracted again in this piece of yours while wandering and looking for something to review in your portfolio, because it gives me a goon imagery and impression. Though, winter is the least thing among the four season as my favorite because of its being dull impression, but when I try to read and ponder the words in the body, I came after I read that there is also a unique beauty of winter and snow. I liked the way how you used and chose words to portray the imagery, it gives movement of the imagery created within the stanza and lines where in I found it dramatic, its linked in the given title with the word dance. Lovely poem.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Rhoswen - Relentless Victory *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece while wandering in your portfolio, I picked to give my read and my first review as part of the goodies that you've won, because the given title gives me an impression to be in a nostalgic feeling, from the word remember, took me yesterday, and past or yesterday always gives a good imagery even if that yesterday are some quite a bit painful but the things that we did yesterday always have a link and leads us on what will be today and tomorrow.

The scribbled words in the body is truly sentimentalist, the thing that makes it sentimental is the last line, repeating it in every stanza gives like an echo. I liked the story within and the memories that were stated it sketched a colorful emotional imagery. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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A pleasant hour!Princess Megan Rose *Smile*

Congratulations!!! for winning my package in the "Invalid Item
I'm Samberine Everose your little fairy friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*FlowerR*Congratulations once again! *FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

Stating in the title the word child gives any reader be reminded in their innocent day where problems and responsibility or life are still far and not yet come to think to our mind, that impression makes me hooked on this piece of yours.

When I ponder the created story, the words between the lines took me also in my childhood years, stating your favorite toys and playing with them, I can say that you loved cats and bears.

I liked the aura and the emotions within the story it state that you came from a happy family, that makes us smile and we have good memories to cherish.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Broken Dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!HuntersMoon *Smile*

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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION

Just found this piece of yours in your portfolio, it hooked me though the title gives an impression to be dark or somehow dull, disappointment, but it sounds interesting,and other than that I am a fan of English sonnet poem. *Smile*

And as I ponder this in literal, specially in metaphorical, the given meaning is full of thoughts, and creates colorful imagery, it combines the imagery of the different seasons, mostly autumn and winter which gives or reflect a dull or sad colors, that is where I link it in the given title. The way how you weaved the words which creates beautiful imagery stimulate the emotion, and I admire how you handle the emotions you begin to portray without adding other emotion that can distract its smooth and fluency. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have one doubt for you to consider,
by using the word azured- I try to find it in the dictionary but I don't a word azured, you might mean azures or azure..?

other than that, I have no doubt already,
the awardicon deserves well. Congratulation. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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