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This entry was fun to read and I had to smile at the wrong assumptions! 
Wow! The title to this poem was intriguing! What a great word. Thanks for the note on it's meaning. 
I had so much fun reading this poem and had a good laugh! The details are so clear and show well the meaning of "spuddle". Black toast and not turning the coffee on shows how out of sorts the poet was. I had to laugh at the end.... even though I don't like coffee. I got the frustration of the situation. 
It was a pleasure to read the poem aloud with its clear rhyme and easy rhythm. You might put quote marks around the words the child speaks. 
Awesome piece for a coffee addict!
I find the words are interesting especially the addition of places to have coffee. The title is appealing too though I was unsure that places would be classed paraphenalia. LOL Yet it covers everything.
You might expand your introduction adding your rationale for the topic and maybe some colour or emoticons just for fun and aesthetics. I had fun solving this puzzle. Thanks for sharing this entertaining item.
Adding the story master and story mistress as words were interesting choices for the topic. I might have added Lilly to the list too as she is the coffee addict! LOL The word "cream" might be a topical word to add as some folks like cream in coffee.
It is interesting that you begin with the question before you notice the holes. Was the question about telling the seller about the flaws?
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That owl is sweet!
I am there. Excellent poem. Write on!
I enjoy dragon stories and I have seen the first movie about Toothless, though it was some time ago. The story captures Toothless and the twin's personalities in this fanfiction piece.
The first paragraph sets the scene and I could imagine Toothless lazing. I wondered if the comment about Barf and Belch were Toothless's or the narrator.
You missed a quotation mark at the start of What do you think, Sis?” 
Happy days 
Wow! Your personal heartfelt expression really engaged me and I had to keep reading. I enjoyed learning a bit more about your amazing self too.
I totally related to your experience about the technical aspects. Bitem? Ahhh! I too found mentors who were so patient with my questions. Truly you described the essence of WDC as inspirational with a world family vibe, supportive and inclusive. No wonder we get addicted. So much to do, learn and share. A loving home.
The piece was coherently written and easy to follow as you share the benefits you have received from the site. I agree with your ideas. I never thought of the benefit to the brain and yep being actively engaged and learning does that. Excellent point!
It is wonderful to pay tribute here to some of yor mentors. We all need to know we are appreciated.
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Wow! I can really hear the voice of Arwen here as she regales the details of her being and her love for Aragorn as he sees him off on his journey. You capture her sadness that she may not go and may not see him again. The last line is sorrowful as I imagine her having no more sight as she was bid to leave the land as well. The voice is potent in its emotion.
It has a Tolkien flair and the use of elvish language is effective and fun! Thanks for the little translation too! 
Hi Buddhangela! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! 
I so enjoy limericks and find them a challenge, especially the comical tone of them! So I was happy to see this one. I also love fairies so the topic was appealing. 
A little thought: you could say "our Erin" and then in the last line use "our family" as if one of the family was telling the tale. It would give that extra syllable in line one. I sometimes find that first line tough too.
Ending with "I do" seems to settle the query! Good job! Thanks for sharing your gift.
I could hear the rhythm and cadence of the Christmas Story you parodied. Good job!
This was hilarious and full of clear images that had me giggling. Im liked the description of the two dogs and their antics. I laughed when the mouse came down the chimney landing on his butt! LOL I could just imagine the dogs climbing the tree and its outcome. Perfect!
The poem flowed fairly well as I read aloud with a few glitchy places. It was so fun and enjoyable they slip by.
Thanks for sharing this comical epic type Christmas tale! I was highly entertained. 
It is really sad to think fairies can annoy folks. 
You had me hoping more would remember the magical beings. I agree with their mission to sparkle and shine! 
I liked your tribute to the fay and it is a challenge to tell a story in a poem form so good for you for sharing this bit of magic.
I found your wonderful stash of poetry and had to jump in to read! You have a unique voice. I could really feel the whole aura of atmosphere as Jane Eyre wanders to moor. You have captured her vividly. I felt the depth of her feeling of loss.
Word choice is thematic and the tone and language reflects the time and place of the poem theme. So many awesome lines like : "Beneath the wind’s banshee keen." kept me reading. You have a gift!
Thanks for entering the rabbit hole and stretching your skills to new heights! 
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You revealed your main character Sid so vividly with his actions and dialogue that showed his emotions. The situation felt realistic. The comment about the Queen really nailed his thinking even while he will eventually realize the truth.
His desperation to get the perfect ring was so well shown in all the ways he tried to raise money and met blocks at every turn. I can imagine his frustration. He knew she would not mind not getting such an expensive item and I wish he had stuck with that. The twist here was unexpected and dark. Wow!
The story and plot flowed in a coherent manner with lots of descriptive detail and active verbs to keep the drama moving. The mix of dialogue and narrative was effective and the historical ring was an original idea, perfect for a gift.