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Encouraging but helpful. Most of the review will be about how good/what i liked about your writing, but i will point out flaws if i see any! :)
I'm good at...
Short Stories
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Sports, Romance
Least Favorite Genres
Murder Mysteries
I will not review...
I will review pretty much anything
Public Reviews
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Review of Just A Baby  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
awwww this was a very sweet little poem. I to have written songs and poems about growing up, but they never felt as profound as this poem. "
She’s just a baby
Young to the world
Unaware of the ways of men
Innocent to the point of naïve" these were my favorite lines for several reasons. first, those were the lines that drew me into the poem. and secondly, these are my favorite lines because they are innocent, just like a little baby is.
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Review of I am Done Crying  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
I started crying when I read this because this is the way I feel. I struggle with depression and anxiety and reading this made me feel strong. I will NOT cave into these bad feelings, I will NOT go down without a fight. please keep writing poems like these, I love them a lot.

"
I am still healing

I won't stop feeling

You will not make me feel this way

That is the last thing I will say"

those are my favorite lines


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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
I usually don't read things like this, but I liked it every much. you shared your experience very well. it makes me want to go visit someday because I have not been nor have I heard of this place before. I would, however, like it if you'd space out your paragraphs a little more. it was getting hard to read. :)
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Review of Heretic  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this poem was a little confusing, but I liked it all the same. you used some good word choices which I always like to see. even though my favorite type of poems are ones that are short and sweet, I happened to like yours.

"I call them. Hey!
Shut my ear. What?
Don't disturb. Ha?
Stop. Yes Yes."

this was my favorite line. keep up the good work
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: at first I thought it was a song because I've been writing too many songs lately, so please forgive me!


What I liked *Delight* : a sad poem about...........growing up? it seemed to me like a poem about growing up. I'm sure this isn't what you had in mind, but that was what I always thought. the words you used went along great with the poem. I fully enjoyed myself.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing, you're good for it.
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Review of Dessert  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: a visit to the denist sounds normal! but it ended up being anything but


What I liked *Delight* : the last lines were my favorite. she just seems so casual about it. nicely done!


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing, you are good for it
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Review of Her Revelation  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: when I first read this poem, I thought it was going to be a sweet little love poem. this was not to be the case!


What I liked *Delight* : I liked how you fooled your readers with your first lines of "oh they are going to stay together forever" and then it turned into a poem about revenge.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : I really liked this poem. and I really liked the ending when you turn the poem into the fact that she likes women. nice job with that. that's why I gave you five stars.
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: short and sweet!


What I liked *Delight* : i love this for several reasons. First of all, it's a very sweet thing to say in a card after losing a loved one. kudos to you for that! secondly, it makes me smile to know that she has a great friend like you! i wish someone had said this to me after my grandma died, but no one did.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep upthese short and sweet poems. I could always use a littl cry. :)
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Review of Sweet Cave  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: a short but good story.


What I liked *Delight* : well, to me it was mroe than jsut a "cave" you were writing about. To me, it felt like it was a medifor for something. Depression maybe. And i wish i could say I'm out of this cave, but i go in and out all the time.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : thanks for sharing this with me!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: dreams come true! :D


What I liked *Delight* : i love this song (poem?) all my life i have struggled with my dreams, but i'm getting braver by the day. :)

I think these were my favorite lines.

"You've found freedom within
from what has left you out
and circulated it
into your universe,
for use at your own discourse.
You've not merely won,
but created a dynasty in positive proportions.
Ingredients are more than hard work"


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : please keep writing. I'm sorry for the short review, I'm not the best reviewer out there. ;) *Heart*
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Review of New Year Dreaming  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: i thought it was going to be a dream about a love life, but i was wrong!


What I liked *Delight* : it turned out to be a funny poem that made me wanna travel the world! i want to travel to all those places now becasue of you!


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writin', I'll keep readin'
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Review of Little Friend  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: the title got me reading more!


What I liked *Delight* : what a sweet sweet little poem. I read it as a song (i've been writing a lot of them these days) but aww that was sweet! i like how simple it is! is this a true poem or not? either way, it's amazing


Suggestions
: change the color. it was a little hard to read!


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing these sweet little poems and i'll keep reading!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: short and sad!


What I liked *Delight* : i liked the simplicity of this poem. i like poems that are simple.


Suggestions
: write some happy poems! ;)


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: is this your grandfather's work or your own? either way, i really like it!


What I liked *Delight* : i like this poem for a few different reasons. It was simple, but the idea behind it seemed....complicated. if this is true, than that means its all the better!

"That he had a letter just last week
Written in the finest Greek."

These two lines were my favorite, because they rymthed!



Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : great job! :D
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Review of Woodland Beast  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*:a short story about a mom recusing her child. I *Heart* it!


What I liked *Delight* : the best thing about this story was how funny it was. And the fact that the "kidnapper" wasn't a person, it was a machine. Wherever you came up with that idea, it was a great one! Amazing job with it.


Suggestions
: i wish it could be longer, it was so interesting!


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep up the good work!
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Review of Crusty the Zombie  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: another zombie poem?!!?! *Pthb*


What I liked *Delight* : i liked this poem because you were creative about it. The idea of a zombie becomeing undead was amusing to me.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : the only reason i marked it down was because of the subject matter :) but keep writing!
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Review of Look!  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: a fairy tail poem! I *Heart* those!!! *Delight*


What I liked *Delight* : it was short and sweet, the way i like poems to be :) When I was little, I believed in fairies and just for a second, one little second reading your poem, i believed in them again :)


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : when i need to believe in something, i'll come back to your poems! thank you!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*:It's a good poem about a marriage falling apart.


What I liked *Delight* : I'm only 18, so I have a long time to think about this, but this poem kinda warned me of what could happen in the future. This poem was sad all the way though, but if you like emotion in the poems, then you did a great job on this! It's so sad, especially the third to last lines.

"How can you unite your life
with one who doesn't recall Vietnam?
Shared memories are like joined breath.
Our tears mingled, a child ablaze with Napalm?"


That was when i got teary eyed


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : if this was based on your own life, I'm sorry :( but great poem!
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Review of The God Complex  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: a very long funny poem :)


What I liked *Delight* : I just wanna say, as a Catholic Christian, I thought I'd be offended by this poem, but instead i found it funny. Especially the first line.

"They come from far and wide to celebrate me.

They smile at me, the men bow and the woman curtsy before me. The children stare in awe."


What a great way to draw people in :)

Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing, i could always use a laugh :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: first of, i wanna say thank you for giving me a different type of poem than i normally read! :D


What I liked *Delight* : well, it was interesting to say the least. I found the idea of you fighting death, telling it that it might take your body but it can never take your sprit. I liked that. I love poems/songs/stories that talk about people fighting the impossible. It gives me hope for my own life.


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep writing, you're good for it! :D :)
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: I love this poem, but my question is, is it about an abusive relationship? Cause that's what it looks like to me. :)


What I liked *Delight* : I love this poem. I love the idea of an "illusion". The speaker thought it would be a fairy tail love story, and it turned out to be the exact opposite. The words you used to describe the illsuion.

"Your eyes pierced me through
There was not much I could do...
You floated in the waves of melody...
Was I the only one who could see?"


These were my favorite lines in the poem. you did great drawing me in with those lines.

Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep it up, you're a great writer!
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Review of I Can Say It...  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: don't take this to personally, but i just want to ask if this poem is about depression. Because to me it was, but i don't wanna say anything if it wasn't. :)


What I liked *Delight* : i like this poem a lot. It had a lot of different emotions in here and i could really feel all of them. I felt sad, angry, and.....yes, depressed in the poem. Good job at bringing the emotions out in me.


Suggestions
: if i could better understand what this poem was about, i'd enjoy it more. But, if you wanted to be mysterious, then you did it quite well!


Final Thoughts*Smile* : great job with this poem! Keep on writing!
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Review of When Awakened  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: awww! First of all: *Inlove* *Inlove* *Inlove*


What I liked *Delight* : Love poems are my favorite type of poem, so i just HAD to read yours! I wrote a song that seemed very similar to this poem you wrote. Anyway, it sounds like your poem is taking about how you had a bad life until the love of your life came along and made you feel beautiful once again. And i love poems or songs or stories that have that in them. It makes my heart smile to see that.


Suggestions
: none!


Final Thoughts*Smile* : overall, an amazing job on this poem. Please keep writing poems like that, I loved it!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: this was a great poem! But i only have one question to ask: is this talking about rape or having sex before marriage?


What I liked *Delight* : Great poem! I liked how-at least to me-you were talking about the troubles going on in our world today. Things like what happen in your poem happen all the time in our world and to me that is really sad. Innocence lost, and never to be given back. It's a very sad thing. But, on the plus side, i found this was a good length poem for the subject you were tackling!


Suggestions
: i felt that you should've made it clear as to what you were talking about. Again, that is just me.


Final Thoughts*Smile* : great poem and good on you for tackling hard subjects. I applaude you for that.
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Review of Them  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI, MY NAME IS IZZY AND I WILL BE REVIEWING YOUR WRITING TODAY! :D

First impressions*BigSmile*: wow wow wow, this is an interesting story. The title, altough it was only a word, drew me in.


What I liked *Delight* : Can I just say, how often do you see vikings and aliens mixed together? That was interesting in itself. Great job on that! But i felt so sad for Erik, knowing he and his son had to keep fighting for their lives. I found that to be really cruel, poor things. :( But i felt happy with that fact that Erik was giving it his all for his son and his family. I love people like that!


Suggestions
: none


Final Thoughts*Smile* : keep on writing interesting stories like that! I hope to read more in the future! Good day to you! :D
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