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Review of Sleepless  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Kalixta I enjoyed how you dressed up your "sleepless (k)night". On the outside I cringe. You offer a combination of Hershey chocolate and coke. Maybe sleep is overrated.
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Review of Transformation  
Review by drifter
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well put Sparkle. Underneath all appearance of blending in and not making waves is the sparkling light that breaks the chains and leads others into the promised land. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of The Bitter Truth  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello HRK, Your words are right on in terms of your own reasoning about end time perception. The thoughts about entering a kingdom perspective hinge on whether one obeys or disobeys. Spending life without obeyed The Lord, I think at the end you might mean without obeying the Lord. I am left wondering how one interprets the meaning of obedient and disobedient from a human perception. Otherwise I might be at the mercy of what another persons interpretation of God means to my own desire to obey the Lord.
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello kyrbglrn, I liked the way you were able to share about the evolution of intimate perspective. You offer internal ethereal gladness. "maybe we'll not only be folks". The result is a prayer for a sign that never seems to arrive. Your conclusion reflects on internal confusion/maybe infatuation. How does one have feelings and not get hurt in the process?
thanks
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Review of Frap  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
Hello Bob, it was a very curious piece. I am left trying to sort out the politically correct way to take the contents of a frap(milk shake) and enter it into a sexual intercourse. I am left wondering how to translate and interpret how the same message of desired sexualization can be delved into. Thanks for sharing. I left with a lot to ponder. I love fraps and am married to a woman older than me. Maybe in our own way we live to drink in another day. I see myself having to work too hard to get at what this means for you. What does this mean for you?
Thanks.
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Review of Santa Darling  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Minja, the poem was very creative in it's process. I see the image of Santa as the giver of presents and a woman who would rather have the presence of Santa or is it of the person this woman loves. I would like the sentences to be clearer. One example:
I don't know, he said, it depend how good you were. (depends maybe)
Oh, I've been a good girl a whole year, (the whole year or this year)
if you can just make him to be near. (can you make him become more near/present)

I love your thought process. I think it would be helpful if you could tap into the understandings of your audience.
God bless
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Hatesonmondays, I celebrate your passion to share with others what a science fiction world looks like. You offer much to consider. There is for example: language, culture and description of an alien world. I think this could make more sense if you share illustrations that share how it works. Thanks much!! God bless!!
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Joy, I liked this piece very much. It was timely as so many of us enter the potential chaos of another Christmas holiday season. I like most the way you work the qualities into a dish worthy of any persons appetite. I pray that the end result is being filled with love in a way that others want to partake of the same. Thanks for sharing
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Review of GRIEVED  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Endy Noble, You get an A plus for getting inside yourself and offering your heart. I love the idea of plunging into the depth of despair and finding a way out.
Not because it's far from us,
But because it's deep within us.
I am a bit confused by some of your wordings.
For example: A soul is loss (maybe lost) and the people are crying.
Too deep in a place we can't reached.
In all of this, time we hope shall our tears wiped
Hope restored, pain relieved and rest grant

I think looking over some of the way things are worded will make this a poem worthy of everyone's attention. Thanks for writing.
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for offering your profundity. It is fun to read your impressions of the subject which is your focus. You begin with a confusing paradigm of unproductive, peaceful, finery unraveled by a commitment to logic. For youth and adults there is the challenge of discovering how to take possible chaos and make it into a victory worth basking in. Thanks for sharing
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Connieann, I just met someone in her nineties today and it made me think about what it might mean for me to reach that goal. I loved the way you painted a picture of what I might be like at any given time of life. In particular I liked the idea of at thirty-five playing catch up with bills and at eighty-five thoughts get mixed up. Your impressions are very real and engaging. Yet in the context of the dear 90 year old lady who was doing laundry with a grin on her face I hope I have time to learn what makes life worth effort to fulfill. God bless. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Birthday Island  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello Jeff, I liked most of all how you craft your tale in the poetic format. You invite me to come to where you are, a cast away seeking some understanding of where and how rescue might attend the plight of this wayward soul. Thanks for sharing you poem, write on. So is the party over or just beginning?
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Review of Scarecrow Life  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jen, I enjoyed the idea of a scarecrow mission. I work as a security guard and was immediately connected to the imagery you offer up. It is not enough that this scarecrow needs a mission. He also needs a wife. I would like to know more about how the red moon beats the city in connection to protecting pumpkins for pies. It is only an observation. Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Unavoidable  
Review by drifter
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Jewel, I like the attention to detail that allows you to do the best you can with the words offered. I felt connected until I tried to see with you a body of bones. I was unclear about what kind of body you are looking at. I also wonder about Mom's strong desire to get you somewhere even against your will. It begs the question how old is this person and what is the creepy nature of this house. I can not be sure. thanks
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Review of My girl  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Chris it sounds like what ever you have got is bad(lol). I like the rhyme and the spring boarded conclusion. It is obvious that whoever this is she is worthy of notice no matter how far away you have to go to get there. In this case it is a Russian lass. I hope you can speak Russian.
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Review of Aysha Conora  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Byron, I applaud your venturing into the realm of the Holy Spirit. Your dream engaged that part of me that wondered what "rapture" meant. We are left wondering if the Holy Spirit is enough in relationship to creating an environment a new Eden. I pray God gives you wisdom to share what you are sharing without enamoring others with your truth..
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Princess Megan, thank you for your Easter renditions. I especially liked your personal recollections of what Easter means in the light of knowing Jesus.As a child one can be satisfied with the Easter Bunny offering gifts. With Jesus it is nothing more than eternal life.
Thanks for sharing. I would like to know more about the word "easter" as it relates to resurrection.
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Review of Introduction  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
As a dog owner I connect Ginger. I wish I could type as quickly as you presume. You offer a running depiction of a dog who eats and takes part in life in relation to those he loves. The last part of your ditty lends itself to wanting to know griz in a way that embraces the stinky and blessing of knowing. Thanks for your gift. Keep writing.
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Review of ETS- Prologue (A)  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello KR, It has the making of a good romance novel, even if I do not read many of them myself. The hook for me is the escape from abuse to be released from abuse. My own sister has a similar kind of story, so there is no doubt a deep well of possibility. I am most intrigued by the storm as metaphor and Dylan as hero. How does anyone overcome the scars and traumas of the past. That is my question!!
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Review of Little Fish  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Jo, I like where you are going with this. I see the metaphor of the fish as a symbol that offers a new chance at examining the meaning of life. I am caught up in the specter of love lost, suffering anguish and hope for tomorrow. I leave confused about whether we are talking about suicide that brings together literally or figuratively. I like most the idea of swimming upon a fish would might read as well coming upon a fish. I pray that you are finding blessing as you sort through the difference between suffering with love as opposed to without love. God bless
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Review of Rare Beauty  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello crazy socks, I like how you preface your work with your title's meaning!! I am left envisioning your image: butterflies, a kiss, passion, a gift and an aura that points one's back to the essence rare beauty in the mirror of whitest and purest light.
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Review of You  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello konmal, I like the short focus. I look to discover what "you" is reflected in the light of the moon. I love the tenor of the poem. I am looking for filling and light. It may help to set apart YOU in some way. I feel like you have something special and am not sure who is referred to "you" or someone else. It would also help to punctuate with a space after comma. God bless thanks for your gift.
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Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Arakun, I like the way that you invite me to the dance. I can picture the gowns on the village green in otherworldly tune. I like mostly the idea of breathing spells to the wind as a vision of the dance in action. I would like to know more about the magic as it relates to keeping safe from harm. How does it happen?
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Review of Winter Snowflakes  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
hello Candied Apples, I am caught by your curious observations. I can capture easily the vision that is pressed against the window with steam rising from the mug. The images you offer are lucid. I want to enter the fray. I am invited to build, play, and especially to see the one snowflake that is yet to fall. Well done. I especially like the ideas of sugar coming down from the sky and like a story of another creation a snowman arising out of snowy dust.
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Review of Giving Up  
Review by drifter
In affiliation with Open Door To Grace ♥  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello pinkrice, a very thoughtful rendering of authenticity calls us into a deeper relationship with self and other. It all begins with me.
Your professed authenticity
but you haven't loved a bone in your body
for a medieval lifetime
and you gave away your face
eventually without being asked

I like the person that reflects back out of the mirror of life that you express.
God bless!!
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