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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful, A Summertime Memory! A feeling of love, excitement and extreme energy expelled. It screams youth! You have selected some amazing descriptive words. I really like:

We could not escape the
glitter of His omnipotent,
twinkling eyes peering
down on us from above
the Cocoa evening.

You have truly brought out the feeling of being in love and what love does to a person. Great writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love your "C" notes.
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Review of Carry On!  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written! It brought back memories when I visited a battle field in West Virginia. You could almost feel the presence of someone or something. I stayed slient and just listened.

Amazing piece of poetry,

Seabreeze
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Review of Keeper of Absence  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this poem is very descriptive; giving a clear picture of the action going on. Sometimes when I read poems, they don't grab me and I want to leave. Not this one, I wanted to read on and on.

Excellent writing, pulling me in. That is what you want from writing!

Thanks,

Blessings Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, that was fun to read! Very cute story. I was pulling for the Boss all the way to get his gun back, Ha, ha!

Thanks for the entertainment!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, so sad to hear about your frig!

Love the poem as I love left overs too.

A fun read,

Seabreeze
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Review of Sleeping Rough  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sleeping Rough tells a vivid story of life on the streets. In fact, just reading it may be say to myself, "Thank God I am blessed with a home and someone who loves me." I have never been in that situation so it is truly difficult to know what folks go through.

The poem is complete and the feeling flows of the hardships of such a life. I saw nothing that needed special attention; it is complete in its description. If one wants to be picky, the very last line, after the word story is a period or comma that is not needed. Keep writing amazing poems.

Seabreeze
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Review of Whistle Stop  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
OMG, that is funny! So well written and so many of us can relate to the idiosyncrasies of others that drive us crazy.

It was beautiful how coming back with The Battle Hymn of the Republic chocked Betty's ambition to carry on.

Excellent writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of Fever  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, quite the description! You have a talent for words, descriptive and you make it interesting to read. I wish you the best in your writing.

Seabreeze

p.s I see you are a newbie - welcome to Writing.com
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not sure if the is fiction or truth because I am not sure what to say. If true, I hope he came back. In either case, good writing.

Blessings to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Other than a couple of typos, this is an excellent story. I enjoyed it all the way through. I was sad though that the detective got it!

Best wishes to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting post. I don't think I filled it out just right. Fun anyways,

Thanks
Seabreeze
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Review of A Seam  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is my favorite phrase: "...and light rips into fractals." I like the word fractals and can see its potential usage in poetry. Never seen it used before.

Beautifully written with a mystic to it.

Oh, and yes, welcome newbie!

Seabreeze
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for entry "Faux-ku" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great! I have a hard time with this form of poetry. I never seem to find words that flow, especially enough of the right words. You have put so much meaning with little words.

Great job,
Seabreeze
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Review of Activities Blog  Open in new Window.
for entry "A Moment In Time" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fascinating poem. The workings of the mind is how I feel awaking from a dream!

Relating the mind to a puzzle is excellent. And, many times it is as if someone came along and scattered the pieces.

Gread writing,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Yes, he is beautiful; but again all dogs I love. They seem to look into our souls; knowing that we need them.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so pretty. It has a beat when I read it. I can visualize the work going on as I read. So, I am there looking off from a distance.

Thanks for writing this one,
Seabreeze
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Review of Time for Bed  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute and so true for all of us past children, ha, ha. My dog even objects to bed time.

Nice writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of FunGirl-27  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very pretty poem. The words tell of a love strong with a mystique attached to it. It flows beautifully and has a unique rhythm to it.

Wonderful writing,
Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome newbie
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very beautiful. We are truly blessed by our Lord with the gift of life here and the better gift here after!

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review of Never Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this. It caught me off guard as that was not the ending I expected. Great job,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That works; its cute. Now I must go create one.

Seabreeze
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Review of Healing Hands  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is beautiful and a very nice tribute to our wonderful healers. Poetry is a wonderful way to show people we care about them as well as fun to read.

Best to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the trinket! The story, very interest and wild; not sure what to think but was interesting read.

Seabreeze
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple, but nice. Sets the stage of winter. I remember my snow boots making those crunches and we were eager to get out an make a snowman.

Love it,
Seabreeze
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