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Greetings, Matt ~
This story is interesting. However, it is so error-filled that it was hard to read.
Items for you to consider:
my greatest invention yet(,) Kit!”
through [T](t)ime itself.
After all(,) it was this
your left hand(,) and then tuck this
the items to the [juvenile] teenager.
Professor McCoy frowned(.)[,] “The quill was your great- great- great- great- great- grand uncle’s(. H)[h]e made
Project(,) and this will let you
“Yes(,) [i](I) am(,) sir(,) but...”
of McCoy's tests(,) but time travel!
to get back(,) use the sand.”
It was beautiful(;)[,] the colours shone
fell through a (doorway) he had
was quick(,) Kit. How..... a strange(,) old man.
of good health(,) sir[.](,)”
Shut the (claptrap)(,) boy. The machine worked?”
“The [M](m)achine worked?”
“Oh(,) good. ..............the stranger(')s answer
rooting foods >>>rotting
He looked at his hands(,) and they looked solid. Confused(,) the boy sat
intoxicating(,) and he remembered
Bile formed in his throat(,) and he ran for an alley(,) where he retched
>>>> Bile forms in the gall bladder, not the throat.
A deep(,) angry voice
defeated the bear(,) and thou didst not
ancestor(,) and he was being mistaken
thy secret(,) then thou will know what [i](I) will
documents[. M](, m)y friend. I have them(,) and [i](I) will use [use] them.”
clean and clear(,) and the invisible horses
He attempted to cross(.)[ and t](T)he velocity of a cart threw him backwards(;) so he crouched on a doorstep and fell asleep.
turned (in)to bangs(,) and a loud voice accompanied it[, i](. I)t told him
allowed rough hands (to) arrest him
banged open(,) but before the p(r)ofessor could say anything(,) he raised
Marlow(,) and [i](I) was born
[R](r)eality of 1593(;) he was to be hung for [B](b)lasphemy.
A co(a)[u]rse rope was looped over Kit(')s head. A black(-)hooded figure
Could Time Last Long Enough.
Could time last long enough?
over his head(,) and in the darkness he started a
grim(,) but he could feel jeers and cheers [welling their bodies] = ??. He felt far away(,) then he
Cheers!
Harry |
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