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Review of Manos  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Pamela, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's fascination with her friend's hands.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your fascinations with your friend's hands. The description in your poem is expressive, eg your huge hands are an introduction to the size of your heart, the warmth of your soul. Your poem is written in couplets and is Unrhymed verse.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Equilibrium  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a principle that is very true in life; there cannot be light without darkness.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I really enjoyed reading your philosophical poem and the words you spoke to God's omnipotent and omnipreseient credit. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm has a smooth flow of words. Description in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg Find your balance, take control. It is what makes us uniquely whole.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes sports fans and more.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, especially the following:
With God so close, my spirits rise,
I turn to Him, looking skyward ~~
Surely, this is a sight for sore eyes,
As prayers which I've sent become answered!

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent and the rhythm moves smoothly. The description in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg a win like this will surely surpass the opposition's hard work and thunder.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of One Last Time  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Amay, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a genuine picture of a child's delay tactics at bedtime.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and appreciated your child's negotiating skills. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. There is a smooth flow of words. Description in your poem is expressive.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of One More Memory  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
H HuntersMoon, . I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your lyrics, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
These lyrics paint a picture of a love gone by the wayside.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your Country Western lyrics, one of my favorite types of music. Your lyrics make for an interesting combination of Unrhymed refrain and consistent rhyme pattern. Description in your lyrics is made up of expressive words, eg words of the preacher, words unsaid

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Wish upon a star?  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Pamela, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This love poem paints a picture of the poet's real love for her beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your unique and sincere love poem. Your poem is Unrhymed with a good flow of words. The description in your poem is expressive, eg a strong, strong man, yet when he sleeps a child. Your poem is beautifully stated.
Suggestion:
Stanza 1: as he lay NOT as he lie


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Baumann, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your articles, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This articles describes the writer's on the effects of emotion on an artist.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your article about the emotional survival of an artist, whether author, poet or musician. Your article is very well written and your thinking is very sophisticated, especially your idea that writing is the closest we have to mind reading.
Suggestions:
Paragraph 2: to NOT too
Paragraph 7: to NOT too
Paragraph 8: that's impossible NOT thats impossible
Paragraph 10: to NOT too
Paragraph 12: are NOT is.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Those Poor Kids  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pony Tale, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of children who have many years to face the traps of life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about children who have many ears to face the problems of life. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. There is a strong cadence and flow of words. Reminds me of Carl Sandburg. Description in your poem is expressive, eg too innocent for life's ugly mockery. Suggestion: Line 6: Remove one of the two phrases "to hurt" in order to avoid reduncy.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of genetics becoming obvious.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem, as you notice that as you've aged, you now see your grandmother's age spots and your mother's wrinkles on yourself. Shocking! I'm afraid we all are subject to genetics. It's just a matter of how much we notice. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Description is vivid, eg likeness is engraved in my skin.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dave, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your essays, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your essay paints a picture of Uncle Packy's wicker sofa

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your essay. Your brogue is delightful to read and the yarns you spin about your uncle's boxing days and the granddaddy trout are what makes an essay grand. Paragraph 4: Did you mean flowered? The description is fabulous all the way through your essay. You convinced me that those precious moments are to be thoroughly enjoyed, but when it's time to back to school, that's the end of it. I have no issue with your poetic technique. Write on!


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Moment Together  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This romance poem paints a picture of love and togetherness.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem of romance, one of the brightest stars in the universe. Your poem is sprinkled with rhyme in a free verse. The description of your poem is expressive, eg luscious kisses clinging to our lips.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, . I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of two young brothers who struggle to put food on the table.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your story/poem, as there was a lesson to be learned from the struggles of the two young brothers. Never give up! Your rhyme pattern is consistent. There is a nice rhythm and smooth flow of words. The description in your poem is expressive, eg two young brothers, a close knit pair.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Emerald Eden, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a gleeful picture of a little girl and her dad.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about your friendship with your dad. The description of your poem is quite exquisite and what every little girl wants, eg, I felt like a princess at the ball. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent except for the third and fourth rhyming words before the end of the poem. There is a smooth flow of words created by the rhythm of your poem. Nice job. I have no issue on your poetic technique.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of EMOTIONS  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maria, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the variety of emotions that we experience.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and the statement you made. Your poem has vivid description, eg Emotions break forth as showers outpour. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Nice job. I have no issue with your poetic technique.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the unexpected in the coming new year.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your very well written and well stated poem about the unexpected in the coming new year. Your poem is unrhymed verse. There is a nice flow of words which makes your poem a pleasure to read. Description in your poem is vivid, eg enchanting possibilities and ominous scope.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi WakeUpAndLive, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your travelogues,, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This travelogue paints a most tantalizing picture of traveling in a hot balloon.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I positively adored reading your travelogue in the hot air balloon, describing the WDC landscape and all of those activities you participate in. Your column is very cleverly written. I have only one suggestion, as follows: Paragraph 8. I was distracted by your verbiage, "red markers notify me of a notification". You might think about using another word for notify, perhaps inform to avoid redundancy. No other issues with your writing technique. Nice job.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Tiny Dancers  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of tiny dancers in the wind.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Reading your poem is pure delight. As a retired educator, I have to suggest that your poem would be enjoyed by young children, not read by them. Perhaps I should ask, how old are the children?
The average sixth grader could read your poem, but I don't think of sixth graders as young children. They are very sophisticated in today's society. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. The cadence and flow of words is very excellent. Description in your poem is marvelous throughout. Thank you for this lovely childhood wonderment.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Tired Feet  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of feet, all shapes and sizes.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your humorous poem about feet. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Description in your poem is expressive. There is a smooth flow of words.
Suggestion:
let 'em soak NOT let 'em a soak.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Your return  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Emerald-Eden, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of a father who abandoned his daughter then wished to return.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I learned about your anger from your poem, and I was greatly saddened to read of your father abandoning you. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. There is a good cadence, so the poem reads smoothly. Suggestions:
return. It's been six years NOT return, it's been six years (comma splice)
to call to see NOT to call, to see

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Veritas  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Shinobi, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of truth spoken by the poet.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, although I found it quite complicated. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. There is a good cadence in your poem. Description of your poem is expressive, eg, I am complete, meaning half of me is something else.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Guardian Angel  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Spidey, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of a guardian angel sent to the poet's mother.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem of thanks to heaven above for sending her mother a guardian angel for protection while recovering from surgery. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The words flow well. Description of your poem is expressive, eg as she lay in a sterile bed in a hospital. I have no issues with your poetic technique.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Pass  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Shawn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem was written as an assignment for a class.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem; it took me back to my high school days. You seem like a very honest person. Grammar: I've never written one NOT I've never wrote one. The word wrote would be past tense or with the word have it is still incorrect. Have written means you began writing poems in the past, but you haven't ended the act of writing yet. Your poem is Unrhymed verse.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.publc review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a fable of a rat, the younger, and a turtle, the elder.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I get your message: Never quit! I enjoyed reading your poem, as you made a good point. The rhyme in your poem is consistent. The rhythm in your poem has a good cadence. The description is expressive,. eg, rat has miscues another never erases, while the elder turtle never stalls.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of faith and miracles.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your poem is just exquisite and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, from the refrains that began questioning God to the strong belief you have and are thankful for, upon seeing miracles. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. There is a very good rhythm. Description in your poem is expressive, eg the wind howling at the cloud veiled moon. Very well written poem.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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Review of Under The Stars  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's beloved, instant love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem of love and your beautifully written villanelle. You've done a great job explaining the rhyme pattern of a villanelle. The rhythm has a smooth flow of words, The description of your poem is vivid, eg, We lie in the dunes;, hear the sandpiper's cries. Well written.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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