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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
Public Reviews
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a fantastic newsletter/review item to have set up. I think it is excellent and full of fun ideas, tips and discussions regarding food. Very clever on the section for reviewing cookbooks! You get a lot of information and the set up of the review is very thorough.

The layout is very colorful, I like the cartoon and the fact that people can contribute to the letter and ask questions as well. It is always nice to get recipes that have been tested by others. I have not checked to see if you are still doing your newsletter, but if not, you should. It is magnificent!

Seabreeze


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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes, this is lovely and makes me want to pull in spring fast! Clever how you have created your rhymes and I loved the phrase "...kicks us in the booty". Your words were well selected as I read it I can almost visualize this place of happiness and joy!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. Always we must give thanks to our Father in heaven. I too am thankful for my home, food, warmth, car, weather, water, on and on and on. At 75 years old, I reflect more and more each day for just the fact I was born in the good old USA. I love to hear from people from other places and it is nice to hear how others are as thankful for all that they have.

Blessings,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Lovely selection of words well used in your poem. I love it!
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Review of Just a Stick  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this! I decided to read it because of the title. Also, I have a new pup, he goes outside, finds a stick to carry but he must leave it when we go back inside. It is a small piece of happiness. Your words well chosen, well blended, amazing tone to the ear. Excellent writing.
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Review of The Well  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute story and I do believe it flows well. It brought back memories as a kid. I lived on 8 acres, dad dug a well with a man he worked with. I loved it. We had an outhouse as well as dad was still building the house. We he first bought the property, we stayed up there on weekends and slept in a tent.

Your dialogue is wonderful...I enjoyed the Pickle kids.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I loved this story. You had me going though; expecting the norm, say regular man/woman in bed together. Very creative in the story you were telling to the man to ease him. Your story, "The Man in a Brown Hat" has humor but suspense and unique....I really like it.

Best to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
From one who know of abuse in childhood due to molestation, this resonates with me. Very descriptive, it says it all.

Seabreeze
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Review of You  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done; I could relate to the feeling presented - been down a similar road. I like the tone that comes off in the poem by using the line "wondering if anyone would come near". I also like the use of a one word title, "You". It is sad but then a happy ending.

Seabreeze
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Review of I MISS SOMETHING  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful.. It took me back with my husband who has been gone now 10 years. I love the rhythm it gives. Thanks.
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Review of Thunderstorm  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting; I love the sound that your hexaduad makes. Syllable counts are so much fun. Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review of Still hoping  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think many of us can relate to your Still Hoping. I like the way it tells a story but still in poetic form. I almost can hear a song...very nice,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful page, which I needed. But I got in trouble with trying to delete one in a contest. How do you delete any entry?

Seabreeze
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Review of Frustration  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Had to come see one of your jewels. This is a wonderful poem and so much truth. Sometimes the best we can do to help is listen, say nothing, just be there. Thanks for your poem.
Seabreeze
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Review of THE BROOK  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Beautiful. I poem that allows the reader to take a mini vacation. I could visualize each place as I read the lines. Thanks so much.

Seabreeze
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for entry "God's Living Prayer
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I needed to read this. We think we have problems until we get put in our place...to see the good through other's eyes. Seniors, children and puppies usually will do it for me. I have been a little depressed in the last few weeks, it is off and on though...partly the way our country is right now but the cold also (snow where I live). This brought a smile to my face. Thanks, Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This has a lot going for it. I like it rhyme. It is a little to negative, especially for such a young person writing it. Iam glad you said a doll, I won't be as concerned. Because you have talent, and you are just fine as you have been created. More writing please. Best wishes to you.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow, I believe we all at some point can relate to this poem. Love your style, select of word so appropriate.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello fellow writer. Love your poem and appreciate how you set it up showing the format and style. I have not tried this particular style but have tried other. The rhythm is very intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love this Poem,,,so cute, words work so well together to give it such character..story line pulls me along. Great writing.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Omg, I really like this story even though I was afraid he would not wake up. Your detail to describing the lighthouse, Hugo and Hugh's thought were such that it took me there....great writing.
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Review of E-asy  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
How wonderful is this! I will have to try it. Contests can be so much fun and amazing what one can come up with. I love it!

Seabreeze
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Review of Starcrossed  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
How true your poem speaks! We are seeing a lot of the decline of innocence; hard for me to comprehend it all. I was born in 1945...the 50s, as a child, well, we will never see that wonderful time period again. It was a carefree time for children. I guess I should be thankful that I was born in that era (believe me, I am) and not earlier during the war.

Excellent writing; it moves me.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
So adorable! This would be great in a collection book of similar stories for the young, especially young girls.

I love that it tells of grandma; I miss mine (only new one on my mother's side). She was special and took an interest in my schooling and even came to my eight grade graduation. She bought my dress and shoes. I am 75 now, but that is so vivid in my mind.

Thanks for taking me now memory lane.

Lovely,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some excellent advice. I find if I don't like what they say, I over look it and move on. I try to thank them for their review (if given) and if I disagree, I leave that to myself. You are so right that it really isn't anything to get excited about...move on, save yourself from trouble.

Great advice, thanks,

Seabreeze
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