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Review of Lost  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh Heather, I found this poem to be very sad. It seems the young girl is examining life and and needs to find the answers that will comfort her. It is sad to feel empty inside. Talking to parents or others will often help. You have put the emotions of this young girl in the words of this poem, that is a good thing to do.
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Review of Found  
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a great way to start this poem. Your first verse is very strong as you made our minds wonder what caused the girl to be lost.Where was she and would she be found. The body of the poem told a tale of hope, where the girl was found and now has a new friend. I really liked your closing verse, what a wonderful ending for this young girl. Just one picky point I think that verse two, the first line the last word to could be deleted as the line can stand alone without it. I enjoyed reading this write.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Heather, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com. If I can help in any way just e-mail me. I read this poem first as i liked the title. In Ecclesiastes 1:9 we are told "there is nothing new under the sun." You chose a nice topic to pen about and you kept the topic strong throughout your work. Keep writing and have fun on writing.com
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Review of Unrequited Love  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh Judy this love poem is beautiful. I am so happy you have found someone that is so special. You need someone that cares for you, especially after a difficult life. I think he must be a wonderful person..he was able to pick you up and make you into the woman you are today.
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Review of Night BEauty  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Ratna this is Funnyface dropping
in to enjoy reading another one of your items..

Title":Night BEauty" A perfect title, and I like how you wrote the word BEauty"

Opening:You begin by telling us the beauty of the night. Very descriptive.

Plot/Body:Simply lovely and I can feel your longing for your dear friend .I like the line .."It seems like a naughty girl" This is cute and nicely written. I like how you use your emotions.

Closing: I like the last verse as you are speaking of what you can do for your beloved.

Comments:I hope you will continue to write, as it eases a lot of loneliness and heartache. I wonder if English is your second language..if so you are doing quite well. Know that I think of you and pray for your success and happiness.Enjoy this site.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
HelloRatna this is Funnyface dropping
in to enjoy reading one of your items..


Title:"Which I Want I Got That, But Still" I like the title you choose for this poem. I wanted to read it to see what you have and what you still want to have.

Opening:Your opening takes us directly to the subject of the poem, the longing to get the important thing you desire in life.

Plot/Body: I sense in your body of this poem that you want to have someone to share your life with. It is natural's for a lady to want to find the love of her life and to share it together. This is a wonderful desire. I hope you find that special person.

Closing:
Your last line tells me for some reason you have been hurt, I am so sorry for that..
everyone in life can look back on life and see things and choices that they could have made that might have been better.

Comments:Your new friend mentioned that you are a new author on this site. I want to welcome you to Writing.com. If I can help you in any way just send me an e-mail. I really believe that you will enjoy this site and meet many new people,Your wants and desires are not impossible, so until this special person comes in your life keep writing, and praying. YOU WILL MEET HIM!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello this is Funnyface dropping
in to enjoy reading one of your items..


Title: Flowers Of The Mind.. A link based poem.

Opening: I had never heard of a contest that is linked based, but I think it is a wonderful idea.

Plot/Body: You have used the links effectively. although I noticed in verse three there is an invalid item.

Closing:
I like how you tell us in closing the format that you wrote this

Comments: Good luck in the contest.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello this is Funnyface dropping in to enjoy reading one of your items..

Title: "Open Door Of Grace" A very appropriate title.

Opening: I like what this group stands for. There is nothing as powerful as prayer.

Plot/Body: I like the idea of having a private hot line for people to request items they really might not like to share.

Closing:A list of faithful dedicated to god soldiers in your group.

Comments:Once again this item appeals to me. I pray many times a day it is my lifeline . Thank you for creating this group, and as soon as I am feeling stronger, I am sure I would be privileged to have my name added to the group.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lil Winter Rose this is Funnyface dropping in to enjoy reading one of your items..

Title:"There Is A Hole In My Heart" The title told me this would be a touching poem, and very sad.

Opening: A lovely job here in your beginning. I have never seen a double rainbow but it sets the scene nicely to this sad occasion.

Plot/Body: Heart wrenching! Death is always sad, but nothing is as sad as a Mother dying leaving behind children. I know as we lost our Mother as small children.

Closing: Your pledge to your friend to care for her little flowers shows just what a loving person you are.

Comments: This is a sad but a poem that is inspiring as Theresa is preparing the way for you. Hugs of comfort on losing your dear friend.

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Review of Ship-Wrecked  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Violet this is Funnyface dropping in to enjoy reading one of
your items and to thank you for your concern during my surgery.


Title: ""Ship - Wrecked I really like the title of this poem, especially in light of the group but I noticed you wrote it a while back.

Opening: Your opening is strong, as you take us in the midst of the storm that you and your love aregoing through on board a ship.

Plot/Body: I can only guess what one would feel like if the ship you and your friend were on capsized.You try to reach and save the one you love by treading on the waves trying to rescue him through the murk and sway. Very descriptive writing here.

Closing: Your closing left me wondering did you find him. I must say your last two lines are awesome.

Comments: What I like most about this poem is the way Your words makes me feel the love you have for your friend, I can sense the urgency of finding him before it is to late. It touches my emotions. Keep up writing.


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Review of A Word  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good morning, I just read your item on The Word. I liked how nicely it sounds as I read it. The words flow so beautifully. You voiced your point here nicely and gave the reason why you think this way. I myself have never had that experience on the site, but if I did I am sure I would feel disappointed. All the best in your writings.
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Review of Living Room  
Rated: E | (4.5)
HelloSongbird this is Funnyface
dropping in to enjoy reading one of
your items..


Title:Living Room. the title suits the poem.The brief description is very good.

Opening:Your beginning takes us to the scene of the living room and the place where you and your Dad once sat. A topic that I would think would be hard to write about.

Plot/Body:The plot touches my heart, losing a Dad is very hard and sad. I am sorry you lost yours.I know it has been a year now but he is alive in your memories as you still remember in vivid details various things you shared with him.

Closing:I like your ending.. empty clutter.
Wilting flowers where once was-should be life.

Comments:Thank you for writing a poem about your Dad.I really like the words in the third verse. Keep writing!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Pensive this is Funnyface
dropping in to enjoy reading one of
your items..


Title: That's What Sons Are For" I have two grown sons and we are really close, so that is why I chose to read this.

Opening:Your opening made me smile as men do like the shorter version of their name as they get older.

Plot/Body:Tears are such a good thing to help relieve our emotions. It is a sad and yet an exciting time to see children graduate from school..their lives begin and ours changes. I want to add her I am so sorry to read that you had to go through two spinal surgeries. I hope you are completely healed by now. I can just picture being in rehab feeling depressed and in pain hearing footsteps coming down the hall and realizing it is family.

Closing:How lovely to have your young son lern the words to that song and then to sing it to you. I am sure you never start to get down without thinking of him.

Comments: Thank you for sharing this sweet story about Jeff and the inspiring song he lifted your spirits with. A nice job in the fine details you shared with us in this short story

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Review of Dream Catcher.  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good MorningGothic Angel gone this is Funnyface
dropping by this morning.


Title:Dream Catcher. When I read your title I thought the prose would be about a Dream catchers, yet when I finished reading this prose I realized it is an excellent choice.

Opening:The first line here grabbed my attention, the rest of the opening compelled me to read on.

Plot/Body:Your plot touches my heart. So many people suffers the loneliness and hurt that can only come from losing the one you love. Many write about it, but not many does it as nicely as this prose. I feel your hopelessness and your heartache.

Closing:Your closing is beautifully written. Your last paragraph does it for me.

Comments:Tears flow to my eyes, as your writing made me feel like you were inside of my head and I was doing the speaking. Your writing talent shines.
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Review of Dizzying Heights  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning Stephen Alexander this is Funnyface
dropping by this morning.


Title:"Dizzying Heights"After reading this story I must say You choice of the tile is excellent

Opening:Great! You told us up front that you were afraid of heights and the medical name for it. You told us your goal for conquering it.

Plot/Body:Filled with fine details. You told us step by step about your frightening journey to the top of the ladder reaching the Crow's nest. Congratulations for accomplishing this big event.

Closing: I know that coming down is the hardest thing about conquering Acrophobia. Yet you survived the trip both ways, and took your first steps on conquering your fear.

Comments: Stephen your writing is a delight to read.. I felt your tension as you made your journey up and down the ladder. I sense the laying on the floor of the crows nest to be harder than the climb.I guess what I am saying in a wordy way is that you give life to your story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh how I would loved to been there. I really like the respect that is shown to the elderly and parents, along with the love for family. This ado was magnificent and I am so happy it turned out so beautifully. 500 people for a birthday party shows how your family is so loved. Your descriptive writing is great I feel like a had a glimpse in to another world. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The New Life  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Chuck, I believe you might have been only in grade five, but I also believe when one is in a home where there is stress and fighting strange things do happen Now did you really shake hands with God,maybe, and maybe it was a dream, but the good things is things got better.I see no errors. Keep writing!

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Hello Chuck this is Funnyface. I read your poem "How I Feel When I'm Around You'

I felt this poem is short but very sincere and heartfelt.

I really like your part of responding to the people that said you would hurt her. Some people seems to talk to much, because of the response to them I know you would not hurt her. Never give up being sincere.Keep writing! I see no errors
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Review of Marriage Is...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Julie Daly, I really like this poem of "What Marriage Is". You have captured it perfectly. We will be celebrating 49 years Tuesday. I hope whom ever you penned this for will have that long or longer together My favorite lines are the last four lines.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sherri, what a wonderful tribute to your friends and sister. You your self has such a wonderful spirit that it is easy for people all over the site to love you.Your words in your poem and those on the image here are very inspiring. I am sure you have made Kelly,Simply Complex and Kathy extremely happy. Have a nice evening, FF
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Review of Midnight Indigo  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jessi Mae this is Funnyface dropping by to welcome you to Writing.com and also to the "The League Of Salient Troubadour" If I can help in any way I am here for you just an e-mail away.
I simply loved your poem Midnight Indigo. What a beautiful picture you have created for us to view where you make your home. Congratulations on the award icon, this poem well deserves this honor.
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Review of Grandma's House  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have to start right off in the beginning telling you how much I love this poem. There is nothing more precious than being a grandmother, and the best part of it is the fun we graandma'scan have playing with our little one. My son tells me his 2 year old will start fussing when they go in the car and don't turn up Papa and my way. You have captured the whole essences of coming to Grandma"s House. Perfect rhyming with no errors.
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Review of Shame  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Jellybean this is Funnyface, i just read your poem "Shame". Abuse of any kind is horrible it is something no one should have to go thorough. Shame should be on the guilty person the one who did the abusing not on the victim. I am so sorry this happened, but the victim should stand tall and know this is not their fault. Many victim of abuse feel the same..shame. Hugs
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Good evening Elizabeth, this is Funnyface. I read your letter you wrote to your self and it touched me emotionally. It is very sad to be in a place you are not really wanted or in a place that abuses you even if it is just emotionally. I know I had that when I was young and lived in foster homes.You did a nice job making us realize a little about what your life was like at age 10. Welcome to Writing.com, and thank you for reviewing one of my items and for the gps.
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Review of Love Found a Way  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am so sorry for your heartache this is so sad. No parent should have to face the death of a child. Draw often on the memories of him, as an older song says that Memories are one gift from God that death does not take away." I think the last couple words are not the way they were written but that is the jest of them. Hugs of comfort.
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