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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Van Helsing is one of my favorite legends. You did a great job on this prologue. I can't wait to see the next installment!

*Note* Plot Comments:
Well done on the plot. It flowed smoothly.

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the imagery of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I did spot one spelling error; towards the end you have misspelled "lightning" other than that, I didn't find any other errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! *Smile*

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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Ooooh! I love this one! Monet's Water Lily painting is one of my favorite works of art! You did a great job depicting the painting in this poem!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details. Very beautiful!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem! Write on!

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Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful and romantic piece of poetry that you have written! Nice work!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of this piece!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and Ekphrastic form!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of venus de milo  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very fun read. I really enjoyed reading this piece! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Great description and imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a well-written piece and brilliant too. Good job! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of this poem. You put a lot of effort and work into this.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
The only suggestion that I have is to put a link to the Ekphrastic form at the bottom of the poem. Other than that, I have nothing to suggest. *Wink*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great poem! Write On!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Gloriana  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a well written and very detailed piece that you have written!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and description of this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form. This is the first time I have ever heard of the Ekphrastic poetry form. You seem to have done a great job with the form. You might want to include a link at the bottom of your poem so other readers can read up on the form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing! *Smile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Just Hold Me Now  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is so beautiful and so romantic! *Delight* You did a great job with this.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this endearing piece! Write on!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Never forget...  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Wow. I never saw anything like this before. You did a great job with forming this poem. Very impressive!

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This is a very sad piece. Especially the ending.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job with the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece. Well done.

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP"  & "The Angel Army" ! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* This was so funny! I wasn't much of a phone person when I was a teenager. I hated the phone, lol! I remember after graduating high school and moving out, then trying to call my dad and the phone would be busy every time. After trying a million times getting through, I would get a hold of him and I would ask him who was hogging the phone, and it was none other than my baby sister, Molly. Talk about a chatter box!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and rhythm of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for putting a smile on my face! Write on!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Loneliness  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is another great piece that you have written! I can understand the pain that you must be going through.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of For They Fear  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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by Maryann - House Martell
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
As always, you write the most beautiful poems! I wish I could belt them out as much as you do! *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details in this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great poem! Write on! *Bigsmile*


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Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
A wonderful tribute to the WDC Community! You did a wonderful job!

*Note* Imagery:
Good job with the imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this piece. It read quite smoothly!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this tribute to writing.com! Write On! *Delight*


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Review of You Can Love  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful and romantic piece! *Delight* I really enjoyed reading this. It reminded me of one of those old romance stories.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this poem.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical errors. However, I noticed that there is an extra space between the "Y" and "O" in the title. *Smile* Other than that, nothing else I can see that needs to be fixed.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem! Write On!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Another beautiful segment to this story! Do you plan to add to this? *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Nice job on the imagey and descriptions!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form, as well as the rhyming.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Write On! *Bigsmile*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Another great section to this story. I love how you write these. They are like novel chapters, but in poetic form! *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Once again, well done on the imager and details of this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing these wonderful stories! *Bigsmile*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Once again, you continue to do a great job with this! *Smile* I really enjoy reading this.

*Note* Imagery:
Good job on the details and imagery!

*Note* Flow/Form:
This has smooth flow and is well written.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing your wonderful work! Write On!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Good job on this continuation of this story! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent flow and rhyme scheme.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Write on!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Another great segment to this saga. You did an excellent job! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Once again, great job on the imagery! I could picture every action in my mind.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing! *Heart*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Once again you are doing a wonderful job with this story! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Good job on the imagery and details. Your description of the eggs and meat made my mouth water, lol! *Laugh*

*Note* Flow/Form:
This was well-written and flowed smoothly.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you again for another great read! Write On!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP"  & "The Angel Army" 


*Note*Overall Impressions:
You certainly know how to grab a readers attention wanting to read more. *Wink* Once again you have done a great job.

*Note* Plot Comments:
Your writings have a smooth and steady plot, and continuation in each section.

*Note* Character Comments:
I love the names of the characters...very medieval!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow and rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
"Betwixt and between the lines are drawn
Fading dreams at the break of dawn
When thee learn to use thy wings
Ye will discover many things."

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Great job, write on! *Heart*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
Another beautiful poem! I love the way you write! *Heart* I also love the names of the characters in these as well. *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Again, you give wonderful imagery and lovely details.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great flow and good rhythm.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on another terrific segment to this story! *Bigsmile* I can't wait to read more!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a beautiful and well-told story. I love reading about medieval type stories.

*Note* Imagery:
You provided wonderful imagery and beautiful descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
This prose flowed smoothly and was easy to read.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing your interesting and lovely writing! Great job! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Not the First  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a well-written poem. I have to agree with you on this subject. They hold Sarah with such high esteem, but the regular everyday female doesn't get this kind of praise and celebrity do they? Doesn't seem fair to me. *Pthb*

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this poem. You did a great job.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Write On! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of A Wise Lesson  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* ROFL! This really funny! Cute too! I really enjoyed reading this! This is definately a different version of King Solomon, lol!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Lost  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is so beautiful. You said a lot in such a short form of poetry. You did an excellent job! *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imager and details of this poem.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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