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I look for a good hook at the beginning and like stories that "hit the ground running". Good plots with a theme, strong characters with an emotional impact, moving dialogue, sensory descriptions, clear communication and words with a purpose are strong points of a good story.
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knowing a good story when I read one. I like to read as much as I like to write, maybe more. I will let you know when a sentence just does not make sense to me, and I will try to give you my opinion on how to make it better.
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Review of Pain Pain go Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Hummmingbird,

All ten of these suggestions to relieve pain are super effective. I especially use the "music" (dance a little and by yourself is fine) and the "hobbies". It is amazing how quickly I can zone out and forget everything else when I paint or draw.

The one I find most difficult is the water...but I'm working on it.

Thanks so much for posting this, and I hope you are having a good day!

Hugs from Connie
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Good Afternoon,

This story has a most appropriate title. And the Universe must have had a hand in the reply, and it was appropriate, too. It's funny how we are surprised when things work out just as they should.

Good writing in this and thanks for sharing.

Connie
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Review of Survival  Open in new Window.
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Hello,

I love this...exactly what a fish and person would discuss after such a major mishap...but I love cats, too.

Fred definitely needs a friend and maybe the cat does, too!

Thanks for the large print for these old eyes. I thoroughly enjoyed your story...could be a children's book. Good luck with your writing and please keep sharing.

Connie
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Good Afternoon,

What a wonderful thing to do! I appreciate all the time this list must have taken. I have checked out the Lennon site, a little, and promise to make my way down the list eventually, some speak to me more than others, especially the animal sites as I don't eat meat (12 years now).

Thanks for making this so available and please keep writing and sharing your work.

Connie
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Review of Have No Fear  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,

And Happy New Year!

Your poem spoke to me and I think that is what most poets intend, no further words necessary.

My inner thoughts tell me I'm failing a lot of the time, but then I read somewhere that we learn from our mistakes so I go on...failing or not...with new intelligence.

I like that your poem implies that heroes do not succeed at first try but persevere. And that your poem ends with encouragement for others. Good message and good writing. Thanks for sharing.

Connie
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Hi Intuey,

These old eyes thank you for the larger font! And white space!

I think this is a subject that only has personal answers although there are many books on the subject. You have shared your personal answers and clearly empathy and belief in God are utmost to you, and obviously have led to your happiness or at least a degree of peace.

I try to live each day so that I'm not ashamed or regret anything I have done...although thoughts have a way of niggling in sometimes. We are human after all...but it's the best I can do.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on a difficult subject. Good writing, good presentation.

Connie
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Hi Fyn,

Oh my goodness, you had me at youth dew (must I say my perfume of younger years). And yes, smells certainly bring back memories of people we knew long ago...and some not so long ago.

I am like this poem...when I see or smell or hear something that brings back a memory, I have no hesitation about letting the person know. Some would think it forward, but I can't help myself.

And so your poem resonated with me and I wanted to let you know. Thanks so much for sharing.

Connie
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Hi Jackiesmuse,

The first impression I got after reading this was contentment. The person seems content with his job, his time of life, and his surroundings. Although he has opinions of the younger crowd, they don't seem upsetting, just opinions. And I say "he", but of course it could be a "she".

Good clear writing and maybe something we all need to be a little more of...content, at least some of the time. A big smile goes along with that.

Connie
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Review of The Tear  Open in new Window.
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Good Morning,

This is a heart-wrenching story of what may take place when the spirit of a mother visits a living daughter. Happily, both were at peace with each other and the visit was good. You may want to edit "alright" with all right for any publication. I liked the nice touch at the end, the physical tear, to leave the reader with a sense of wonder.

Thanks for sharing the short story.

Connie
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Review of Floridian Evil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Morning,

I live in Florida and feel your pain, and a little anger, in this poem. Yes, many northern transplants brag about their home States, but I think this is natural and gets a little worse with age (taking up for myself here). And as you say in your well-written poem, where would we be without them? Cute use of word play!

Thanks for sharing your writing.

Connie
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Hello webwitch,

It sounds like these parents were very proud of their heritage, but also gave great thought to the well-being of their children, not wanting to impose a language that might confuse.

You turned a "testy" situation into a chuckle which, I'm sure, was not the case in reality. As you say in your poem, we would do well to forget the bad memories and try to have a sense of humor for the rest.

I enjoyed reading this short story which seemed well-written and without any grammatical or punctuation errors. Thanks for the smooth read and please keep writing.

Connie
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Review of Chromium  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Amethyst Angel,

If only things went as smoothly! I loved this short story seeming so close to the real thing. Your writing is excellent...I couldn't find one thing to correct. Except the length, I could have read more, but you probably had a word count limit. The last line was the best. I chuckled, too.

Thanks so much for sharing this and please keep on writing.
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Hello,

I too love to read, maybe more than to write. And the complete Harry Potter set resides on one of my bookshelves as well. You give just enough of a hint of Harry's life to make him sound interesting, and the uses you give of some of his free time seem logical to me.

I have been retired for several years like you and have many free hours to read. I never tire of it. Thanks for sharing your writing and for making me remember how enjoyable reading Harry was.

Connie
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Hi AmyJo,

Your poem has put me into Thanksgiving mode...and yes, Christmas shopping soon to follow. You describe the scene perfectly, and thanks for all the symbols, a thousand words, right?

Although I'm getting up there in age, shopping is one thing I am tech savvy in. I agree wholeheartedly with less stress. I liked your rhythm and rhyme and the poetic story you tell. Thanks for sharing your writing.

Connie
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Review of Homesick  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Morning,

Your poem took me back and made me homesick. But, then, I began to think it's about the people we have lost, so many that not even "home" would be the same. You do a great job of leading me down that path with the urge to not take the path we are on for granted.

Thanks for sharing words that touched my heart.

Connie
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Review of Learning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jacky,

I give Janice a lot of credit since she's only 7! She's mindful of the squeaks and the light...but forgets that her mom may be sneaky, too. Yes, she has a lot to learn to be a spy...circus performer, too, although climbing up onto a chair may be a start.

Cute story. Thanks for sharing.

Connie
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Review of Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good Evening,

I cannot imagine anyone who does not enjoy the colors of fall, and your short essay brings that color front and center. Here in north Florida, we have a limited palette, but I am originally from Delaware and remember the brilliancy of sugar maples in particular. Even barren trees were and are as interesting to me as a full-fledged palette.

Your contrast of the red against gray of your neighbor's house made me think of an autumn greeting card I once sent to someone. The changing of the colors and the activities that go along with it bring back many memories of years gone by.

Thanks for sharing your writing and your definition of autumn with me.

Connie in Gainesville, Fl.
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Hi Kare,

I absolutely love this. It could be a children's book...easily...with pictures!!! It gave me such a wonderful feeling and so many possibilities!!

Okay, sorry for all the exclamation points, but I really liked it. And thanks for the info at the end. I'm looking that up on Google maps.

Please keep writing and keep sharing.

Your friend,
Connie
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Hi Ned,

I found your story on the read and review page. It was well-written and easy to read.

Although not a new concept, your tale made my heart sing for a little boy who needed friends and found them. When I was little, most of my fairy tales came from the book of the brothers Grimm and did not lend themselves to happy endings. So I was pleased with your ending.

I enjoyed reading your story and hope you continue to write and share.

Your WDC reviewer,
Connie
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Review of Dreamer  Open in new Window.
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Hello Beholden,

Congrats on your win! I easily read through your well-written story. It had a steady pace, flowed well and was deserving of the prize! The dialogue seemed easy and natural, and you kept close to the quotation prompt.

Thanks for sharing your writing and please continue.

Connie
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Review of Scrabble beats me  Open in new Window.
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Hello,

I love Scrabble! And I play online with a computer. Many many kudos to your daughter for liking this game. She may become a writer like you!

Your story is well-written with plenty of white space for my tired old eyes. And you have just the right amount of conversation to show and tell. Your supper deal added interest to the plot while showing some character points as well. You were trying to lower your risk. Good for you.

Thanks for sharing this personal story (true or not) and please "keep on writing."

Connie
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Review of Stubborn Old Boy  Open in new Window.
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Hi Sonali,

It is amazing how the mind can bend things to suit what the body needs. Grandpa was missing Grandma!

You tell a great story including plot, character, and theme. The message comes across loud and clear. And the dialogue is just right.

Thanks for sharing!!!

Connie
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Hello,

Yes, pets are family, and their loss is long-lasting.

I liked reading your good memories of Duke and am sorry for your loss. Pets know who to love and we have to return that love, as simple as that.

And I think there is always one that we love best. Mine was Mopsy, a kitty who did things her own way.

Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

Connie
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Review of TRUE FRIENDS  Open in new Window.
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Hello Naomi,

As a thank you for your review of me, I am reviewing you.

I can tell that this is a heartfelt essay and one with special meaning for you. Your words ring true with thoughtfulness and sincerity.

I especially like your stance on honesty in a friendship. I place a great value on honesty in all aspects of my life and if I would need to list one thing most important to a friendship, it would be honesty.

Thanks for sharing your writing.

Connie
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Review of The Last Blaze  Open in new Window.
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Hi Spidey,

What a cute story and I hope you won something with it. Once a firefighter, always a firefighter. It reminds me of my grandson-in-law, who is one. And his Dad was, too. He probably felt just like this at his retirement...but, hopefully, did not have the same mishap.

You tell the story well, revealing the camaraderie of the group and the loss of a loved structure in one's life. Thanks for sharing.

Connie
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