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Review of Colorado Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi MikeDK,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is melancholy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has travelled for work but is longing to be back in Georgia. I am hoping that the speaker will be able to return home soon. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Rumors  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Molly,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. You have a point to make, and you intend to make it. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about not giving into people who spread rumors and the untruths that go with them. I have never paid attention to gossip, and I have heard some hateful rumors. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi lucifer,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone if formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the universe and life going by as you watch. There are many times we feel like time is passing us by. I felt like that and began to works to make some of my dreams come true. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works very well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of flower  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi eveandthetree,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a flower who is wilting and knows the frustration its gardener feels. I have had so many unsuccessful plants. It is the nature of gardening, I guess. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of The Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Vanishing Vapor,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the silence and peace of a moonlit night. I love nights when the Moon is out. Our entire yard is lit up, and you can easily see everything around you on nights like this. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi InterGalacticDonkey,

This is a fantastic chapter. The chapter opens with a description of what George wants to share with his grandsons. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on George and the plot. They will begin to read to find out more. This is a wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. You have set up your main characters and plot very well for the reader. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Robin,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the freedom of Americans and how peace should be the ultimate goal of that freedom. I believe in freedom and peace. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Humiliated  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi bibiz,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will leave the town they live in. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who lives in a town of Vampires and hides her true nature. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is one line of dialogue, and it is well done and realistic. Joshua speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Werewolf,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your personal paranormal experiences. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of The Skid-Mark Kid  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Winchester,

This is a fantastic piece. The tone is filled with acceptance. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what problem Skid-Mark has that keeps him excluded. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a young man learns, through being always avoided, learns to read people. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The story concentrates on Skid-Mark, and he comes across as a real person. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi domin,

This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens with Nason waiting for his true love. The reader is wondering why they were separated. They will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all way into the chapter. The reader is completely focused on the beginning of the relationship between Nason and Milo. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)In a few places you have neglected to double space between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.

The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kiptoo,

This is a fantastic article. The title is both direct and enigmatic at the same time. The reader knows they will be learning about something good for their body but not what. They will begin to read right away to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the article. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. Anyone who wants to take care of their body in a natural way will read to the last word. You have written about the curative properties, and the making of, celery and onion broth. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Your Kisses  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Drake,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with love and sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has lost someone they love but will never stop loving the person they lost. I am attempting to repair two relationships in my life, and I know I will always love these people. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Daddy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi KS23,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about a boy who questions his father about why poetry is so special. I remember when I began writing poetry. I was fascinated with it at first. Then, I realized I like prose best. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Mount Mansfield  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lou,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with melancholy and filled with love. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone remembering a very enjoyable time with someone they love. We would love to imprint all the times we spend with those we love on our brains forever. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Love for poetry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Punji,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is melancholy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a poet who wants to be the essence of poetry itself. I love to write but I wonder what it would be like to lose myself in my writing to this degree. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who holds onto their dreams and desires no matter what others think. I wish I had done this when I was younger. I would, probably, be in New York now writing books and visiting art museums. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi GoddessOfTheSun,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sorrow. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, someone can't get over the sudden death of a loved one. The death of a loved one is hard to get passed, and, sometimes, we do not manage to do it at all. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi nexth,

This is a fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. This is a wide ranging issue, and this article will be of interest to anyone who comes across it. I have to keep bottled water in my fridge as opposed to drinking the town water, and I anxiously started to read to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about the water shortage problem which plagues much of our planet. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jeffhans,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written to a business offering your services for historical time research and testing. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Incurable Romantic,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. The reader knows they will be reading about the death of a loved one but not much else. They will read on to find out. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the death of your beloved wife and the time you two got to spend together. You marriage seems like such a happy one that endured a large hurdle. Lasting love like that is a gift to be cherished. I am sorry for your loss. I loved this piece. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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Review of Charon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Shika/Noah,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the Ferryman who shuttles souls across the River Styx to their eternal fate. The reader is fascinated with the look they get at this figure and his opinion of the job he does. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Villanelle poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Searing Silence  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Star,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who would love to shed their anger forever. I would love to not feel anger, even though I have found constructive ways to deal with it. Anger serves no purpose. It just causes conflicts. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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Review of Nothing At All  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi TheNoMonster,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker's wish will be granted even though it is not for him. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a man worries that a wish he made to a genie will not be granted because it involves the mother of his friend and not him specifically. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point view and tense. Great job.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi bluemonkeyslippers,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with confusion, suspicion and revulsion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what has taken the kids and why. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a group of children has gone missing and two investigators try to find out what has happened to them. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.

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