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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kalai, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of what it's like getting disconnected from your beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and the positive approach you took to bring peace and security back to your relationship.

Description and imagery are vivid and expressive, eg Could your vacant soul realize how connections once again. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm of your poem creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Season of Joy  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jaya, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a very descriptive picture of spring.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I found your poem "Season of Joy" to be an exquisite poem which was loaded with imagery. It was refreshing to read after winter's gloom and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm might create a smoother flow of words if read aloud, but you might be creating drama through the use of longer or shorter lines. Description/imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg Spring luxuriates on every blade, branch and blossom on the wings of soft winds.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Patsy Cline  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Starr, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes why you and your mother are fans of singer Patsy Cline.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your appreciation of your mother's delight in listening to Patsy Cline sing. I've asked myself why certain singer's songs are so memorable. I find many times they are Country Western singers who sing about heartbreak. Then I realize the singer's words remind me of someone who has broken my heart in the past.

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent, as the first and last lines of each stanza rhyme. There is an upbeat rhythm in your poem which creates a nice cadence. The description/imagery of your poem is expressive, eg She sings of the pain of betrayal, too strong for the heart to take.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The lonely  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Natarakun, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the poet's thoughts of being alone.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, but lamented over your feelings of being alone in this world. Your poem "The Lonely" is unrhymed verse. Reading it aloud will help with rhythm and a smoother flow of words. Description in your poem is expressive, eg but not in my dreams, for I have many who care for me.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Paragraph 1: go through. You NOT go through, you (comma splice)
Paragraph 2: it does. Why NOT it does, why (comma splice).
Paragraph 3: Why do you? NOT why do you?
Paragraph 3: Spelling...loneliness
Paragraph 4: tells NOT tell

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kenword, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's love for his beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your beloved and why your dancing heart is a happy heart.

Description/imagery is vivid and expressive, eg I bless you with the love of the Lord and seal our life in love forever. Your poem is Unrhymed and there is a good cadence and rhythm in your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Lilacs  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Steph, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem about lilacs paints a graceful picture of flowers in your grandmother's garden.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as it brought nostalgia and lingering memories from your childhood years in New England. I can understand the nostalgia as you remember precious memories, but they are no longer, reminding me of Wordsworth's "Ode to Intimations on Immortality".

There is a nice cadence and rhythm in your poem. The rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Description/imagery is expressive, eg I can still capture a soft gentle hint of warmth in the pleasant month of May.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Middle Age  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Cubby, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public reviewers page. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* INITIAL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the poet's thoughts about aging.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:/OVERALL IMPRESSION
I enjoyed your poem about aging. Thank goodness it's all gradual over time!

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. The description/imagery in your poem is expressive, eg I never thought I'd be this age, submitting to that dreaded stage.

My overall impression: Wisdom is the trade-off for aging. Older age is better than the alternative!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Flower  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Cypgal1984, am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's transformation after abuse.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about your transformation after abuse, like a rose. The description in your poem is expressive, eg small and weak my leaf catches the sun's rays. Your poem is Unrhymed verse.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Hands  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. Public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the purpose of hands.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I was enchanted reading your poem. There are as many uses of hands as there are human beings. Description in your poem is expressive, eg Some hold precious the gifts from above, others seek hope and the power love. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent in lines 2 and 4. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. This poem would be a great read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Hands Quieted  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dawn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's friendship with a deaf girl from her childhood.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your fiendship with a deaf girl from your childhood. The description in your poem is expressive, eg So few years spent together,bchildhood friends not wanting to part, My journey defined by yours and yours by mine. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Positive Rhythm  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the positive rhythm that comes about with positive thinking.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about the positive rhythm that comes about with positive thinking and I agree with you. Description in your poem is vivid, eg there's value in showing grit. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. A good rhythm has created a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My Beau!  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Astralrose, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the poet's thoughts of her beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about your beloved, in which you tell him you'd like to be the girl of his dreams. Effective use of simile, eg like a mist in the meadow. Rhyme is sprinkled through your Unrhymed poem. You have a nice flow of words in your poem. Suggestions: baby NOT babie

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Let me  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Robi, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of yourpoems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem is a love poem about the poet's beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your love poem, in which you explain to your beloved your feelings for her. The description in your poem is expressive, eg Let me whisper and write sweet nothings to you. Your poem is Unrhymed verse and has a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Weirdone, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes the Lord as the poet's teacher, a re-write of the 26th Psalm.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading I your poem, or more appropriately, praying through the reading of it. The imagery of your poem is spiritual and loving as ever, eg He makes me open my mind to wonders. The Psalm is Unrhymed and, of course, beautifully stated.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Just an Ordinary Jyo, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the healing qualities of night.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the healing qualities of night. Imagery in your poem is vivid, eg night birds trill in my ears. The rhyme pattern in your poem is pleasing to my ears and consistent. The rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Suggestion: Well-written.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Day of The Potter  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Whitemorn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes a family's working with ceramics.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the joys of working with ceramics, as did many of your family members. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. The rhythm creates a nice flow of words. Description in your poem is expressive, eg Isles [sic] full of shelving with prices displayed on magical tools of the art. Spelling of isles should be aisles.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Fall Conflict  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem describes winter replacing summer. I wonder what has happened to autumn and spring.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem which speaks of the strong seasons of summer and winter. Autumn and spring are more gentle seasons with autumn initroduring winter's strength and spring gently providing new life, so it seems to this reader. Your poem reads smoothly with a fine choice of words. The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg the trees shook and rattled their dry leaves, as two seasons battled for the night. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good cadence.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of animatqua  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Elizabeth, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's unique friend.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your short and sweet poem about a quaint friend of yours. Your poem is Unrhymed verse with a good flow of words. Imagery in your poem is expressive, eg always in my heart.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your story poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's friend, Oscar, a Marine, Carpe Diem (seize the moment!).

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed your story poem which makes a wonderful point of a Marine named Oscar who seized the moment (Carpe Diem) and made himself out to be a clown after injuries sustained in the war. What a fabulously positive person.

Description and metaphor are effectively used, eg hit the ground with a thud, shattered like a pumpkin. The rhyme pattern in your poem is fairly consistent. There is a very good rhythm and cadence.used in your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Ireland  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joshua, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public reviewing pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the poet's homestead of Ireland.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed your poem about Ireland. May peace reign in your country. Imagery is vivid in your poem, eg stunning ponds and dazzling lakes. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. There is a very good cadence and flow of words. One minor correction: Line 9: its NOT it's

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of Dibble, Dabble  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Pat, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the pleasure of writing poetry.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your playful poem about the pleasure of writing poetry. I liked your poetic convention of consonance, eg, dibble, dabble. The rhyme pattern in your poem at the end of each stanza is quite clever and very consistent. Description/imagery is very expressive, eg, words on paper, scribbled for my emotions' sake.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Sweet Anna  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi JA,   I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* INITIAL IMPRESSION:
Your poem about the littlest angel paints a picture of God's great love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT/OVERALL IMPRESSION:
I enjoyed your very sweet poem describing the littlest angel and the family she joins on earth. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. There is a rhythm which creates a smooth flow of words. Description and imagery is expressive, eg her heart was light with God's touch. My overall impression of your poem: Thank God for allowing the littlest angel to persuade him to join her new family. Delightful!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Beneath My Tree  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* INITIAL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of a young man's fancy.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT/OVERALL IMPRESSION:
I enjoyed reading your poem about a young man loaded with freedom. My overall impression of your poem was one of understanding that you were a young man who had time on his hands. The rhyme pattern in your poem is very consistent. You have created a rhythm with a smooth flow of words. The description in your poem is expressive, eg I felt a young man's fires burn in the very heart of me. Strengths of the poem: When you realized that there would be a time to come to your sanity, probably deal with responsibility. Today you were footloose and fancy free!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of "Man"-erisms  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Iluvhorses, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This acrostic poem describes the mannerisms of a person.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your acrostic poem and your title, a play on words. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The description in your poem is vivid, eg man's actions naturally and noticeably expressed.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of the challenge each soul faces.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem and the transformation that takes place in coming to Christ. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. There is a good flow to your words. Description is vivid, eg rocky outcrops block the road.
Suggestions:
Stanza 2: an NOT a
choose NOT chose

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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