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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great, thanks. There is a lot of information but maybe I am not looking in the right place?

Can a static item be changed to a book item? I have a static item that I keep adding to daily and plan on doing so each day for a year. Will I run out of space? Maybe I don't need to make it as a book.

Seabreeze
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Review of Jesus Vs. Santa  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this Leslie! It so sets the tone of Christmas Mythology verses our Creator. Of course there is no comparison. But I do like it, how you have had the two entities having there conversation. I so wish more people would question the fact that Christmas and Christ our savior have no real connection since Christ wasn't even born on December 25. Well, that is another topic.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea, your daily garden walk. I love plants as well but would never think of getting a snip off someone's plant. Over all, cute premise for a story. I didn't see any errors and it seems balanced in thought. Nice job.

Seabreeze
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Review of Contest Entries  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very cute and unique story. I had one area where I did't understand what you meant, see below.

I didn't want to be with him right back

Not sure what....right back means in this context.

Best luck with your contest entry.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hard to argue with the heart! I like the analogy of what waiting is to a lover. We do, as a society, wait for the plates to move and move and witnessing water weather rocks is another excellent description. Using glacier comparison is powerful as well. It is a short poem but packed with power from a lover who is desperate to be with his love. It has all of the elements of emotional love. I like that it is not a poem that rhymes. Excellent poem.

Seabreeze
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Review of NATURE  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful, very lovely! It says to me, there is so much beauty out in our world. We must stop, listen and take it in...it is free - the smells, the sounds of birds and the rocks sliding in the oceean. Just a few of God's greatness.

Thanks for this poem...I needed it.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
OMG, I died and have gone to trinket heaven! You are amazing. How do you find the time and the artistic creation to develope all of these.

Love it,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, that is a good story. I was feeling sorry for the guy. Great dialogue, great suspense. I hope you continue it.

Seabreeze
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Review of PEACE, Be Still  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely written. I believe we all have been created as to what the Lord wanted us to be. He has a purpose for each and every one of us. Your poem says it well. It is wonderful that we are not all alike. It is also sad that so many, especially young, folks want to be like each other. And, so true how we are influenced by others, by rules and regulations, some for good, some for bad. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very interesting poem. The poem has a rhythm, a beat to it. This attracts me to it. I am not normally much for the dark side but the words are beautiful and they flow. Well written and you wrote it so that it would dance, wow!

Seabreeze
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Review of Messier 64  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fascinating photo. Did you take it?

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let my say welcome newbie. Hope you find Writing.com to be everything you want it to be.

This is nicely done. I would not have thought to write an ode to my email friend but great idea. It completely tells of your relationship and your heart comes through in your poem. It gave me thought in how do I look at my friends here and so I reflect on them and what they mean to me. It is important for us to remember and give thanks to those that help and assist us in our writing. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done amazing job sharing your feelings, those deep hurts that haunt you. I want to hug you, reach out to you and I know nothing about you. You have a true talent for writing and if you can express the deep hurts you have, I believe you write just about anything you want.

I am glad you are hear at Writing.com. I think this is a great therapy, writing, a release. Not only can it help you but others will benefit. I say that because sometimes it takes another's hurt to help us come out of ours. Many of us don't know how to express it. You have given a lot here in your pain. We all have pain but not always able to express it and we need to get it out to recover.

Blessings to you my friend. Continue here. It just may be where you need to be.

Seabreeze
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Review of Soulmate  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh yes, I love this! You speak as I think about the ocean but you have been able to put it to words! Wonderful poem and I so enjoyed it!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great question asked in your poem! I guess it just is human nature. Well written and flows wonderfully. Oh yes we do pay, don't we?

Great writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of A Breath Of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, great writing! I love your poem. So much greatness said in such few words. The opening line grabbed me as I am invited to see your struggles but warned about them. It is such an upbeat poem. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review of Secret Garden  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

I can see why you had an winning entry! Amazing imagination you have. I really got into the story. In fact, I wanted to be a fly on the wall for future looks into your Secret Garden!

Great write,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A new form of poetry that I was not aware of. I like it and you have done well to capture the ups and downs in life. Thanks for sharing and giving me a new form to try. Best wishes in your continue success.

Seabreeze
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Review of A Rough Justice  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nicely done. So much in your description of justice that many feel. The poem flows and gives us a deep look into life as operated by men. Even though it seems to be somewhat brutal in explanation, it truly is how most of us see the system today.

Seabreeze
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Review of New to this...  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi again, Seabreeze here. I encourage you to do your bio and add to your notebook. That will get your juices flowing. Tell us about yourself, what you like to read, write, hobbies???

Hope to see you around,
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I collected one of your trinkets, thanks. You have such beautiful artwork that I have been enjoying looking at all that you have done. It has been fun. THANKS!
Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, first let me welcome you, Newbie! Hope you have a wonderful experience here.

You have me intrigued and I am wanting more. I assume there will be more. The title?, not complete? Is that because you are not sure where your characters are going to take you? So far, I like the mystery of it, so carry one and bring us more.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this very much. We all need our quiet space and yours sounds wonderful. I have a question? Your second line, is it to read "...of my shoulders" or on my shoulders? In any case, it flows well and gives to reader a picture of your special place.

Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome Newbie
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lot of information here to take in. I have a trinket I have tried to display. Did not work. My trinket has an ID with all capital letters. Is that the number (letters) I used to try and display it??
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
So glad I stopped by again. This is a very well thought out, heart felt poem. It shows that you have made sincere strives toward finding peace and wanted to maintain that peace. You have been able to communicate your hurts and your successess. You have taken the reader down the path that it takes toward that light that you have found.

Many blessings to you,

Seabreeze
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