Hi there Mighty Morgan 
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This is my review for " Miracles..a thirty day experiment" 
General Thoughts:
What an inspirational piece! I hope you find your transformation, and I hope it inspires others. 
Strengths
I love the way this is written. Your writing is clear and concise, yet personal. You do very well in communicating your ideas in a way that is easy to understand and enjoyable to read.
I love this part:
It’s like telling someone that has never seen the color blue, what blue is. You can’t.
This is a well-composed essay with a personal feel to it. You present your ideas very well, but you also put your own voice into it, so it doesn't read like an strict academic essay. Even though you're not certain of the outcome of your "experiment," you are very good at explaining your motives.
I love the message of this, as well. It's a positive thinking type of endeavor, and I wish you luck and happiness with it. 
Grammar/Spelling
(These are suggestions with regard to my understanding of grammar/spelling rules. If I'm mistaken or missing a regional difference in usage, I apologize in advance.)
Is it possible to transform ones life
I believe "ones" needs an apostrophe one's
I posed the question to the universe at large….
“Is it possible to transform ones life in the course of thirty days, in a way that can only be described as a miracle.”
Since you're posing this as a question, you may want to use a question mark at the end instead of a period. 
a life lived by default of beliefs I accumulated through this existence.
For me, I felt an article was needed before the word "default," maybe like this: "a life lived by a default of beliefs" or "a life lived by the default of beliefs."
I am someone willing to go to any lengths to shatter the beliefs of,
I'm not sure if this is exactly an error, maybe more of a judgement call, but I felt a colon could be used instead of a comma at the end of this phrase.
“When the pain out weight the pleasure, change will occur”.
I believe the words "out weight" should be "outweighs" instead.
Title/Rating/Genres:
Your title and intro description made me want to take a look at this piece. It grabs the attention of the reader and it definitely intrigued me. 
You may want to change the rating to ASR since you include the word "heck" which may be considered a mild curse word, and is a substitute for a stronger word. (You can view explanations of the rating system here: "Content Rating System (CRS)" )
Your genres are chosen well. They suit your piece. When I first clicked on the item, I was curious to see how it fit into "Documentary" but after reading, I understand that it fits very well. 
Suggestions
These are just suggestions. Feel free to use them or not. 
For me, these lines felt just a tad weaker than I think they could be:
I’m an artist. I’m a writer. I’m a dreamer that dreams big. I am someone willing to go to any lengths to shatter the beliefs of,
For me, using "I'm" made these very strong statements a little weaker than they could be. Perhaps if you changed the "I'm"s to "I am"s, it would sound stronger to your reader.
My only other suggestion is that you follow up on this during your experiment (which you may have been planning to do already). You could perhaps even consider creating a book item, a journal of your experience through this journey. This item definitely made me want to read more. 
My Rating
4.0 - Great job with this! Your writing is excellent, and I'm intrigued by your proposed experiment. I found a few grammatical errors, but in general this is a good piece. Keep on writing! 
Sincerely,
spidey
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