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Review of Real Tears  
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A pleasant hour, Whisper *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as my way of welcoming you here in the wonderful world of WDC! *Bigsmile*. I hope you will going to find your ways here and share your writings!

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece while strolling in the review and read section of WDC, and it hook me to pick it and have some read, Though the given title is simple but it gives an emotional thoughts. Tears can be linked to happiness and sadness and as I read the scribbled words in the body I think this is in emotional or in sadness part, and you are right shedding a tears will always be bringing out the way we express our emotions. The way how you made it in the enjambment form of lines enhanced the emotion of this piece and creates its own rhythm in the natural way and not been forceful. Well Done!



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I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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A pleasant hour, Loonuh *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as my way of welcoming you here in WDC World. *Bigsmile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I have found your piece while strolling in the review and read section of WDC world, what hook me for that simple title that gives a good compliment that anyone passing by will give a second look because of the good imagery that brings it.
Anyone will always love to hear if we can say about being beautiful person, its a simple greetings but gave an enlightenment, encouragement and inspiration.
And just like the scribbled title, the given words in the body are more encouragement, and anyone that will read it wil create a smile in their lips because of the enlightenment and simplicity it brings of this simple poem.Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Winter's Touch  
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A pleasant hour, kerrimiller *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an impact even if its in few words only and though the given image of winter is cold but it balance the word touch, and just like the given body, words are in few but gives an impact and great imagery. The format is fine also which creates its own rhythm and enhanced the mood. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Winter's Waif  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, ~Sue~ *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review because I have the time to stroll in the review and read section of WDC and I found this piece of yours. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interesting, the word waif is a new word for me, so I first find its meaning in the dictionary, and as I comprehend it, it really link to winter like a season of lost or stray.
And just like the given title the scribbled words in the body are full of colorful imagery and thoughts too about winter to spring.
I liked the way how the words with rhyming and rhythm were used, it gives and emphasize a natural beat which enhanced the mood of the piece. I can say good job in scribbling this piece and how you properly sketch well on how we lost in unique beauty of seasons like winter to spring.

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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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A pleasant hour, ~MM~ *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

One of my favorite verse in The Bible is Psalm 23, so I was enticed to look and read this piece of yours while strolling in your awesome portfolio, and I liked how the way or format you did it here, the original verse and your reflection about it, and they are almost the same, specially the given thought. It enlightened one's heart as well as have an inspiring message. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Stepping Down  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I am giving review on all the entrants of the contest Search for a WDC Heart Throb Poet and its your piece chance to have its review now as a preparation for the opening of the said annual contest for the season of heart here in WDC!
I hope you will encourage more to write and find my review to be helpful. Thank you for letting me review your work.

The given title is simple and its meaning is not showy, it should be read first the scribbled words in the body to capture its real meaning.
Words in the scribbled body are not prosaic, they are in depth and in metaphors, so some lines is hard for me to get its real meaning, but my though after I read, it reminds me about cupid the angel who are spreading love to everyone, the words were showed and described him in an elegant manner. The rhyme and rhythm too are just fine, they were naturally used and not force full.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Sound, orchestrated chaos with me,
while I twirl and flutter all round.
Blasting furnace of life, keeping
pace like a loyal squire.


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, 🌜 HuntersMoon *Smile*



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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this beautiful piece again while having my port raid review in your homefolio as part of the Teddy Bear Gift basket. You really excelled well in nature structured form Poetry, this one is so beautiful again because it was structured well, proper rhyming and rhythm are there already, lovely words that blended and naturally reflect which flow smooth and gave a good thoughts, the way you begin on the first line is like pulling me more to read and to know to other lines until I didn't aware that I already finished its end. Well Done again!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr* No wonder they've voted and chosen you as Heart Throb Poet 2017. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, 🌜 HuntersMoon *Smile*


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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I picked this piece in your portfolio because the given title sounds interesting to me, Anniversary always reminds me a celebration, as well as I would like to know what happened with the trip on this anniversary celebration.

So, this is a dialogue formed story. This kind of form in story telling for me is active, not just because it only contain the dialogue or the moving scenary but the story just flow within only one scene.

I admire that you did well in controlling its scene speed by stating in detailed the things that might be show or tell in the narrating form.

Dialogue formed also limits a character, and you did well in making the character have and perform their own that will not make confusement to the reader. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The month of April is still too far, but when I saw this beautiful piece of yours in your portfolio, it hooked me so I picked it to have a read and give my review.
The given title gives a good impression and act as an interesting opening line, just like the first line, because it remind me summer and spring.
We are still in the winter season, though we don't have snow here in the Philippines, but the cold and windy atmosphere took me to missed April and May Months the summer and spring.
And as I ponder the scribbled words through the lines, it gave a vivid imagery and pictured in my mind summer and spring and the fun and happy days that brought these season, and you are right its like magic and in wonderland. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
potholes on the road make for puddle play:
children clad in raingear splish-splash and jump;


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Spring Awakens  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, 🌜 HuntersMoon *Smile*


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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Nature theme poetry can always hook a reader specially nature lover like me, so when I see in the given title the word spring, it charmed me to see what's inside this piece, and just like the nature's bring for its great beauty, that is what I saw and pictured this piece of yours. Following a poetry form specially acronyms is ingenious and clever because there there is a set of limit and rules to follow to express creativity. And you did well in following the form. Great Imagery were viewed also as well as the uplifting spirit while glancing in my mind the imagery that the scribbled words bring. Well Done!
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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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A pleasant hour, sunnystarr *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this piece again while raiding in your homefolio because the word Poetry enticed me to see it. Poetry always fascinates me.
And I found out that this is one of the awesome contest in poetry that can encourage one to create poems specially if will have some prompts to follow. The rules are vivid and clear and prizes are just fine too.
But I'm so sad to know that its close now, I wonder where will be this awesome contest be opened again, because this is a great idea and awesome encouragement forum poetry contest.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Poetry is...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Each one have its own definition of Poetry, and when I found this piece while sneaking around in your portfolio, i was delighted to know what poetry means for you.
And you are right, you had described here all the definition of poetry inspired through our experience, as a hobby, fascination, and likes. Poetry is an art of words, it has its own depth like a riddle or puzzle, and have the ability too to draw out different meanings or messages from the readers.
You did well in creating this piece of Art in free verse. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Poetry is
a mason jar to capture
those fleeting moments in life,
like fireflies that flicker in the night
and then are gone:


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

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Review of Winter Blossom  
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece when I sneak on your homefolio, I think its one of your latest poem creation, so I got hooked to see it specially its about nature and the season. Nature always gives a good impression and view to our mind.

Winter have its own unique beauty and feature, and it shows here on how you stated well in this lovely crafted piece of yours, you did well also in choosing words that doesn't common to test and give a kind of mystery to the reader.
It has a smooth flow by using a free form rhyme and rhythm between the lines that enhance to reflect naturally the emotion within. Lovely Words that reflect beauty of Winter.


MY FAVORITE LINE:
gentle prayers for tomorrow float
in the quiet perfumed stillness.


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece,
I have some few doubt for you to consider-


thought as tiny florets seek dreams
of candent possibilities.

You might mean cadent which mean rhythmical.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am reviewing this piece of yours as part of my contest "Search for a WDC Heart Throb Poet which will be opened again this February, and I am trying to review all its entries in the preparation of its opening, so your piece chance now to get my review.

As I ponder every line, every line can stand alone and it has its own unique meaningful good thought, and when I think them all as a whole it reflects that a true love can't be fade even years may wither. True love will always renew and not to be olden by years.
If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent

This is sweet and beautiful, no wonder that it got the grand prize. Congratulations once again!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
We've shared a life of laughter, love, and tears
yet each new day renews my lover's guise.

If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again sneaking within the pages of your folders and notes and my eyes catches this wonderful forum of yours. Reviewing always built a good and friendly gesture in the community, this is where we can gain friends as well as improved our writings because everyone have their own opinion and views on it. It's always been good to hear a comment what they think about our creation, Right.
So, I can say this is a good forum to encourage everyone here to review, because creativity is already in us, we will always be motivated when we are in the creativity mode, but we need also a review booster, like this awesome forum.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr* The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am giving my review to all the participant's entries in my heart season contest "Search for a WDC Heart Throb Poet and now its your entry chance to receive my review, this is in the preparation for the opening of the said contest for next year again. Thank you for entering and looking forward for your participation again.

This lovely piece of yours even if it was scribbled in few words but the chosen words stir and gave an impact. It is like a quote- it reminds me of a beautiful note that best to post in a card and bring a smile to any one who receive it. Its beautiful.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
tattoos your name

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, my only doubt is its fewness, though it gave an impact but I am expecting for more, it leaves the reader to crave for more lines on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found again this piece of yours while strolling in your homefolio, I got hooked by the given title, though its simple and common as everyone can relate on it, but the impression of who is that someone that are telling here will give an interesting view to any reader passes by.

And as I begin to ponder the scribbled words of the story, I liked how you begin it making your reader to set their mode about this story by introducing the main character here, as well as highlighting its moods and different character that will give curiousity to reader to find more and follow the story, and as I continue, I liked how the story goes, and its different point of view and specially the meaningful lesson after. The ending part is very shocking, I thought the girl will be give a second chance but you made it a twist and gave a shocking unexpected ending at the end. Well Done



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I have some few typos for you to consider.

her parents had no time for her and her boyfriend dropped her her like a bad habit.

The word her is doubled.

she wore contacts instead of her eyeglasses

you forgot to add lens

she wore contacts lens instead of her eyeglasses


Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was hooked again in this piece of yours while strolling down between the pages and folders in your homefolio, because the given title gives an impact impression maybe for making it and begin in capital letter as well as using an article The, we always know who will stand and always be The Best at the end.

I liked the created story that reflect in this poetry of yours, though sometimes we had been feel weak and we thought that we will lost some battle of life, but thinking and having faith and hope from Him, that He will give us our strength we will always won in any battle of life. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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A pleasant hour, sunnystarr *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I got fascinated again to read this piece of yours, while strolling in your homefolio, it sounds interesting for me when I find out in the title the name of one of our famous and awesome WDC member- Lornda, so I'm sure this is a tribute for her.

Using the acronym form of poetry will always test the creativity of the author because of its limitation on it. So I can say that you did well and using the form of poetry which the scribbled words reflects dedication, and sincerity of the said person. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here again to continue my meandering in your beautiful homefolio, having a great time reading your stuff and poetry, and this one enticed me.
The given title are not easy to pick what its mean, its in a metaphorical statement, and it gives a good imagery. And as I ponder the scribbled words in the body which is more beautiful than the given title, it reflects a good but sad thought about pretending.
I like the part where you immediately add the verse that gives a metaphorical meaning about one true soul. The enjambment style creates a speed as well as control and slow down the speed of some lines which makes this poem be beautiful that enhanced too the created rhyming and rhythm. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Hi, Thankful Sonali

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing this piece as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:The title is simple, the given impression is an aim of every entrant to enter in contest. The good on it is its very encouragement, cuz it stated there the goal.

IMAGERY:Just like the created title, it links on the body what this piece will be all about. The created imagery is good, it gives different hues or colors, beautiful pictures.

TONE/MOOD: Since the first stanza, you already hold the created mood or emotions on it. It gives a light and fun mood.

RHYME & RHYTHM:Using a formed poetry like limerick is not so easy, because there is a limitation or a rules that must follow, and for me you did well in following this form which also helps to enhanced the created emotions of the piece.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that distract the flow, but I have a doubt on the created emotions,
maybe just because I am still expecting more on its emotions.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Hi, Robert Edward Baker

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing this piece of yours as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:The given title for me is trendy, though I live in the PH but everyone knows about the latest President of US: Donald Trump, and using it or making your poem talks about him will really give an interesting impression, other than saying that he is the talk of everywhere, so in other words he is famous. *Smile*

IMAGERY: I liked the you created this piece as some kind of a story telling within the body which audience/reader can be ponder on it. The voice that you used or the words that you chose to tell or show the story is for everybody, which mean that even an ESL (English Second Language) can grasp or comfortable reading it.

TONE/MOOD: The emotions that are intended to bring out,reflects naturally and not forcefully, it gives an amusing at the end.

RHYME & RHYTHM:The created rhyme and rhythm that formed in the poetry you used is in proper to enhance the emotions within the piece.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I didn't find words that can distract the flow of the poem, but as for my belief- Christian, its improper to use the name of the Lord especially if the fact is not true about Him, even if its only in comedy and fiction.



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Hi, 🌜 HuntersMoon

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your this piece of yours as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE: The given title for me is creative, and clever, like playing with words, it emphasized the trends of the world's today as well as an impression to be reluctant by using the word " Friction" on what modernization or science gives us sometimes. They said Science leads us to make our life easier, but everything under Science or technology are not ideal and perfect specially if its exaggerate.

IMAGERY:With every stanza it has its own imagery or view on what Science or technology will lead us already. And you are right on what you have all stated my friend. Science is good for the betterment in our lives but if we overdo or go beyond extreme it will going to devastated us already.

TONE/MOOD: The way how you showed your idea through choosing appropriate words that state examples of what science or technology do and did to us already creates and enhanced the tone or mood which is fun and interesting to read which made me smile at the end.

RHYME & RHYTHM: You followed well the form of poetry that you used. The created rhyme and rhythm blends with the tone and mood which gives an aura of being light and fun to read.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I did't find any word or typos, but I mostly find this as an informative and interesting to read.

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Hi, Jay O'Toole

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your piece as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest. Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:I should have a double look on it before I catch its meaning, it gives also a metaphorical meaning like one flash story that gives a good sense.

IMAGERY: Every stanza have its own story, the imagery is vivid and it has its own amusement and gives a good laugh, its like a palette that consist of different colors or a different menu in a large plate.

TONE/MOOD:Just like I have said every stanza have its own unique amusing and funny style. Maybe the way how you compact it and made it that way and have a story of it in every stanza. It tickle my bones and laugh.

RHYME & RHYTHM:The produced rhyming and rhythm is very fine and perfect, that enhanced the emotion to extract it well and catch by readers.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Winter is coming, and of course Christmas is coming, we don't have winter here in the Philippines so reading about winter in other country like yours always gives me an interesting to think and to know more about it.
I can say the way you scribbled this neaty poem is nice and full of exciting imagery about winter and Christmas. The way you made the stanza to be in few words gives a hook and be vivid and readable, as well as the emotion created is reflecting. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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