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Review of The Black Sands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Beholden,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and fear. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering who is in Hanson's house. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man is convinced his house is being continually broken into. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on Hanson and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi bmandel7

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of deep anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how your dreams of your future were influences by what was happening in your family. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Its definitely a dramatic, emotional poem. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carly,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the excitement of waiting to open presents on Christmas. I remember well waiting to see what was in those lovely packages under the tree. I love Christmas. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Toska,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. The piece is about our perceptions and the divine can intertwine. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi dogpack,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy and excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your love for your car and God. It is so good that you are so positive in your life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Dear Krista  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Merry IE,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anxiety and guilt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what Todd is trying to write. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a young man who is trying to write a letter to his ex-fiance explaining why is leaving her and marrying her sister. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Awesome  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jacky,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of surprise and curiosity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The story is about a man who must show his nephews what a snowball fight is. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is goin on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Playing Catch  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyn,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about how each move we make influences the structure of time. I don't think about things like this often and was taken with this poem enormously. I read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kit,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about letting yourself feel close to others around you. It reminds me of a person in my life. He doesn't share much from his life and seems to avoid getting emotionally close to others, even those in his own family. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi jackiesmuse,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what Phillip and his friends will do at Crystal Point. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a young man and three friends go on an adventure involving a crystal orb which can open a portal in the universe. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Aching  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi BrokenRing,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of pain and longing. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is yearning for the life they used to have. I am feeling so sorry for the speaker as I read. I am hoping that they get the peace they need in their lives. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of As Far As I Know  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kermit,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Kay and Jay will get home in tine. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman whose overuse of the phrase "Not as far as I know" gets her in trouble with the police. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Bashar,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is forlorn and filled with pain but, still, tinged with hope. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the displacement of refugees and how the separation from friends and family affects them emotionally. I feel so sorry for anyone having to flee their home to seek safety elsewhere. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Marvelous Friend,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about God's love and everything He has given us. I have a deep faith in God and enjoy living surrounded by proof of His existence every day. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ladybug,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your father's alternative holiday to Christmas. The reader in delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer and your family. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Family dinner  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Rabbit Blue,

This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with a vivid description of the house in which these skunks live and are enjoying Christmas. The takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the family and the chapter. They will read on. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters are plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to put each piece is dialogue in its own paragraph. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your writing.

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi bmandel7,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the death of your best friend after an inexplicable ending to your friendship. I am so sorry for your loss and hope you get to put your life back together and heal. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi JustaRandonGuy99,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the piece. I am an avid reader of the Bible and was very interested in your topic. I began to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the confusion in the Quran about the Biblical Gospel. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Merry_Mike,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of shock. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering how Rick will cope with his loss. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a man believes that his son has been killed in a car accident. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Review of Nursery Muscle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi scriptboy,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering what kind of tree Felix and his family will get. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a family gets unexpected help when they buy their Christmas tree and try to get it home. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HollyMerry,

This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my short story. This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Oberon can help the Gingerbread boy and girl find their way home. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a Gingerbread boy and girl seek help from the Puppy Tooth Fairy to find their way home when they get lost. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sean,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a man who has become a boxer and works out his childhood trauma as he fights. I am hoping that the man in this poem will be able to get passed his past. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm in this poem. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of In Slow Motion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi BrokenRing,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about fading memories. We would love to hold onto the memories of our life and the time with our loved ones forever, but this is not always possible. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Eye of Horus  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Zehzeh,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about an all knowing Being who watches over the world and its inhabitants. I am taken by the aggressive nature of the poem, and I am wondering if the Being is a danger to the people of the world. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of BEYOND WORDS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Inspirational,

This is a wonderful first chapter. The chapter opens with a detailed description of the lady Glenn is interested in. The reader is anxious to know more about her and will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters and plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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