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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.
and I'm here to give you a review as my to you for being so awesome here in WDC.
Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.
MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I am giving review on all the entrants of the contest Search for a WDC Heart Throb Poet and its your piece chance to have its review now as a preparation for the opening of the said annual contest for the season of heart here in WDC!
I hope you will encourage more to write and find my review to be helpful. Thank you for letting me review your work.
The given title is simple and its meaning is not showy, it should be read first the scribbled words in the body to capture its real meaning.
Words in the scribbled body are not prosaic, they are in depth and in metaphors, so some lines is hard for me to get its real meaning, but my though after I read, it reminds me about cupid the angel who are spreading love to everyone, the words were showed and described him in an elegant manner. The rhyme and rhythm too are just fine, they were naturally used and not force full.
MY FAVORITE LINES:
Sound, orchestrated chaos with me,
while I twirl and flutter all round.
Blasting furnace of life, keeping
pace like a loyal squire.
COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:
I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!
Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.
Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.
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