Well, things are really smoking now and I am enjoying it!
One typo, at a paragraph start, "You're go to..." I believe it is "You've got..."
Now, nice touch, the comment about meeting at a barbeque!
I am sure Sarah is a sharper knife than she lets on and knows a lot more about her past husband's activities.
I like how Rebecca and Michael are starting to like or tolerate each other.
Ocsar and his old man,,,the pot boils with these two. I am almost thinking that he was a recipe with Michael's grandfather in spy work, or maybe they both like the same girl, Sarah! I know, I must wait for more chapters.
Oh, I wanted to say, I don't feel chapters are long as long as they hold my interest, which these are doing well!
I am curious, does your wife read your stories, make comments or does she wait tell it is all complete? Some folks don't like it broken up and prefer reading it when complete.
Great read Fred!