Overall Impressions:
This was a very fun and educational piece to read. I really enjoyed reading about how different cultures celebrate Halloween. I believe hispanic people leave food out for their deceased relatives to honor them on Halloween. I learned that in Spanish class.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this educational piece on the history of Halloween. Well done! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Thank you for these great and clever ideas for Halloween. I never thought plastic shopping bags could pass as ghosts. I also like the idea for the cats and spiders. These are definately cheap and money saving ways for any family to have a great Halloween!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors. I have to correct you on just one thing; I think you meant to say, "Home Depot" not "Hope Depot". Other than that I didn't find anything.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing these great Halloween ideas! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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This is such a great poem! I feel the same way that you do. I always think, "What if......." And how I wish I could go back to my high school and college years to reapply myself instead of wasting so much of my time doing things that didn't matter. I regret a lot of that. But unfortunately, I can't go back to those years, although, I wish that I could.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece. It was well-written.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
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Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this poem! Write on!
Ciao,
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Another beautiful work of poetry that you've written! This kind of reminds me of the first romance poem that I wrote about one of my former boyfriends. It's nice to treasure those innocent moments and keep them close to your heart for an eternity.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this piece. You filled this with so many good emotions.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and rhyme of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Well done and keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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This is so beautiful! I enjoyed reading this romantic fantasy. This is so well-written and well put together. You did an excellent job.
Imagery:
Good job on the imagery and details of this piece.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow of this piece. You did nicely on rhyming the verses together. They flowed so smoothly together.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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You have written a very powerful piece here. I have written a couple poems myself on a failed relationship. It's heartbreaking and difficult to accept. This was very heartwrenching for me to read.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this piece. It was well-written and easy to read through.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and emotional piece. Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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This was really cute! I love Halloween. Oh to be a child again! This brings back memories of when my grandpa would take me and my three sisters out trick-or-treating.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this piece. The pictures really popped into my mind as I read this.
Flow/Form:
Nice work on the flow of this piece. The line at the end threw me off a little, but it made sense as I re-read it. It just didn't follow the same patterns as the other stanzas, but that's alright. It was still cute.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
Maybe you could add some orange with the black to make the poem look more festive? This was only my suggestion, you don't have to change anything if you don't want.
Closing Remarks:
This poem is sure to put a smile on adults and children alike. Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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I have had my fair share of weird and far-out dreams before, lol. This put a lot of vivid pictures in my mind as I read this. It sounds like something out of a science fiction flick. You did a nice job on this. This has a nice flow and was easy to read through.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece. Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: This was very clever! I saw a lot of bands in here that I really love and have a lot of their cds in my collection! You did a very nice job on this piece. It's very unique and different than what I am used to reading. I like that a lot.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow of this piece, it was well-written and easy to read.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this cleverly written piece! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is a great poem. I guess this hits home for me because I am missunderstood through a lot of my writing. I like being different and unique. This poem is different and unique. Some of your rhymes are quiet different and unusual, which I like a lot.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery.
Flow/Form:
This piece had a nice flow to it and cleverly written.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this fun and entertaining poem! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: I know a lot of people like this! This is a very cute and fun piece to read! I think that everyone has acted like this at some point in their lives, lol.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and keeping up with the syllable count and rhyme in this piece!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this entertaining poem! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: The things kids do! I have never heard of a color wheel for ordering dairy.......I will have to ask my grandmother about that one, because I wasn't born in the era where milk was delivered to your door.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this funny write! Keep writing.
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: This was written in such a fun way. I know many people like this and I also know that college students are kind of on the lazy side, but then again, I know some non-college student who are more lazy, lol!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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OMG! Really!? I lived in Florida for nearly 3 years, and never knew that we had pythons! I'm glad that I never encountered one of those! Do they really eat alligators? Wow. This poem has been a very educational piece. I am deathly afraid of snakes. I was cornered by a rattlesnake when I was eight years old. I lived in Michigan my entire life and never knew that we had rattlesnakes, until that one day, lol. I was actually brave enough to leap over it without getting bit. I did my fair share of screaming and crying of course, because I am a girl, lol. I think this is a great piece to be showcased, just in time for Halloween! It was scary enough.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery in this piece.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow. This is a well-written piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this educational piece. Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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What a unique and romantic acrostic poem! I had no idea that the pizza in Italy was so different from American pizza! Thank you for the education!
Imagery:
Nice use of imagery in this piece!
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful and great read! I write as a release for all of my daily stressors. It's good for a person to get everything out.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece. It had a very smooth and easy flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece! Write on!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
You have written a very beautiful and touching piece about your parents. I know all too well what it's like to lose a parent. My dad was taken away from me last October. He was only 49 years old. It was sudden and tragic. It's something that you never get over, and it haunts you for the rest of your life. Sometimes all it takes for me is a simple memory, and then the waterworks start. It just hits you all of the sudden. I hope that you have found some comfort from writing this piece.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this piece. It was well written and read smoothly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this. Great job!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: You poor thing! Such a rollercoaster of a ride! I don't know that feeling yet of empty-nest syndrome. I have to have children first to worry about that, lol. I don't have children, but I have two cats. I think getting a pet is a great substitute for any situation like this. Whether if it's because your children have left the house or you live by yourself.
Emotional Impact:
I may not know what this feeling is, but speaking from instinct, I would probably be very sad.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this emotional piece with WDC! Good job!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
I believe hispanic people leave food out for their deceased relatives to honor them on Halloween. 
Ciao,
It kind of reminds me of how my grandparents used to bicker, only they were alive, lol!
I also like the idea for the cats and spiders. These are definately cheap and money saving ways for any family to have a great Halloween! 
I'm glad that I never encountered one of those! Do they really eat alligators? Wow. This poem has been a very educational piece. I am deathly afraid of snakes. I was cornered by a rattlesnake when I was eight years old. I lived in Michigan my entire life and never knew that we had rattlesnakes, until that one day, lol. I was actually brave enough to leap over it without getting bit. I did my fair share of screaming and crying of course, because I am a girl, lol. I think this is a great piece to be showcased, just in time for Halloween! 
He was only 49 years old. It was sudden and tragic. It's something that you never get over, and it haunts you for the rest of your life. Sometimes all it takes for me is a simple memory, and then the waterworks start. It just hits you all of the sudden. I hope that you have found some comfort from writing this piece.
I think getting a pet is a great substitute for any situation like this. Whether if it's because your children have left the house or you live by yourself.