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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
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Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello fellow writer. Love your poem and appreciate how you set it up showing the format and style. I have not tried this particular style but have tried other. The rhythm is very intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Omg, I really like this story even though I was afraid he would not wake up. Your detail to describing the lighthouse, Hugo and Hugh's thought were such that it took me there....great writing.
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Review of E-asy  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
How wonderful is this! I will have to try it. Contests can be so much fun and amazing what one can come up with. I love it!

Seabreeze
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Review of Starcrossed  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
How true your poem speaks! We are seeing a lot of the decline of innocence; hard for me to comprehend it all. I was born in 1945...the 50s, as a child, well, we will never see that wonderful time period again. It was a carefree time for children. I guess I should be thankful that I was born in that era (believe me, I am) and not earlier during the war.

Excellent writing; it moves me.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
So adorable! This would be great in a collection book of similar stories for the young, especially young girls.

I love that it tells of grandma; I miss mine (only new one on my mother's side). She was special and took an interest in my schooling and even came to my eight grade graduation. She bought my dress and shoes. I am 75 now, but that is so vivid in my mind.

Thanks for taking me now memory lane.

Lovely,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is amazing; well done! I love your choices of words and how affective you have made them become. I found myself answering the questions because it is such a "thought provoking" poem.
You have a great gift for writing and expressing your feelings.

Thanks for writing this one,

Seabreeze
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Review of The Flower I Was.  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love flowers and you have given the flower a new life. It would be fun to know what a flower was thinking if it could. I am so happy the good Lord created such beauty...colors, fragrances, shapes and textures. Beautiful poem.
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Review of Why  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Why indeed! I also ask similar questions but the more I study our Father's word the more I am content to wait for some answers that will not come till He does.

I like especially: Why do we put " In God we trust"on our money then when God tries to speak to us we get funny... I believe because man thinks he understand all, but really understand very little. He uses what works....especially for gain.

Let me welcome you to this site as I see you are a newbie. Hope your stay is fruitful and enjoyable.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very pretty and nice tribute to the Psalms 150 I love the Psalms..love birds and nature so this was lovely to read.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I do like your story, The Sidworuld In fact, I am hoping you have more that is posted (have not looked at your site). I am reviewing via Read and Review.

I like how the story eases into itself. There is an immediate mystique about it which draws you in.

It is well written, I saw no apparent flows in grammatical concerns or typos...very professional.

I see you are a newbie...so I welcome you and hope you enjoy your journey here!

Great piece....hoping for more.

Seabreeze

p.s. I you get this twice, sorry, having trouble sending my review.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really liked your What's In The Trunk story. It was fun getting into. It kept me in suspense and I was excited to see where it was going. I thought it was different, fresh...nothing I had read before and would like to have it expanded someway.

Nice work,

Seabreeze
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Review of Bubbles Bursting  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, I love your Bubbles Bursting!

You had my focus and all along I was remembering how such a bath could be so relaxing.

I was even having flash backs of music, bubbles and my choice, a glass of wine.

AND THEN, along came the surprise. I laughed....reminiscing how it can be to have a

lively pet...one who would steal the show.

Cute poem, cute story.

Seabreeze
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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very interesting writing style. I love Dreams. Keep writing. I will be back to read more. Thanks for reading my poem Child.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. And, yes, God is real for me as well. I don't think I could be as up beat, looking forward day to day if it were not for my Lord. Times are very stressed, complicated, worry some and from day to day we cannot possibly know what will occur next.

I admit, I pray more and more now than ever. I pray for my family, friends, and leaders across our country.

The virus does not scare me as much as mankind! The turmoil we are seeing in our country, the riots, people hurting/killing each other, is an ugly plague. I am 74 and never was taught to hate anyone because of their color and to this day I still cannot understand it all. We are all God's children, we are one family...but, I believe that those who hate others cannot possibly love God. I hope, if anything can come out of all this, people will come to know the Lord.

Your writing provokes thought and this is good. I say, we must pray now and continuously for the Father to come; it is our only hope.

Seabreeze
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Review of My Wishful Hope  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is excellent. I like that it is like a story but still has the flare of a poem! It has good rhythm and the words tell a story of love, caring and wanting to share with the world.

Very nice,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice piece! Lots of thought went into your writing and it gets one thinking about friendship. It is good for all of us to review and know what we are willing to put on the line when its comes to friendship. We need to know what we are willing to do for a friend and be ready to take the steps.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Wire Walker  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, cool story. Makes me want to ask....any truth to the story...someone in the family even been in the circus?

In any case, I was with him all the way. Brought back memories of going to the circus.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh, I agree one hundred percent. Excellent poem and subject matter. I am so glad he is out of the House! Thanks for the entertainment!

Seabreeze
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Review of Home  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. Thomas Wolfe said "You Can't Go Home Again". I say, thanks to our memories, we can if we want. I detect some sadness but I believe we grow from it and that is a good thing.

Love your poem...keep writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi newbie. I love this poem and could visualize the beauty you must have seen on your trip.

I like how you structured your lines, the balance I feel as I read.

Once again, welcome. Keep up the excellent writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A nicely written poem for Halloween. I reminisce to the delights of the night; love the carving of pumpkins and of the laughter of children coming and going. Thanks you for the treat!

Seabreeze
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Review of My word  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi there, as you requested here is my review:

I like that you took on this as a poem and respect your comments. It is well written and gives us a bit of insight about you, the person. I have one comment on: the last line of your stanza of "I don't really care".

I'd do so as I say
Truth be told,
I don't really care

Is that really true? You don't really care? I don't think you really mean that or why would you bother with such an important statement in your poem!

You do care about your truth and in this poem you are defending yourself, so I question that comment as mentioned above.

Outside of that.....I like it and it serves you say who you are.

Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very lovely, your A Chill in a Breeze! I don't know the Haiku format very well but I know that I love how this poem flows! It is as I remember back to some mornings; especially in the early summer, at a camp site in the mountains! A crisp chill, coffee...we start to awake...YES!

Thank you so much for this journey,


Seabreeze
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Review of Little Boy  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I truly could feel the emotion that went into writing this piece. It is unfortunate what children go through; it should never be. It is not what our heavenly Father wanted. However, He does not waste any of us and will take it and allow us to help others. I truly believe it. Keep writing; you have stories that others needs to hear and you have a talent for telling them

God bless
Seabreeze
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Review of Guarded  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for looking at my Savior our Lord. I appreciate your comments and that you took time to read my poem.

I truly like your rendition; it speaks much of faith and understanding of our Lord. He truly blesses us and He keeps us in His guard especially if we our respectful of Him and follow his commandments. He gives us so much in return. You have identified our Lord here in your poem.

Thanks for your visit,

Seabreeze
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