|Hello! I found your poem on the plug page and I thought I would give it a read. First let me say that my review is intended to be helpful and encouraging. If I offend you in any way, please do not hesitate to let me know. I hope that you accept my review in the spirit it is given.
I love poetry because it is very subjective and can be interpreted in different ways by different people, without changing a single line or word of the poem. I can read a poem one day and read it another day and get two different meanings from it ...or find something new in it. Good poetry always leaves something behind for it's readers to chew on long after they have read the piece; whether it's a feeling, a thought, an image or an idea. Your poem did that for me. The over all feeling I got from your piece is one of gratitude, of inspiration, of admiration, of love and thankfulness. After reading...I felt like I was in a meadow, basking in an evening sun of warm peaceful golden rays. I loved your poem. I thought it was written well. I thought the indirect imagery you project with your word choices were fantastic. What I love most about your poem is the feeling I get when I read it...the imagery that is emitted is very vibrant...allowing not just images to be seen...but also felt. I can't begin to pick a favorite stanza because they all fit so well together. The flow of this piece is very natural and so easy to follow and maintain. Very nice job with this piece.
I didn't see anything that I thought needed a second look. I thought your piece was a very nice, inspiring, and polished read. Did I say I liked your piece?
This concludes my review. Thank you so much for allowing me the pleasure of reading and reviewing your work. I enjoyed the experience. I hope my review was helpful and encouraging. I wish you continued success with your reading and in life. Write on, read on, rate on! Taryn