THIS IS A REVIEW FROM Brian KC - I Used To Be Alive
Hello, I came across this item on writing.com's auto rewards list as I was reviewing for my group. I think that the title of this item is perfect for it, it is very appropriate. the item description of this piece is very helpful to the reader.
I do believe that this is the first time that I have had to opportunity to review and read your stuff. good going.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your poem and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
But, I won't leave it there. Reviews should show an understanding of subject, so here goes:
The short two line stanzas effectively flow with the descriptive, showy nature of the dream catcher...the possibilities to give sleeping children security. I'm not versed in what they suggestively do, but can use this poem as a guide of sorts.
I would spell out 100 to start poem...One hundred. The last two lines alone rhymed. Perhaps, with a little work, all or none should rhyme. Since you're using expressions, you could explore further with a word 'decorate' that paled with other descriptive words.
I liked the notion and promise of this poem.
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