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I found this in the Read and Review section. I like this poem it makes me feel quiet too. The only thing I see is in the next-to-last line the first "in" sounds like it should be "is". I do not critique poetry because I do not understand its technicalities. However, I do like to say what I like about it. She seems happy with her present circumstances and that is a rare thing.
I like this poem, kind of makes me feel sad, the house seems lonely. I've always wanted to visit a fishing village with all the boats. I do not critique poetry because I do not understand the technicalities of writing poetry. I like to read it and comment on how it makes me feel.
This is very well written and very true. It does seem that, at times, we allow one thing to overshadow everything else. We forget that God is in control and will take care of all concerns. IN HIS TiME, NOT OURS!
The first poem I ever read about the flu! However a very good one. I hope you are well now and feeling good.
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