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A heart touching poem. We all have had something we were addicted to, and the struggle it takes to give it up can last a LONG time. I know a person who tried to over come a problem and after years she said she prayed and ask God to give her the desire to want to give it up and the will power to do it she just up and quite and lost all desire for it. Thanks for sharing your personal struggle here.You will succeed. Prayers are with you..
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Your poem, if I read it correctly conveys a message we should heed to. We should be aware of what is going on around us. I especially like the closing as the man came forward and spoke words of wisdom. "Time makes life worth living. Too bad you spent your fighting."
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Fear is a terrible emotion to endure, especially at night when every one is in bed. I have had fear at the odd times, just enough to let me relate to it. I never want to go through those nightmares again. They are to real. Keep praying and I am sure your fears will leave you. A nice topic and a poem well written.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. There is excitement when we are attracted to another person. The sly glances, the day dreams, the flutter of the heart when they look your way, It is a beautiful thing to see the way of a man with a maid or vise versa. Love this writing,don't guard your heart to long. GOod luck.
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So often things seem to stay the same. Your poem "Like Always" tell us how you view it. I think the same old, same old must be boring, I would have to do something to try to take the sameness away. I am sure you will enjoy writing.dot com. Have fun here.
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It is sad when one cares deeply for a person and some how it starts to fade away. It seems to take the joy out of living. I am sorry you are going through such hurt and confusion now. I hope if your friend will be good for you that you will be able to get back together again..if not I am sure you will find someone that will treat you nicer. I like your writing, and hope to get to read more later on.
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Accidents are terrible, it seems just witnessing one is almost as bad as being into one. I know from experience it can be very upsetting for a long time. I am happy you had the wit to take it cool and avoid being in the crash. I am also happy the driver was going to be okay. I agree I think the police should have listened to your side. I see a couple typo and spelling errors, so I suggest to make this stronger to read it over again and to run your spell check. I hope to read more of your works in the future.
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I am touched at the topic of your poem. I like the compassion you show in the words here. I know by your brief descriptive that you made friends with a lonely man on the beach.In a world where there is so many people, there seems not many people gives friendship and empathy. Keep it up.
Hello Caren, thank you for sharing the story of your pen name. I like how you tell us a little about yourself. It is nice to know about someone as we read their works. Very happy to hear that you will be going to college in Floria. What a wonderful place to be, here on W.D. C. When you are planing to study journalism. All the best to you.
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I really enjoyed your essay on "My Experience" because I can relate to you. I have never had a weight issue, although in the past three months I am putting on an average of 6 to 7 pounds of weight a month because of a new diabetic pill I have to take.
I like how you are not going to be stopped because of how some people think and view you. I find this inspiriting. Keep working at your goal, you will succeed.
Thank you for creating this wonderful memorial for our fellow authors that have departed. When I first joined the site some of them were very kind to me. I remember getting word that they passed away. I thank you for keeping their memories alive. They are resting in peace.
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A heartbreaking poem. I feel your love for this special person in the words of this poem here. I am so sorry you are going through this worry and pain. I hope that things will work out for you quickly, but only if it would be good for the both of you. I love the line where you say "Oh heavenly Angels set me free."
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This poem is sad..there is nothing as beautiful as a love that is blooming: and nothing that hurts as much as a love that is gone astray. I am sorry you when through some of this heart ache. A nice job writing your emotions in the words of your poem.
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Hello Juniper, I am so sorry that you felt alone as a child. So many children goes through loneliness that an adult can not picture. I spent a lot of times with children and it pains me to recall how lonely they were. I like the topics you write about. Have a great wweekend Funnyface
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God has blessed you with the ability and talent on how to write emotional poems. My Mom died when I was young before school years, what I would have given to have found letters of hers, just to know her better. I love the way you signed your poem. "I love you Quit crying..and I bet the tears were running down your face like a open facet. Excellent writer.
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Simply an awesome write. This song has everything to make it great and I hope that it will be recorded by someone that can make it a number one hit. I think I would send it out to music people. .who knows what might happen. I love the idea of an e-mail for heaven.All the best with this and congratulations on the awardicon.
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Heart touching! I think that you have done an excellent job here writing about Bertha. There is many lessons that could be learned just by reading this story. I can not imagine what it would be like going through what Bertha did. I felt I was there showing in the showers being crowed and sharing them, being hungry and racking the dirt. It was sad to read of the bracelet that was put on her. I am happy she is free, married and loved. You have done a great job here.
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Simply a lovely write. I really enjoy reading these Dear Me Letters, but I must say I had to smile throughout your whole letter. I like the writing style and the Moi, myself and I.I think writing these letters do make us stop and think of what we want to complete or do in the following year. I do believe reviewing can be almost as good as writing, as we can learn much from others.I enjoyed this! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Abuse is something no one should ever have to endure, and especially the abuse of a child. I know that children knows and understands more than parents give them credit for. They can not be deceived that abuse is not going on. I am so sorry for every child that goes through these things. The trust issue is understandable, how could it not be. A very nice job here expressing your emotions.
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I enjoyed reading your piece here. You have some very fine descriptive writing, which always appeals to me. Your subject of love and romance and friendship are subjects that many of us love to read. I like your ending paragraph, especially the last line. I see no errors!
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To live in a world of fear, has to one of the worse things that can happen. I have been afraid a number of times and it paralyzes me. I would never want anyone to have to endure it. Sometimes one doesn't know what they are afraid of and so cant face it. That is the worse I am sure. I am here if I can help you! Keep writing!
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What a sweet little love poem. I like how you started off, asking your friend to take your hand. A nice twist as you say "if you like."
Second verse is also nicely written . I have never see a poem with the word I's used at the end referring to your self before. Keep writing and have fun.
Good morning Magoo, what a heart touching poem here. The love that you shared all those years is wonderful. This kind of love stood the test of time. I can only imagine the loneliness and sorrow.
I like how you took us back to when you met and took us to the end in this wonderful tribute about someone so special.
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